Ok, first of all, ur not dementia, so u can't say I'm rejected until she decides, and two, that sample WAS NOT TO SHORT! I believe that that sample had a great amount of depth, and it could also TOTALLY happen in the poke world. I did take ur ideas and changed it around a bit, here it is.
Actually, if you took the time to read the entire first post, JNathan has as much authority in this RP as I do, because he's also a GM in it.
That being said, you need A LOT of improvement. I know we might sound harsh or demanding, but that's only because we want a good RP. If you really wanna improve, I suggest you reffer to the links Nathan so kindly suggested you to check and also to some of the other Sign Ups in the thread here.
I could sit here all night and nitpick at every omission of a capital letter in the beginning of your sentences and of names such as "Krabby" and "Arbok" for example.
And your sample DOES lack any kind of depth. It sounds more like "I went to the market and bought stuff then came home and put everything in the fridge." to me than something written artistically, something with both description and maybe some proper dialogue, something with a meaning.
The purpose of a Sign-Up and especially of the RP Sample in a SU, is to show what you can do. Creating a proper character and a decent RP sample shows us that you're serious about this and that you CAN role play.
You really didn't even seem to have read the entire first post and you seem to refuse to read all the guides you were linked to. Your character's appearance was hastily written in two sentences that don't say much, your character's personality is non-existant. You just listed some personality traits as if I should be able to determine what kind of character yours is.
Even the shortest sign up in this RP has AT LEAST 1 paragraph for each of the fields of the SU and AT LEAST 2-3 paragraphs in their sample.
So, as I said before, you still have a lot to learn and I suggest you take some time to do so before posting a sign up. You're free to return when you're actually CERTAIN that you are fully capable of RPing at a level at least close to that of those people that were accepted.
And don't get me wrong, we're not really RP pros or anything, but we kind of know well enough that the beginning of each sentence should start in a capitalization and we actually put effort in our posts just like we did in our Sign-ups.