[Talk] My first fakemon :''''v

[Mr. Kobolt Kobalto]

I will create a Pokémon fan-game in RPG maker but first, i will create some fakemon, this is the first, what do you think about it? :'v
I think someone of you can help in this project c:

 

[Flamepaper3]

it's good but it looks to much like a dancing devil

 

[Lycanroc]

The perspective feels off for a Pokemon; the top half of it looks quite two-dimensional; and wouldn't it be looking at the enemy in a battle, instead of off to the side? Otherwise, it looks pretty nice, but the wings look a bit odd.

 

[Piloswine]

The perspective depends on the way the sprites will be displayed in the battle screen. If the Pokémon will be facing each other in a 2d perspective, then it's OK.
You have decent talent to draw. You could improve the arm and the wing's gray parts, though, cause they look thicker at some parts and thinner at other parts.

 

[Mr. Kobolt Kobalto]

Mmm. Is this better? (it's a pre-evolution, don't scare if it don't have wings) c:

 

[TheTrainerWhoForgotPotions]

I have concept but I have no pic about it. It is a tarsier who has only one eye. The other one is just an implant but copies attacks of the type of lens it was using. Also, they always communicate in telekinetic pattern

 

[SkySilvally]

Mmm. Is this better? (it's a pre-evolution, don't scare if it don't have wings) c:

The top half of this one looks GREAT, the shading is wonderful~ But why is the green webbing so flat and not shaded whatsoever? It kind of sticks out haha, maybe add some shading there and it will be perfect~

 

[immacksg]

The sprite itself looks pretty good, but to me the design doesn't seem fitting for a Pokemon. It's hard to explain why, but something about it just feels very off.

 

[Mr. Kobolt Kobalto]

The sprite itself looks pretty good, but to me the design doesn't seem fitting for a Pokemon. It's hard to explain why, but something about it just feels very off.

I know :,v
It looks more like a Castlevania monster than a Pokémon :vvv