Flow of time

[Ranken]

What was the start of all this?
When did the cogs of fate begin to turn?
Perhaps it is impossible to group
that answer no,
From the deep within the flow of time
We loved so many,
But hated much.
we hurt others and we hurt ourselves.
Yet even then we ran like
the wind,
Whilst our laughter echoed
Under cerulean skies.

=]​

 

[deliriouspurple]

pretty good keep up the good work Ranken=]

 

[Pledge]

well pretty good poetry of yours=]

~ecto

 

[Vincent.]

I liked it good work you got there=]

 

[Micro]

Wow Ranken. I never knew you were in to poetry. That poem is pretty good :> I like it. Keep up the good work! :>

 

[Megaera]

hmm..pretty good keep it up gogogo!!

 

[Ranken]

thanks guys I'll be sure to work more of my poetry=]

 

[Revelation]

it good I liked it! good job!

 

[BHwolfgang]

I like it. Is this your first?

I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?

It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?

 

[Tear]

Wow I didn't know you're a poetry writer Ranken, it's pretty good..I think this is a free verse lol

 

[Brownies]

Great poem Ranken! awesome work you got there!

 

[ShadowLeader]

I like it. Is this your first?

I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?

It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?

poems dont have to be classified....but if thats the case it free verse....
but well written....i would say get up the good work but everyone else already said that so....i look forward to reading more of ur poetry..