KAGEX'S SPRITES...YEAH
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See that's why I love having you in Pixel Arts.
Yeah, Judah, there is a rule requiring you post with an elaborate comment/constructive criticism, please follow it in future.
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Nice work on them!
They are all rather spiffing! XD
Ok, feedback =]
Your very first trainer with the brown hair, I don't like it very much, also, it looks different in the over world view at the bottom. Or is it just me? O_o
If it isn't me, a little continuity error! XD
The other two are beautiful.
The Pokemon revamps are good. The only two I don't like are Pachirisu and Turtwig. For some reason, they don't look right. Pachirisu's eyes don't seem to line up for some reason, I think I am having a psychedelic moment here.
Turtwig's colour looks a little off to me...
The clone's are stunning. Really well done, as are the family. Except for weird brown hair dude! XD
In the "other" section, I love the running trainers, the shadowing and physics are beautifully captured and displayed. Again, are the first and second the same trainer? If so, the hair looks different again to me...
If not ignore the point above! Hahaha!
Hope that is alright ><'
Overall, I give your work a 7/10
I like a lot of it :D
They are all rather spiffing! XD
Ok, feedback =]
Your very first trainer with the brown hair, I don't like it very much, also, it looks different in the over world view at the bottom. Or is it just me? O_o
If it isn't me, a little continuity error! XD
The other two are beautiful.
The Pokemon revamps are good. The only two I don't like are Pachirisu and Turtwig. For some reason, they don't look right. Pachirisu's eyes don't seem to line up for some reason, I think I am having a psychedelic moment here.
Turtwig's colour looks a little off to me...
The clone's are stunning. Really well done, as are the family. Except for weird brown hair dude! XD
In the "other" section, I love the running trainers, the shadowing and physics are beautifully captured and displayed. Again, are the first and second the same trainer? If so, the hair looks different again to me...
If not ignore the point above! Hahaha!
Hope that is alright ><'
Overall, I give your work a 7/10
I like a lot of it :D
hahaha thanks, you gotta have a sarcastic rule loving guy everywhere, its just necessary.
...um ok for starters everything on the first page is old gross stuff, im lazy and i dont update it so id suggest looking throuhg the thread if you liked what you see.
oh and no the running people are not the same person
also
heres a 100% scratch sprite of me wip
im not sure if i ever showed these, but if i did oh well its may in contest attire
heres some awesome d/p/pt ows...i think theyre ok...ish
and just reposting this cause no one said anything and i like to look at it move haha
hey guys did you know that when you dont post i get to talk to myself more!!! wooooooooo!!!(yes im being sarcastic if it wasnt overly obvious)
i edited my g/s/c silver sprite to look like the new hg/ss design
now heres a comparison
and heres the new gold and silver together
i edited my g/s/c silver sprite to look like the new hg/ss design
now heres a comparison
and heres the new gold and silver together
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Hmmm ... Kage ..... you are doing great :) wow you really have become a sprite lord huh?? that's cool :)
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Wow, these sprites are amazing. I haven't been through the entire thread, but the sprites I've seen look very good. I like the new Gold and Silver, they are excellent. I think Silver now looks like a sort of leather jacket wearing biker guy (or something). The Silver in the new sprite looks a little older than the one in the old sprite (I didn't mean it not to make sense, honest). The new one looks more "teenagery".
However, your new Gold looks almost as if he is wearing an Elizebethan ruff-thingy round his neck for some reason.
Anyway, your sprites are all fantastic. ;)
However, your new Gold looks almost as if he is wearing an Elizebethan ruff-thingy round his neck for some reason.
Anyway, your sprites are all fantastic. ;)
...which one or both?
new riley
revamped pc family
entry in the june contest
a little walking me
hg/ss starter rips
...which one or both?
new riley
The face seems so crowded on the battle pose... there's too much black going on there... i can't really decipher what every thing is, it kinda looks like he has an eye patch? Anyhow, it's all too squished...
...the arm on left also seems a bit conical... it comes outward funny...
revamped pc family
i'm not even gonna try guessing this time...
entry in the june contest
the stomach seems a bit awkward... the shading that is... maybe it's the diveting's angle... i'm not sure... but i'm not a fan of it...
a little walking me
excellent... can't say nothing bad about this... i like the hair, btw...
hg/ss starter rips
your like the sixth person to post these rips... they look good though ^_^
i still think it look funny on the left side of cyndiquil's head... it looks like he has brown outlining... from afar... and i don't like how todo's left side tooth looks... it kinda sits out there... but that's nothing you can control, i guess ^^
Anyhow, your stuff looks great, as always... keep up the wonderful updates!
Keep Spriting!
P.S. Don't you love talking to yourself? ^_^
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Woo! I'm in your PC family!
I'm not to super fond of me though... The hair that comes down in between my eyes bothers me...
I started editing it a long while back... never finished it. But once i do, I'll show you what I'd rather look like ;]
I'm not to super fond of me though... The hair that comes down in between my eyes bothers me...
I started editing it a long while back... never finished it. But once i do, I'll show you what I'd rather look like ;]
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Lucky atomic gets too be in kage's PC family......
Anyways the revamp pc family looks good~
Except the nerd on the far right his shading need work
well thats how she wantyed her sprite to look
ok well send me that sprite and ill fix it asap!
now what makes you think hes a nerd? because he is indeed not a nerd but one of the coolest people that i know here.
EDIT: lol i forgot the sprite
ok this is a fr/lg map of noken. this is my first time trying this so please be brutal
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Sorry Kage anyways the sprite needs work on his shadingwell thats how she wantyed her sprite to look
ok well send me that sprite and ill fix it asap!
now what makes you think hes a nerd? because he is indeed not a nerd but one of the coolest people that i know here.
EDIT: lol i forgot the sprite
ok this is a fr/lg map of noken. this is my first time trying this so please be brutal
I really don't know how to rate these kinds of maps because I haven't tried this out myself I don't really like it that much but it might look better in DP style
I have the same notion as as Chibi... i have never done one of those... so i really couldn't be "brutal"...
from a visual, stand back i'd say that the islands are too thin, so the path markers kinda overtake the green... it's just a bit visually unpleasing, to me anyhow...
from a visual, stand back i'd say that the islands are too thin, so the path markers kinda overtake the green... it's just a bit visually unpleasing, to me anyhow...
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