Forgotten

[XIIIth Legio]

Something I might fully write, never know.

Most worlds have a fairly simply front, then a myraid of complex weaveings of diffrent concepts underneath that. Such is the world of Pokemon. One is the concept of Pokemorphs. Unlike most thought, Pokemorphs is generally a union inbetween Human and Pokemon that is beyond the ken of most.

Here, we look at a few stuble shiftings. Team Rocket's " Project Orgin" created Mewtwo and thus, released him into the world two decades before it's time. Ten years later, a child is born Vincent Kectum to a mysterous father and a kind mother. But clearly, the child is not entirely human.

Infact, He looks like a little humanish Mewtwo.

 

[Acrutheo]

Way too short. You've briefly touched upon this concept of "Pokemorphs", this entirely new concept, and you haven't described it in any detail. Your first post is your chance to hook people in, and yet you've left them thinking, "what?" That's fine to some extent (a la cliffhangers) but you definitely need to expand on this concept and hook people in. Also,

Here, we look at a few stuble shiftings. Team Rocket's " Project Orgin" created Mewtwo and thus, released him into the world two decades before it's time

"it's" should be "its".

 

[XIIIth Legio]

Its more or less meant to be a summery or short introduction.

 

[Astinus]

Summaries are a no go. You actually need the fic before you post a thread in the main forum. Ideas can be discussed in the Lounge, but in the main forum, you actually need a fic part. Prologue, chapter, something.

This is too short to be left on it's own. Sorry, but it's going to have to be closed. Once you actually have the full idea developed, then you can post a thread in the main forum. It also has to be longer than four short paragraphs. This is mentioned in the rules.

Oh, and it's not "Kectum". It's "Ketchum", if you're talking about Ash's son. (Which is what I think, since I had a character by the exact same name that was Ash's son.)

beyond the ken of most.

What is "ken"? o.O

Yeah, there are also a couple of mistakes in this as well. Before you post, make sure that your story is free from simple errors, because this distracts the reader.