Planetes.
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Introduction: First off I love Nuzlocke Challenges, if you don't know what that is, use google. So one day I decided, what if there was a region were everything was in Nuzlocke Mode, and so I came up with the Nezlok (hurr durr I'm so creative) Region. I knew that everyone's Pokemon couldn't die, so I decided that the main character would be part of a prophecy, intertwiining the old with the new, ultimately to fufill his destiny and save the Nezlock Region from Impending doom. This is in the form of a script, because I prefer writing that way, but if people whine, I'll change it. Anyway this features a new region, new Pokemon and new characters. ENJOY!
EP1:
Narrator: This is the story of a 12 year old boy named Jack Kizun and his remarkable Pokemon journey throughout the Nezlok Region, however this isn't an ordinary journey, in the Nezlok Region, there is a prophecy that when the Chosen One's Pokemon Faint, they are gone forever. This prophecy was supposedly made by a group of jealous Priests in the time of old, but no one pays much attention to it, so the legend slowly and quietly lives on until the Chosen One oneday arises
Narrator: Our story takes us to Shineseed Town, the home of Jack Kizun, the young boy who would soon become a Pokemon Trainer.
-JACK'S ROOM-
Jack: Yes, I'm gonna win, my Wi-Fi record will be three and-
Jack's Mother: (from downstairs) Jaaaaack! Come down here!
Jack: (reluctantly shuts off the wii) One second!
(Jack trudges down)
Mom: Professor Spruce wanted you to go over to his lab, it sounded urgent.
(Jack dashes out of the house, his light brown hair flowing in the wind)
Alana: Hey Jack!
Jack: Oh, hey Alana did Prof. Spruce want you to come to his lab as well?
Alana: Mhm, and I'm going to be the first to pick a Pokemon!
Mysterious Boy: Nu-uh that would be me!
Jack: Wait, who on earth are you?
Alana: This is Tony, he lives in Kellygrove City, which is just north of here?
Jack: Do you two know each other
Tony: Not at all
Alana: (to herself while staring off into space) Oh I wish we did, a lot better at least
Jack: Alana? Are you okay?
Alana: (comes to her senses) Oh…oh…Yeah! I'm fine, let's go!
Jack: Alright!!!
(The three dash down route 401 to Spruce's Lab)
Jack: (mid-stride) There it is!
(The three stop to catch their breath and continue in)
Prof . Spruce: I've been expecting you!
Tony: What's up?
Spruce: (adjusts thick glasses) Well, I need you three to test these three starter Pokemon.
Jack: Alright! We'll do it!
Narrator: Prof. Spruce opened the Poke Balls and the three kids watched in awe as the Pokemon appeared before them. The first was Triimur, the Tree Lemur Pokemon, it was mostly forest green with brown stripes and brown circles around its eyes, this Pokemon seemed to be quick and limber. The Second was Blazgu, an orange Fire Type Turtle Pokemon with a hard greyish shell on its back that stood up on two legs. It flexed its muscles to show its power, it appeared quite sturdy. The third and last Pokemon was a Light Blue fisher cat Pokemon with a Brown Stripe across its body that stood on four legs and has a tail that appeared to have some sort of liquid in it . It looked quite fresh and wild with its whiskers and teeth, but was still a bit cute.
Spruce: Alright! Let's go out back and test out these Pokemon in Battle
I'll take any Critique (not complete ripping of my story/script) and praise you want to give. I will also take suggestions for new Pokemon in this region, since I want to get the readers involved.
ALSO FIRST POSTER CAN PICK JACK'S STARTER (and its Gender) and Nickname it (no stupid nicknames, please)
EP1:
Narrator: This is the story of a 12 year old boy named Jack Kizun and his remarkable Pokemon journey throughout the Nezlok Region, however this isn't an ordinary journey, in the Nezlok Region, there is a prophecy that when the Chosen One's Pokemon Faint, they are gone forever. This prophecy was supposedly made by a group of jealous Priests in the time of old, but no one pays much attention to it, so the legend slowly and quietly lives on until the Chosen One oneday arises
Narrator: Our story takes us to Shineseed Town, the home of Jack Kizun, the young boy who would soon become a Pokemon Trainer.
-JACK'S ROOM-
Jack: Yes, I'm gonna win, my Wi-Fi record will be three and-
Jack's Mother: (from downstairs) Jaaaaack! Come down here!
Jack: (reluctantly shuts off the wii) One second!
(Jack trudges down)
Mom: Professor Spruce wanted you to go over to his lab, it sounded urgent.
(Jack dashes out of the house, his light brown hair flowing in the wind)
Alana: Hey Jack!
Jack: Oh, hey Alana did Prof. Spruce want you to come to his lab as well?
Alana: Mhm, and I'm going to be the first to pick a Pokemon!
Mysterious Boy: Nu-uh that would be me!
Jack: Wait, who on earth are you?
Alana: This is Tony, he lives in Kellygrove City, which is just north of here?
Jack: Do you two know each other
Tony: Not at all
Alana: (to herself while staring off into space) Oh I wish we did, a lot better at least
Jack: Alana? Are you okay?
Alana: (comes to her senses) Oh…oh…Yeah! I'm fine, let's go!
Jack: Alright!!!
(The three dash down route 401 to Spruce's Lab)
Jack: (mid-stride) There it is!
(The three stop to catch their breath and continue in)
Prof . Spruce: I've been expecting you!
Tony: What's up?
Spruce: (adjusts thick glasses) Well, I need you three to test these three starter Pokemon.
Jack: Alright! We'll do it!
Narrator: Prof. Spruce opened the Poke Balls and the three kids watched in awe as the Pokemon appeared before them. The first was Triimur, the Tree Lemur Pokemon, it was mostly forest green with brown stripes and brown circles around its eyes, this Pokemon seemed to be quick and limber. The Second was Blazgu, an orange Fire Type Turtle Pokemon with a hard greyish shell on its back that stood up on two legs. It flexed its muscles to show its power, it appeared quite sturdy. The third and last Pokemon was a Light Blue fisher cat Pokemon with a Brown Stripe across its body that stood on four legs and has a tail that appeared to have some sort of liquid in it . It looked quite fresh and wild with its whiskers and teeth, but was still a bit cute.
Spruce: Alright! Let's go out back and test out these Pokemon in Battle
I'll take any Critique (not complete ripping of my story/script) and praise you want to give. I will also take suggestions for new Pokemon in this region, since I want to get the readers involved.
ALSO FIRST POSTER CAN PICK JACK'S STARTER (and its Gender) and Nickname it (no stupid nicknames, please)
