Autistic Lucario
Life is too short not to enjoy
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I'm currently writing a fanfiction that is different from most. It's about character rather than combat. The main character is a Lucario named Zeke. He wanders into a forest and into a portal, which takes him to another world. A completely different world (although not alien), where there are people there who have never even heard of Pokemon.
Zeke has to think rather than fight his way out of 10 challenges, and that's the sweet irony of it, since he's a fighting pokemon. He meets other Pokemon along the way who have ended up in that world too. It's basically like a really big adventure with puzzles along the way (some of them dangerous).
Currently, I'm on my 5th chapter (although I've uploaded 4). Zeke is in his first challenge, The Test of Courage.
I need feedback on the fanfiction, maybe point out anything I could improve in the future, typo-spotters would help.
I'm planning on making a really long fanfiction, and I've been getting really good reviews so far.
Zeke has to think rather than fight his way out of 10 challenges, and that's the sweet irony of it, since he's a fighting pokemon. He meets other Pokemon along the way who have ended up in that world too. It's basically like a really big adventure with puzzles along the way (some of them dangerous).
Currently, I'm on my 5th chapter (although I've uploaded 4). Zeke is in his first challenge, The Test of Courage.
I need feedback on the fanfiction, maybe point out anything I could improve in the future, typo-spotters would help.
I'm planning on making a really long fanfiction, and I've been getting really good reviews so far.