Nidoking76
Not splitting the party
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Judge Mandalore Shepard's character is reserved.
I'm still up for being a Hound if you need one. I can make another character or just edit my current one.
Hey Plum, is it Joseph or Jonathan? You use both in your SU.
Plumbum's character is reserved. I am not accepting him yet for three reasons:
1. You only had one paragraph of personality that didn't cover hardly anything.
2. You forgot the password.
3. This one is the biggest one for me. You said his wife was pregnant. If you could have it says his child was put in an orphanage, that would be good. But this is a T rated RP, and I don't want deep, emotional concepts such as child death in it.
I like being cryptic. Put it straight in and folks'll just copy it out of your SU.Also, something about black and white pepsi-logo opposites or something.
Judge's character is reserved for now for the following reasons.
1. Your appearance section is a little undetailed. If you can't think of anything else, I guess it's good enough. But you can go and use either Heromachine or Avachara to make a better appearance.
2. Your personality section needs more detailed. So far, it seems more like a history section than anything else. If you can't think of a better way of describing his personality, you can just make a sample to sum up his personality.
3. This is more of a preference thing, but the S.O.T. won't send you on many missions if you have that much of a passion for killing Outcasts, as they won't trust you to bring in Outcasts to work for them.
No response to dear old Plum?
For the appearance, it was the best I could think of at the time (and partly due to heat). As for those two websites, I am not going to use them since I am not an artist.
As for personality, I always have trouble with that area.
As for the squad that Marshall is part of, I forgot to mention that squad is one of S.O.T.'s squads that is sent when there is an Outcast that is deemed too dangerous to be recruited for S.O.T.
Well, I know where I'm not wanted. I'm withdrawing my application, thanks for your time.Actually, no. No response. xD