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Please tell me my team's flaws?

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    My X and Y team has been failing badly competitively. Can someone please tell me the flaws in my team?

    Noivern F lv. 48 (working on training this one) No item
    Acrobatics
    Shadow Ball
    Whirlwind
    Boomburst

    Gardevoir F lv. 71 Item: Gardevoirite
    Shadow Ball
    Psychic
    Calm Mind
    Thunderbolt

    Jirachi lv. 100 (I feel like this one was hacked. My friend traded it to me) No item
    Doom Desire
    Iron Head
    Psychic
    Draco Meteor

    Charizard M lv. 75 Item: Charizardite X
    Fly(I know, I know.)
    Inferno
    Heat Wave
    Shadow Claw

    Leafeon F lv. 73(I'd prefer not to get rid of this one) Item: Big Root
    Shadow Ball
    Giga Drain
    Leaf Blade
    Synthesis

    Aerodactyl M lv. 61 Item: Aerodactylite
    Rock Smash
    Strength
    Iron Head
    Fly

    I feel like I am unbalanced. Are there any better Pokemon I could be using(Without getting rid of Leafeon)?
     

    Nah

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    I take it you're new to competitive battling? You can't really take whatever team you used to beat the Elite 4, throw it into competitive battles, and expect to win. You'll wanna start by reading these things:

    https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=305535#resources

    https://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?499840-A-basic-guide-to-EVs-IVs-and-natures

    Also, your Jirachi is probably hacked. I don't think it can learn Draco Meteor. And your team has a bit of an Ice weakness.

    If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
     
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    I take it you're new to competitive battling? You can't really take whatever team you used to beat the Elite 4, throw it into competitive battles, and expect to win. You'll wanna start by reading these things:

    https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=305535#resources

    https://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?499840-A-basic-guide-to-EVs-IVs-and-natures

    Also, your Jirachi is probably hacked. I don't think it can learn Draco Meteor. And your team has a bit of an Ice weakness.

    If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

    Certain Jirachi came with Draco Meteor in some event distributions so it could be legal.

    Also, SnakeBytez, if you're intent on using a Leafeon on your team might I suggest you overhaul its moveset? Shadow Ball and Giga Drain are usually good moves, but Leafeon's flawed base 60 Special Attack is barely going to scratch opponents with even decent Special Defence. Might I suggest replacing one of them with X-Scissor to use its better Attack stat?
     
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    Certain Jirachi came with Draco Meteor in some event distributions so it could be legal.

    Also, SnakeBytez, if you're intent on using a Leafeon on your team might I suggest you overhaul its moveset? Shadow Ball and Giga Drain are usually good moves, but Leafeon's flawed base 60 Special Attack is barely going to scratch opponents with even decent Special Defence. Might I suggest replacing one of them with X-Scissor to use its better Attack stat?
    My Jirachi has the OT SMR2010, if that means anything. I will take your advice and give it X-Scissor. Thank you for the advice!
     

    Nah

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    Certain Jirachi came with Draco Meteor in some event distributions so it could be legal.

    Also, SnakeBytez, if you're intent on using a Leafeon on your team might I suggest you overhaul its moveset? Shadow Ball and Giga Drain are usually good moves, but Leafeon's flawed base 60 Special Attack is barely going to scratch opponents with even decent Special Defence. Might I suggest replacing one of them with X-Scissor to use its better Attack stat?
    Oh, so Draco Meteor was an event move for Jirachi. I should've checked.

    And his team needs a complete overhaul for it to be competitively viable.

    My Jirachi has the OT SMR2010, if that means anything. I will take your advice and give it X-Scissor. Thank you for the advice!

    That means it is a Jirachi distributed in an event. That particular one came with Draco Meteor, so your Jirachi is actually legit.
     
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    I'm new to the competitive scene too. Haven't started battling yet, just doing my research and assembly before I start that, but from a glance, I wouldn't suggest whirlwind on Noivern unless you're going for a spike set up team. Plus what are the EVs you have on them? That makes a whole world of difference. Also youtube this guy Verlisify. He does reviews of pokemon for competitive use. You can learn alot from the youtubes.
     
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    Do any of you guys have suggestions for replacements? I am trying not to use more than one legendary.
     

    PlatinumDude

    Nyeh?
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    Lack of good STAB hurts on Noivern. No, Acrobatics does not count, since Noivern's Attack is inferior to its Special Attack:
    -Draco Meteor
    -Flamethrower
    -Focus Blast
    -Hurricane/Switcheroo/U-turn
    Nature: Timid
    EVs: 4 Def/252 SAtk/252 Spe
    Item: Choice Specs
    Ability: Frisk/Infiltrator

    or
    -Draco Meteor
    -Flamethrower
    -Focus Blast
    -Dragon Pulse/Roost/U-turn
    Nature: Timid/Naive
    EVs: 4 Def/252 SAtk/252 Spe
    Item: Life Orb
    Ability: Frisk/Infiltrator

    Gardevoir would appreciate having a Fairy STAB, since it gained the Fairy type in Gen VI. If you intend to use Mega Gardevoir, give it Hyper Voice, since Pixilate is useless without a Normal move (Pixilate turns the user's Normal moves into Fairy ones). Take note that this only applies to Ralts, Kirlia and Gardevoir transferred from B2/W2, as Hyper Voice is a tutor move in these games:
    -Psyshock
    -Hyper Voice
    -Focus Blast
    -Shadow Ball/Taunt/Will-o-Wisp
    Nature: Timid
    EVs: 24 Def/232 SAtk/252 Spe
    Item: Gardevoirite
    Ability: Trace

    or
    -Calm Mind
    -Psyshock
    -Hyper Voice
    -Shadow Ball/Taunt
    Nature: Timid
    EVs: 24 Def/232 SAtk/252 Spe
    Item: Gardevoirite
    Ability: Trace

    If you can't use Hyper Voice, just make do with regular Gardevoir:
    -Psyshock
    -Moonblast
    -Focus Blast
    -Healing Wish/Trick
    Nature: Timid
    EVs: 252 SAtk/4 SDef/252 Spe
    Item: Choice Scarf
    Ability: Trace

    Since you have Aerodactyl as a Fly slave, I don't think Charizard has much of a reason to use Fly. It's best played physically because of Tough Claws powering up its main STABs:
    -Dragon Dance
    -Flare Blitz/Fire Punch
    -Dragon Claw/Outrage
    -Earthquake/Roost
    Nature: Adamant/Jolly
    EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spe
    Item: Charizardite X
    Ability: Blaze

    or
    -Dragon Dance
    -Dragon Claw
    -Fire Punch/Earthquake
    -Roost
    Nature: Adamant
    EVs: 144 HP/244 Atk/120 Spe
    Item: Charizardite X
    Ability: Blaze

    or
    -Fire Punch/Earthquake
    -Dragon Claw
    -Will-o-Wisp
    -Roost
    Nature: Careful
    EVs: 248 HP/148 SDef/112 Spe
    Item: Charizardite X
    Ability: Blaze
     

    LetsPlayALoveGame

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    Certain Jirachi came with Draco Meteor in some event distributions so it could be legal.

    Also, SnakeBytez, if you're intent on using a Leafeon on your team might I suggest you overhaul its moveset? Shadow Ball and Giga Drain are usually good moves, but Leafeon's flawed base 60 Special Attack is barely going to scratch opponents with even decent Special Defence. Might I suggest replacing one of them with X-Scissor to use its better Attack stat?

    I have the legit Draco Meteor Jirachi, so I can confirm it's not hacked.
     
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