Eliana
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And better than ever! I don't know if I'm allowed to revive my older poetry thread, but I don't want to since I'm actually editing all my older poems so they look better. So I'm going to start by posting some newer stuff because it's better...XD
Keep in mind, I'm going through a writer's block, so if you don't see anything new from me soon, that's why.
Also, guys, please don't just come in here and say "Oh it was good" XD I like SOME creative criticizm! XD Thanks!
Now, this is a song I wrote a while back, but it's still pretty recent.
Enjoy it peeps, and I may edit it sometime:
The End Is Now
Welcome to the present, the Age of a Nightmare.
Where you're greeted with glares and cigarette lighters.
Our home sweet home, our humble hell.
The government's s***, everything's swell.
Enjoy the gunshots while they last,
Though you better watch out for the broken glass.
Stay up late and watch the news,
More killing, harassing, child abuse…
The End Is Now, you better run,
Before they track you with their guns.
The End Is Now, you better hide,
Before they kill you, before you die.
THE END IS NOW.
Once you enter there's no leaving.
There's no way out, no redeeming.
Why would you go, why would you run?
Don't you love being shunned?
Enjoy the riots before they end…
Though you better be careful, you may end up dead…
The End Is Now, you better run,
Before they track you with their guns.
The End Is Now, you better hide,
Before they kill you, before you die.
THE END IS NOW.
THE END IS NOW.
Keep in mind, I'm going through a writer's block, so if you don't see anything new from me soon, that's why.
Also, guys, please don't just come in here and say "Oh it was good" XD I like SOME creative criticizm! XD Thanks!
Now, this is a song I wrote a while back, but it's still pretty recent.
Enjoy it peeps, and I may edit it sometime:
The End Is Now
Welcome to the present, the Age of a Nightmare.
Where you're greeted with glares and cigarette lighters.
Our home sweet home, our humble hell.
The government's s***, everything's swell.
Enjoy the gunshots while they last,
Though you better watch out for the broken glass.
Stay up late and watch the news,
More killing, harassing, child abuse…
The End Is Now, you better run,
Before they track you with their guns.
The End Is Now, you better hide,
Before they kill you, before you die.
THE END IS NOW.
Once you enter there's no leaving.
There's no way out, no redeeming.
Why would you go, why would you run?
Don't you love being shunned?
Enjoy the riots before they end…
Though you better be careful, you may end up dead…
The End Is Now, you better run,
Before they track you with their guns.
The End Is Now, you better hide,
Before they kill you, before you die.
THE END IS NOW.
THE END IS NOW.
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