~CyberKitsune09~
Proud Tails fan!
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- Standing Proudly In a Meadow.
- Seen Feb 25, 2017
Ok, I'm not good at writing AT ALL, but AdvanceShipping Inspires me so, here you go:
--Chapter P---
-Pre fanfic-
This is my first advanceshipping fanfic, so if you don't like advanceshipping turn back now!
-Ages-
Ash: 13
May: 13
Dawn: 11
Brock: 19
Max: 9
Ok, this fanfic comes in right after DP047 aka. Sandshrew's Locker!
--Chapter 1-- (Revised as of 5/9/08 10:03PM PDT)
-The Hotel-
Ash, Brock, and Dawn Just got to Hearthome city thanks to Mira's Abra and are walking to the hotel to check in. The three kids approach the clerk,
"A room for 3 please" Ash says to the clerk,
"Sorry, but all of our smaller rooms are booked... I can get you a room for five at least." The clerk replied.
"Thats fine." Ash said.
The clerk gave Ash a room key, and told him that their room was on the fourth floor, room 201. The group got into the elevator. Brock pressed the 4 button. As the elevator doors were closing, Ash heard a VERY familiar voice at the check-in desk asking for a room for two...
Ash and friends got to their room and it had 3 queen beds, a table, a mini-fridge, and a videophone with end tables between the beds, the room was in a rectangular shape. It had a window in the right side, and the door was on the left side. Ash sat in the bed nearest to the videophone while Brock and Dawn sat at the table and started to talk. Just then the phone started ringing, Ash picked it up.
"Hello?" Ash said, The screen on the phone read "Voice Only"
"Hi, are you Ash Ketchum?" it was the clerk at the front desk.
"Yes, I am" Ash replied.
"Some one wants to come up to your room, I believe his name is Max, is it ok if I send him up?" The clerk said.
Ash's eyes widened at the name Max.
"Could it be?" Ash Thought, He rememberd one of the voices he heard earlier, Then he replied "How old does he look?"
"Huh? He looks about the age of 9." The clerk confusingly said.
"Ok, Please send him up." Ash replied.
"Uhh... I will..." The clerk said, still sounding confused.
"Ok, Thanks!" Ash said happily, then he hung up the phone.
Before telling Brock or Dawn that May's brother was in sinnoh, Ash opened his bag and took out his journal labeled "Secret Do not Open!" and read the last page to himself.
"Who was that on the phone?" Brock asked,
"It was the front desk... asking if Max... as in May's little brother, could come to our room." Ash replied.
"WHAT!?!" Brock exclaimed.
"Who's Max?" Dawn asked confusingly.
Before Brock answered Dawn's question there was a knock at the door. Ash opened the door, It was Max.
"Hi" He said, and then added "Can I come in?"
"Sure" Ash replied.
Max sat down at the table.
"Why are you traveling in Sinnoh? and is May with you?" Ash asked curiously.
"I am traveling with May." Max said proudly, and added "She'll tell you why we're here when she gets back from the pokemart."
--End of chapter 1--
Ok, That was Chapter 1, Please comment.
--Chapter 2--
-May's Return-
Ash, Brock, Dawn, and Max waited for May to come back from the pokemart, Max and Dawn watched TV while Brock was on the PokéNet. Ash just sat at the table... waiting and thinking.
"Why did she come back?" He thought.
"Does she like me like I hoped?" He thought again.
Just then the phone rang again, Brock answered.
"Max, It's for you!" Brock shouted.
Max answered the phone and listened for a while, afterwards he said Ok, and hung up the phone.
"Ash, May wants you to come to the pokemart." Max said surprisingly.
"W... Why?" Ash questioned.
"Ummm... She needs help I guess."Max said unknowingly.
"Ok then." Ash confirmed.
It was a beautiful night in the quiet Hearthome city, Full moon, clear sky, no wind, and it was about 70 degrees. A very romantic night, Ash thought. He approached the blue pokemart, May was standing out front, next to a motorized scooter for two. May wasn't looking at him as he was approaching, she was just staring left.
"Hi May!" Ash said happily.
"Huh?! Oh! Ash!!!" Said with sparkles in her eyes =3.
"It's Finally you! after all this time!!" She added.
She started crying tears of joy and hugged Ash. Ash was surprised of this action and kinda jumped at it. But he was comfortable with it. She stopped hugging, a little too soon in Ash's mind.
"I know it's been awhile... Have you had dinner yet?" May Asked.
"No, Not yet" Ash replied.
"We should catch up over dinner then" May said, then smiled, "We'll have a great time, don't worry." She assured.
"Ok, That sounds Great!" Ash said with a happy flare in his voice.
They jumped on May's scooter and drove towards a restaurant. Ash didn't know where they were going, or if Max, Brock, and Dawn knew that May and him were having dinner. May saw that Ash was board, and speeded her scooter up, Forcing Ash to grab on to her. Ash then realized how good May looked in her new outfit, It's Greenish Emerald color, Match the stands of Yellow, Red, and White on her outfit.
"May is pretty sexy." Ash thought happily as they rode off in the distance.
--End of Chapter 2--
There's chapter 2 for you. Please comment and review. ^_^
--Chapter P---
-Pre fanfic-
This is my first advanceshipping fanfic, so if you don't like advanceshipping turn back now!
-Ages-
Ash: 13
May: 13
Dawn: 11
Brock: 19
Max: 9
Ok, this fanfic comes in right after DP047 aka. Sandshrew's Locker!
--Chapter 1-- (Revised as of 5/9/08 10:03PM PDT)
-The Hotel-
Ash, Brock, and Dawn Just got to Hearthome city thanks to Mira's Abra and are walking to the hotel to check in. The three kids approach the clerk,
"A room for 3 please" Ash says to the clerk,
"Sorry, but all of our smaller rooms are booked... I can get you a room for five at least." The clerk replied.
"Thats fine." Ash said.
The clerk gave Ash a room key, and told him that their room was on the fourth floor, room 201. The group got into the elevator. Brock pressed the 4 button. As the elevator doors were closing, Ash heard a VERY familiar voice at the check-in desk asking for a room for two...
Ash and friends got to their room and it had 3 queen beds, a table, a mini-fridge, and a videophone with end tables between the beds, the room was in a rectangular shape. It had a window in the right side, and the door was on the left side. Ash sat in the bed nearest to the videophone while Brock and Dawn sat at the table and started to talk. Just then the phone started ringing, Ash picked it up.
"Hello?" Ash said, The screen on the phone read "Voice Only"
"Hi, are you Ash Ketchum?" it was the clerk at the front desk.
"Yes, I am" Ash replied.
"Some one wants to come up to your room, I believe his name is Max, is it ok if I send him up?" The clerk said.
Ash's eyes widened at the name Max.
"Could it be?" Ash Thought, He rememberd one of the voices he heard earlier, Then he replied "How old does he look?"
"Huh? He looks about the age of 9." The clerk confusingly said.
"Ok, Please send him up." Ash replied.
"Uhh... I will..." The clerk said, still sounding confused.
"Ok, Thanks!" Ash said happily, then he hung up the phone.
Before telling Brock or Dawn that May's brother was in sinnoh, Ash opened his bag and took out his journal labeled "Secret Do not Open!" and read the last page to himself.
Ash closed the book and put it back in his bag.Ash's Journal said:
"Who was that on the phone?" Brock asked,
"It was the front desk... asking if Max... as in May's little brother, could come to our room." Ash replied.
"WHAT!?!" Brock exclaimed.
"Who's Max?" Dawn asked confusingly.
Before Brock answered Dawn's question there was a knock at the door. Ash opened the door, It was Max.
"Hi" He said, and then added "Can I come in?"
"Sure" Ash replied.
Max sat down at the table.
"Why are you traveling in Sinnoh? and is May with you?" Ash asked curiously.
"I am traveling with May." Max said proudly, and added "She'll tell you why we're here when she gets back from the pokemart."
--End of chapter 1--
Ok, That was Chapter 1, Please comment.
--Chapter 2--
-May's Return-
Ash, Brock, Dawn, and Max waited for May to come back from the pokemart, Max and Dawn watched TV while Brock was on the PokéNet. Ash just sat at the table... waiting and thinking.
"Why did she come back?" He thought.
"Does she like me like I hoped?" He thought again.
Just then the phone rang again, Brock answered.
"Max, It's for you!" Brock shouted.
Max answered the phone and listened for a while, afterwards he said Ok, and hung up the phone.
"Ash, May wants you to come to the pokemart." Max said surprisingly.
"W... Why?" Ash questioned.
"Ummm... She needs help I guess."Max said unknowingly.
"Ok then." Ash confirmed.
It was a beautiful night in the quiet Hearthome city, Full moon, clear sky, no wind, and it was about 70 degrees. A very romantic night, Ash thought. He approached the blue pokemart, May was standing out front, next to a motorized scooter for two. May wasn't looking at him as he was approaching, she was just staring left.
"Hi May!" Ash said happily.
"Huh?! Oh! Ash!!!" Said with sparkles in her eyes =3.
"It's Finally you! after all this time!!" She added.
She started crying tears of joy and hugged Ash. Ash was surprised of this action and kinda jumped at it. But he was comfortable with it. She stopped hugging, a little too soon in Ash's mind.
"I know it's been awhile... Have you had dinner yet?" May Asked.
"No, Not yet" Ash replied.
"We should catch up over dinner then" May said, then smiled, "We'll have a great time, don't worry." She assured.
"Ok, That sounds Great!" Ash said with a happy flare in his voice.
They jumped on May's scooter and drove towards a restaurant. Ash didn't know where they were going, or if Max, Brock, and Dawn knew that May and him were having dinner. May saw that Ash was board, and speeded her scooter up, Forcing Ash to grab on to her. Ash then realized how good May looked in her new outfit, It's Greenish Emerald color, Match the stands of Yellow, Red, and White on her outfit.
"May is pretty sexy." Ash thought happily as they rode off in the distance.
--End of Chapter 2--
There's chapter 2 for you. Please comment and review. ^_^
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