Kylie-chan
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- Age 30
- New South Wales, Australia
- Seen Jun 16, 2023
Well, yeah, the title captures it, but it isn't that great. It's my second song.
Please Don't Go
Don't go why don't you stay awhile?
Don't leave me here all alone in the silent sadness
I know you say well you have to go
But when you leave you take with you all my gladness
You're like a platform of safety
Like a bright glowing buoy for a shipwrecked girl in the sea
I'm like an owl without the night, like the world without the sun
When you go home and leave me
Well when I'm here I'm smiling
When you leave I'm crying
'Cos you quash my fears and dry my tears
And stop my heart from dying
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Every word you say is like a light
Bright and radiant and I feel enlightened
And I felt your touch and it comforted me
With you I can't get frightened
The door slammed and you disappeared
The depression wave roared in my ears
I was drifting in the dark terror realm
Where the icy cold pain most of all sears
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
BRIDGE:
So when you say you love me
I float up to the top
So when you say I'm your one
I'm aerial
When you say you have to go
I'm falling hard
And when I connect with the ground
The pain devours my heart
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Please come back to me
Oh and yeah that's a lot deeper than "Untitled" because it's actually based on what's happened lately, but paraphrased.
~DP~
EDIT- btw I couldn't get in there's a database problem so 'scuse me if I can't read ur reviews
Please Don't Go
Don't go why don't you stay awhile?
Don't leave me here all alone in the silent sadness
I know you say well you have to go
But when you leave you take with you all my gladness
You're like a platform of safety
Like a bright glowing buoy for a shipwrecked girl in the sea
I'm like an owl without the night, like the world without the sun
When you go home and leave me
Well when I'm here I'm smiling
When you leave I'm crying
'Cos you quash my fears and dry my tears
And stop my heart from dying
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Every word you say is like a light
Bright and radiant and I feel enlightened
And I felt your touch and it comforted me
With you I can't get frightened
The door slammed and you disappeared
The depression wave roared in my ears
I was drifting in the dark terror realm
Where the icy cold pain most of all sears
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
BRIDGE:
So when you say you love me
I float up to the top
So when you say I'm your one
I'm aerial
When you say you have to go
I'm falling hard
And when I connect with the ground
The pain devours my heart
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Please don't go I'm drowning
Everytime you leave I get those doubts and fears
It rises up in me 'cause you're what stops it
It's like the darkness enfolding me and shortening my years
And all the times I said goodbye
The pain burnt me from inside and I shed tears
I'm hanging on a thread waiting for you to come back
To lift me up from my unbearable nadirs
Please come back to me
Oh and yeah that's a lot deeper than "Untitled" because it's actually based on what's happened lately, but paraphrased.
~DP~
EDIT- btw I couldn't get in there's a database problem so 'scuse me if I can't read ur reviews
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