Santalune Forest
Oh dear, he's here
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- Third Rock from the Sun
- Seen Sep 25, 2016
Oh boy.
*Deep breath*
I sat on this one for a while. Kept thinking to myself "this is horrible, no one is gonna like this. I need to rewrite this again. This sentence is awkward." But then I realized, it really does suck. But I'm not gonna get better unless I post it somewhere. So enjoy. I'm not entirely sure how to use the rating system, but I think I just need to say that it's got some violence in it. Some character death. Yeah. I'd rate it T. Here goes nothing.
*pushes submit button*
I looked around spastically, my eyes scanning the landscape set out before me. There were all sorts of piles of scrap surrounding me, I appeared to be in the middle of a shipwreck. The air stank of salt water, and this was proven correct as I turned around to find a shoreline, complete with crashing waves. Behind me, an overgrown forest. The sky was pouring, rain tumbling down at alarming speeds.
My canvas bag flew off my shoulder, my arm reaching out to catch it. It was ripped from my grasp by the violent wind, as various items sailed out of the open bag.
I noticed in the sky some sort of bird. It flew about randomly, screeching into the air. I picked my Pokedex off of the ground, pointing it at the bird. The machine flipped open automatically, sensing a Pokemon. The newly surfaced screen flickered on, a low battery symbol flashing on and off in the top right corner, but the machine still scanned.
"Swablu, the Cotton Bird Pokemon. Swablu has light and fluffy wings that are like cottony clouds. This Pokemon is not afraid of people. It lands on the heads of people and sits there like a cotton-fluff hat. This Swablu is male."
The cheery description clashed against my dark surroundings. This couldn't be a Swablu, though. This Pokemon was twice the size of an Altaria, if not more. Flames blazed out of its mouth, lighting the nearby forest on fire. I heard the whisper of something gliding through the air, but spun around too late. Something hit me in the face, and I fell to the sand beneath me, clutching my head. My vision was blurry, and I soon fell unconscious.
"Wally?"
"Wally! Wake up!"
*Deep breath*
I sat on this one for a while. Kept thinking to myself "this is horrible, no one is gonna like this. I need to rewrite this again. This sentence is awkward." But then I realized, it really does suck. But I'm not gonna get better unless I post it somewhere. So enjoy. I'm not entirely sure how to use the rating system, but I think I just need to say that it's got some violence in it. Some character death. Yeah. I'd rate it T. Here goes nothing.
*pushes submit button*
I looked around spastically, my eyes scanning the landscape set out before me. There were all sorts of piles of scrap surrounding me, I appeared to be in the middle of a shipwreck. The air stank of salt water, and this was proven correct as I turned around to find a shoreline, complete with crashing waves. Behind me, an overgrown forest. The sky was pouring, rain tumbling down at alarming speeds.
My canvas bag flew off my shoulder, my arm reaching out to catch it. It was ripped from my grasp by the violent wind, as various items sailed out of the open bag.
I noticed in the sky some sort of bird. It flew about randomly, screeching into the air. I picked my Pokedex off of the ground, pointing it at the bird. The machine flipped open automatically, sensing a Pokemon. The newly surfaced screen flickered on, a low battery symbol flashing on and off in the top right corner, but the machine still scanned.
"Swablu, the Cotton Bird Pokemon. Swablu has light and fluffy wings that are like cottony clouds. This Pokemon is not afraid of people. It lands on the heads of people and sits there like a cotton-fluff hat. This Swablu is male."
The cheery description clashed against my dark surroundings. This couldn't be a Swablu, though. This Pokemon was twice the size of an Altaria, if not more. Flames blazed out of its mouth, lighting the nearby forest on fire. I heard the whisper of something gliding through the air, but spun around too late. Something hit me in the face, and I fell to the sand beneath me, clutching my head. My vision was blurry, and I soon fell unconscious.
"Wally?"
"Wally! Wake up!"
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