justinufer
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I'll repost cause i got skipped again. So here is my map.
I'll repost cause i got skipped again. So here is my map.
OK, it's a bit bare. I can see where you are going, but the map seems too big for my liking - too spread out. I am also unsure about the tree placement, something that I always struggle with when mapping myself, and something that you have taken a very different approach to. I like the shape of the map, and how the buildings are arranged, along with the mountains to either side. My one bug bear though, is the flower placement. There are far, far, far too many flowers. Cut them down, and try to avoid placing large clumps. I like placing them diagonally across each other.
Overall, a nice map, 6/10
OK, now for my map:
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Map Name: Un-named
Map Game: Emerald.
Comments: I had some spare time earlier, so I made this. I have no plans as of yet to incorporate it into a hack or anything. Mostly, it was a practice of my mapping skills, and the first map I have completed on my own.
Please Rate honestly. Thanks in advance.
brilliant map as always! I like the shape of everything. The tiles look great from the ferns to the buildings. the only things that bother me are the placement of the wild grass, the the flowers. the wild grass shouldn't be in the tree-area(the areas that are sorounded by trees, so that you can't get there), and there are simply too may flowers(you might want to consut sasquachd00d on that). other than those two things, everything looks perfect!. 8.5/10game base: Pokémon: New Life!
comments: Don't mind the borders :)
credits: Look in the New Life thread (link in siggie)
map name: Route ?
mapshot:
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My map.......
Tiles-Mew's D/p firered.
Name-Outcrop Path
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Here is ny home town remade.
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OK, firstly, I like the tiles. They really give the map the feel that you would want. However, I am unsure on the mountainous area, and the sign outside the house. I am not sure if the blue stairways look right on the mountain. Also, there seems to be a lot of mountain around. Maybe too much, I'm not 100% sure. Also, there are some tile map errors that I have circled for you:
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Also, what are the lines on the mountain top all about?
Overall, a nice map. Fix the tile errors and consider adding something to break up the mountainous area. 7/10.
Just out of interest, what did you actually change on this map? All I can notice different is the flower placement on the right hand side. The main area of flowers was the large patch at the top, of just blocky flowers.
Here is ny home town remade.
Spoiler:
game base: Pokémon: New Life!
comments: Don't mind the borders :)
credits: Look in the New Life thread (link in siggie)
map name: Route ?
mapshot:
Spoiler:
OK, now for my map:
Spoiler:
Map Name: Un-named
Map Game: Emerald.
Comments: I had some spare time earlier, so I made this. I have no plans as of yet to incorporate it into a hack or anything. Mostly, it was a practice of my mapping skills, and the first map I have completed on my own.
Please Rate honestly. Thanks in advance.
hmm,i will give you a 3/10,as like you said there are errors,you should have fix it before posting and i don't like how the tress were placed..The trees is also litte in numbers..try adding more so that the map will not look empty..hmm,the mountailn is unatural,its too linear imo that is..The fowers was placed badly too,they must not be in a row with so many flowers at onceHere is route 1 for my hack. While rating please ignore the bottom two corner tile errors on the left mountain and the ledge edge that has the tree over it that's at the bottom at the map and the colour of the mountain thing on the right side I just did it quick I'll be doing the tiles later on in the game when I have decided what they will look like.
Here is route 1 for my hack. While rating please ignore the bottom two corner tile errors on the left mountain and the ledge edge that has the tree over it that's at the bottom at the map and the colour of the mountain thing on the right side I just did it quick I'll be doing the tiles later on in the game when I have decided what they will look like.
Game Base: Fire Red
Comment: I didn't expect it to be so big :O
Credits: MASTEROFPUPPET's ROM base
Map Name: Route 69
Mapshot in spoiler
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