Just a Fantasy

[Miyu-chan]

A long, long time ago, I started this thread on PC regarding World Peace, here is a stupid poem to accompany my thoughts. xD

?Just a Fantasy?

World peace is all but a reality.
Be true to yourself, say it?s a fantasy.
For in your mind you know it?ll never happen,
From the start, this was our condemnation.

Peace will never occur during our generation,
Maybe the next millennia, we?ll gain salvation?
But truthfully, I must say ?
The thought of world peace fills me up with dismay.

For human nature is filled with such greed,
Only thinking about their own countries? needs,
Not giving it another thought,
Of the pain and sadness it may cause.

But in the end, one comes to the conclusion,
That really ? there?s no solution.
We?ll just have to live like this till the end of our days
Living and breathing, through a world full of haze.

Distrust and skepticism will always exist ?
World leaders try to please all of humanity,
But truthfully, I must say ?
Give it up, that?s just a fantasy.

 

[Pete]

It's really good!
I like the way it's so...well...pessimistic. In a good kind of way though!

 

[Miyu-chan]

Thanks! =D Well~ World Peace is kind of a pessamistic issue. ;; But thanks for the comment. xD

 

[bna_li]

Wow. So many long words. Nice work.

 

[Rin-Rin]

Miyu-chan, this is fantastic...You give the precise emotion in this poem--just give up. It's a perfect lesson to some overzealous people (like me, in some situations xD) And, well...world peace is really a long way away. Comparing this to the other poems in the place...well, this one just rocks xD I completely agree with it!