On a night of one.

[~Black Moonlight~]

K, I haven't been on in a long time but I read the updated rules, so this should be all right because this is actually meant to be a song, but it could also be a poem. Anywho here it is.

The Silver Moon Caresses your hair and your light is fire,
It's the only Dream that could be made a reality,
I keep tryin to understand you but to no avail,
need I explain myself to you and you to me,
Maybe one day it will come and take me away,
but until then I'll keep guessing......
Guessing what the world throws in my ever twisting path,
but until I find the answer, I leave with this edict:
Your actions are as pure as Natures blind wrath,
you could never understand why what is what.....
:::End:::

Well This IMO is my greatest poem/song/ect. I have made songs but they weren't that good. Well please post your comments and Suggestions because I'm more than happy to make changes and learn for any future ideas.

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Hmm...not too bad. You did a decent job here.

 

[Inuyasha]

^.^:; i agree... nice...
actions and natures blind wrath eh?
sounds like me xD

 

[Envy]

Nice job! I like it!I like the part where it says"Guessing what the world throws in my ever twisting path"

 

[~Black Moonlight~]

I must thank you for your comments, and complements, and I have made a new poem... Might not be as good as my song but I made it out of thought for the
Inu-yasha character....
here it is:

A demon like No other

Many beasts can be tamed,
many can be held down like a slave of one's cruel wrath,

But there's always one that's not gonna go....
One that's got a reputation that's not as good as most might think or have thought,

His attitude is like a searing thrust of hell,
Always being Rude or negative,
Yet he does have a soft side....
His curiosity exceeds far beyond all humans and animals alike,
A curiosity that is so incredible it is why the beast can't be tamed......
he's a demonic chaotic beast....
but yet that's what makes him stand out.....
stand out above all the others,
Being the one who couldn't be tamed....
Is what makes him a Demon like no other.....
Many people have courage but they are a mare drop of water compared to him...
A drop of water that may forever last but it still will be nothing compared to his courage,
making him a Demon like no other.....
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Well what do ya think? I know it's not as good as my story probably but once again I got the idea from the way Inu-yasha acts.
Post your comments please I look forward to them, as I will use them to improve my poems and such.

 

[Envy]

Thats good but I kinda like the other one better.But it's nice! My friend would maybe like it...