Pls review my deck; it's a poison deck =)

[miyo]

My deck is a pure grass deck except for one pokemon. Please give me some advices to improve it! Thanks! =)

My deck:
Grass Energy x24
Metal Energy x2
Potion x2
Bill x1
Energy Removal x3
Holon Researcher x2
Gust of Wind x3
Pokemon Breeder x2
Professor Elm Training Method x1
Pokemon Fan Club x2
Computer Search x1
Erika's Oddish x2 (with Blot and Sporadic Sponging)
Erika's Gloom x2 (2 diff: w dream dance and vile smell // w healing pollen and magic pollen)
Erika's Vileplume x1 (w poke power pollen defense and mega drain)
Zubat x3 (2 same, 1 diff: w bite and poison spray x2 // w leech life and supersonic)
Golbat x3 (2 same, 1 diff: w screech and poison bite x2 // with wing attack and leech life)
Crobat x2 (2 diff: w triggered poison and cross attack // w target attack and radar jam)
Erika Dratini x1 (w poke power strange barrier- used for defending against attacks and to buy time)
Scyther x3 (2 same, 1 diff: w fury cutter x2 // w agility and sharp sickle)

As you can see, my deck consists of mainly cards from the earlier versions. My parents don't really allow me to buy the new cards nowadays (although they're alot more powerful! XD). It'll be quite impossible to become one of the top notch trainers, so I'd just ask for advices to improve on the deck, that's all. ^^

 

[t0ky0.m0n]

I like your trainers, and the poisonous pokemon are a good addition. I don't have any of the new cards either and don't have a large collection like I once did. I don't notice any improvements to be made. It's a well planned, challenging deck. My deck is in the forums, and I would like your opinion. It's titled Rate My Deck!

 

[Black_kitsune_rioku]

it's a good deck but the Erika's oddish and other pokemon don't do much damage...though they are good. The Zubat and Golbat are really a good addition to it nice choice! Plus adding gust of wind is an extra advandage if you weakened a pokemon badly.




P.S.: sorry about the origianl post, I had a really bad day that day and I'm sorry I took it out on your deck :(

 

[sceptilerancher]

thats kinda rude...
ure poisen deck has way too many energy tho

 

[miyo]

hmmm, I once tried a low-energy deck, and I always got the good cards out, except that I don't get any energy cards to facilitate the attacks.. so I had to put in loads of energy cards :p

 

[sceptilerancher]

thats why u use draw cards so u get the extra cards.

 

[Typhlosion ex fans]

Well, try on others special condition for this deck can easily block by steelix ex pokebody. Make a deck with swalot CG and ariados. Use their first attack and then reactive poison. Ariados energy cost only 1!