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Lairon

Mutt19

Kill confuse ray not golbat
83
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14
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    • Seen Dec 31, 2010
    I'm a begginer but here goes nothing.
    Lairon, not so kind not so mean. Lairon, don't worry they don't climb trees. Lairon, tackling one brings no glee. Lairon, not recommended to toss into the sea. Lairon, bring your mudkip and every things all right. Lairon, seen more often in the night. Lairon, not aggron. Lairon, not aron. Lairon, if you have a mudkip everythings alll right.
     
    TJgamer

    TJgamer

    A Pokémon Poet
    1,093
    Posts
    14
    Years
    • Seen Oct 13, 2021
    It seems to have a funny feeling to it.
    But I suggest that you should indent each line. It makes the poem more clear.
    The poem also doesn't really make much clear sense, but it's your first.
     
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