OU Team Featuring ZardX

[MarioManH]

I have decided to go for a Hyper Offensive team, it could still use some tweaking and would appreciate any help!

Charizard @ Charizardite X
Blaze
Adamant Nature
252 Atk / 252 Spe/ 4 HP
-Flare Blitz
-Dragon Claw
-EQ / Brick Break
-Dragon Dance

Garchomp @ Choice Scarf
Rough Skin
Jolly Nature
252 Atk / 252 Spe/ 4 HP
-EQ
-Stone Edge
-Fire Fang
-Outrage

Manaphy @ Wacan Berry
Hydration
Timid Nature
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Tail Glow
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Energy Ball / Psychic

Excadrill @ Air Balloon
Mold Breaker
Jolly Nature
4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spe
-Earthquake
-Rock Slide/Iron Head
-Rapid Spin
-Swords Dance/Stealth Rock

Gengar @ Life Orb
Levitate
Timid
EVs: 4 HP/252 SAtk/252 Spe
-Shadow Ball
-Sludge Bomb/Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast
-Destiny Bond

Deoxys-S @ Focus Sash
Pressure
Jolly Nature
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
- Stealth Rock
- Spikes
- Taunt
- Fire Punch / Superpower

 

[PlatinumDude]

Don't use Brick Break on Charizard. While it benefits from Tough Claws, I don't think it's worth it. Roost should be the secondary option to let Charizard recover off some HP if it has to. The last 4 EVs should go into Defense to give Charizard an odd HP number.

Dragon Claw should be used on Scarf Garchomp to give it a more reliable Dragon STAB. Use it over Fire Fang or Stone Edge.

Charizard is vulnerable to Stealth Rock, so Rapid Spin or Defog support would be appreciated:
Starmie:
-Hydro Pump/Surf
-Thunderbolt/Psyshock
-Ice Beam
-Rapid Spin
Nature: Timid
EVs: 252 SAtk/4 SDef/252 Spe
Item: Leftovers/Life Orb
Ability: Natural Cure

or
-Scald
-Rapid Spin
-Psyshock/Ice Beam/Thunderbolt
-Recover
Nature: Timid
EVs: 248 HP/32 Def/4 SAtk/224 Spe
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure

Excadrill:
-Earthquake
-Rock Slide/Iron Head
-Rapid Spin
-Swords Dance/Stealth Rock
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spe
Item: Leftovers/Air Balloon/Chople Berry
Ability: Mold Breaker

or
-Earthquake
-Iron Head
-Rock Slide
-Rapid Spin
Nature: Adamant/Jolly
EVs: 120 HP/136 Atk/252 SDef (Adamant) or 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spe (Jolly)
Item: Assault Vest (Adamant)/Choice Scarf (Jolly)
Ability: Mold Breaker

Mandibuzz:
-Foul Play
-Roost
-Taunt/Whirlwind
-Defog/Toxic/Knock Off
Nature: Bold/Impish
EVs: 248 HP/216 Def/44 SDef
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Overcoat

Crobat:
-Brave Bird
-Defog
-Roost
-Taunt/Toxic
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 168 HP/136 Atk/4 SDef/200 Spe
Item: Black Sludge
Ability: Infiltrator

Tentacruel:
-Scald
-Sludge Bomb
-Rapid Spin
-Toxic/Knock Off
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 HP/224 Def/32 Spe
Item: Black Sludge
Ability: Liquid Ooze

A Bold nature and 252 HP/252 Def/4 SDef gives Chansey better physical bulk to take physical hits with.

You lack a strong special attacker as well. Gengar or Alakazam can do this for you:

Gengar:
-Shadow Ball
-Sludge Bomb/Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast
-Destiny Bond
Nature: Timid
EVs: 4 HP/252 SAtk/252 Spe
Item: Life Orb/Focus Sash

or
-Shadow Ball
-Substitute
-Pain Split/Focus Blast
-Disable/Will-o-Wisp/Focus Blast
Nature: Timid
EVs: 4 HP/252 SAtk/252 Spe
Item: Life Orb/Black Sludge

Alakazam:
-Psychic/Psyshock
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast
-Hidden Power (Fire/Ice)/Dazzling Gleam
Nature: Timid
EVs: 4 Def/252 SAtk/252 Spe
Item: Life Orb/Focus Sash
Ability: Magic Guard

 

[MarioManH]

Do you think it would be suitable to replace Azumarril with Manaphy (SpA), add Gengar, Excadrill and Deoxys-S (Lead Set-Up). Then remove Chansey and go for a hyper offensive team?

 

[MarioManH]

Updated the Team Roster, more feedback would be appreciated ;)

 

[PlatinumDude]

Speed Deoxys needs all the Speed it can get to outspeed as much things as it can. Max Attack investment is also preferred if it's using an offensive move. What KOs does Speed Deoxys achieve with its current Attack investment?

 

[MarioManH]

Speed Deoxys needs all the Speed it can get to outspeed as much things as it can. Max Attack investment is also preferred if it's using an offensive move. What KOs does Speed Deoxys achieve with its current Attack investment?

So should I max in Speed and HP?

 

[PlatinumDude]

So should I max in Speed and HP?

Max Speed and max Attack if you're running a physical offensive move. If you're not using offensive moves, the last 252 EVs can go into HP.

 

[MarioManH]

Max Speed and max Attack if you're running a physical offensive move. If you're not using offensive moves, the last 252 EVs can go into HP.

Alright, will go ahead and run a single offensive move and max Attack EVs + Speed EVs