Poem Lover Fanclub

[Shinji_]

How about everyday we pick a topic about a pokemon xD even though this is in other clubs

 

[Anime/Mangalover247]

*claps*
Topic: What's your favorite type of poem?
(examples: lonely poems, friendship poems, happy poems, mad poems, etc.

I think I like Love poems because they are soo ROMANTIC

 

[Midori Chi]

I think I've grown a liking to sad and lonely poems lately, but I also love friendship, love, and happy poems. ^_^
Not a big fan of mad poems though.

 

[Shinji_]

I like happy Poems/Funny poems they make more of a calm easy mood. On occasions I like sad pooems though it all depends on how your feeling.

 

[Midori Chi]

Yup. I agree. ^_^

Here's an old poem/song I made. It's 2 years old. 0_0

Angel's Fate

You came into my heart.
You know we're meant to be.
We knew it from the start.
Now my wings are free!
My fate is for my love.
It's alll destiny.
Forever and ever,please save me!

Don't give up! Never give up! You know that you love me!
Dont give up! Never give up! Forever lasting!
Don't give up! Never give up! I love you! I always have loved you!
La ti da.da di da! aaah!

Atop an angel sings.
The melody,it rings.
All the laughs of joy,
turn into tears!
And all the cries,
will you open your eyes!
Forever and ever! Please save me!

Don't give up! Never give up! You know that you love me!
Dont give up! Never give up! Forever lasting!
Don't give up! Never give up! I love you! I always have loved you!
La ti da.da di da! aaah!

 

[Shinji_]

*Claps* It was awesome. It seemed like a Love song..Well it was lol I wanna hear more songs like that from you there very good :D.

 

[Midori Chi]

Thankies! ^_^ If I remember correctly, the tune is very jumpy.

New Topic: Does rhyming come easy to you?

 

[Shinji_]

Very jumpy? I would never of expected that..But heres a poem I wrote its Called friends

They have been true friends
The first and the best
They cling like the green on the grass
Close when they rest
even togeather when ones being a pest
The old and new days
Were the loveliest days
I wish forever these days would stay

Hehe Hope you guys liked it it would be a good poem to dedicate to a friend but just extend it more. Can anyone give me some tips on how to make it better please =)

 

[Anime/Mangalover247]

New Topic: Does rhyming come easy to you?

Hmm...For me sometimes it does, but most the time it doesn't

 

[Midori Chi]

Hehe Hope you guys liked it it would be a good poem to dedicate to a friend but just extend it more. Can anyone give me some tips on how to make it better please =)

It was good. 0.0Hmm...Maybe you could write on what friends did for you in past experiences? How together, you're strong, and apart, you're not? Stuff like that?

Hmm...For me sometimes it does, but most the time it doesn't

For me, I find it fun. ^^ I wouldn't say fun means easy to me though. Sometimes it can be really hard.

 

[Richard Lynch]

Believe it or not, I'm actually quite an active poet... songwriter, actually, since I write piano tunes for most of my poems. My style is not that of a serious poet, or "angst" as most people write... I write satire and comedy, and my poems have usually been described as having a very dark sense of humour, to the point where they're slightly creepy. But I don't agree... I see my poetry as funny. :) So either way, count me in to this group!

I'll copy/paste the single poem I'm most known for around my old high school here, and let you guys judge (it's more of a song, to tell you the truth). It's a bit longer, so be prepared to read...

The following is a piece I originally wrote for my school's yearly schedule (a book we received at the beginning of each year called the "Drum"), but it was rejected for its... political implications. But I still consider it my most topical work, I'll let you guys decide! I call it, quite simply, "The Politician's Song". And for those of you non Gilbert & Sullivan buffs, this is set to the tune of "If You Give Me Your Attention".

"The Politician's Song"

If you give me your attention I will tell you what I am
I'm a brilliant public speaker, also somewhat of a ham
I have thus tried my hands in business, especially with oil
But I can't have my past mistakes let my reputation spoil
Ask anyone who loves me, I'm a charismatic man
They will tell you that for ev'rything in this country I've a plan
I adore being on T.V., I look wonderful on screen
Yet ev'rybody tells me that they see me as just plain mean!
And I can't think why!

I care for the people of this place, I love the commonwealth
I wish to see them do well in life, with money and good health
I want to be seen as your friend, and I want to shake your hand
For there's surly nothing nicer than your best friend in command
I am also int'rested in wars, and education too
Then I wonder why my care is not as obvious to you!
And all my plans and strategies are quite perfect, I am sure
But yet ev'rybody says that they are nothing but obscure!
And I can't think why!

Take peace with other countries, it is as easy as can be:
If they don't agree with us, we'll simply blow them up, you see
We'll first give them a chance, but then we'll send our loving troops
And I promise you now you'll never hear me whisper "oops!"
And all our neighbor countries we'll peacefully make fall
Thus leaving us to watch the world, and me to lead it all
In the end they all will love us and we all will be quite free
But yet everybody says that they just can't agree with me!
And I can't think why!

He can't think why.

 

[Shinji_]

Welcome to the group Richard. I like your choice of words and descriptions they're very deep. :) I think you could go far with your poetry=P By the way im not trying to be funny but theres a guy who I saw on the news thats on trial becuase he was a witness of a death that happened here in toronto on boxing day and his name is richard steele o_O;;

 

[Midori Chi]

Wow, what a long poem. XD It was interesting though, with great rhythm.

 

[Richard Lynch]

Wow, what a long poem. XD It was interesting though, with great rhythm.

hah, thanks. (Also, Midori Chi, I love your avatar and sig! I adore Sailor Moon...and I can only assume you remember who the character is in my avatar ;)). But if you think that's long, you should read my poem called "The Fox and the Hares" - my third ode to Lewis Carrol (my all-time favorite poet), but about 10x more morbid. That was my longest poem ever: 25 4-line stanzas.

I guess I can post my most notorious poem that I wrote roughly two years ago for the Valentine's Day edition of the school newspaper. Yet again, it was rejected. I've only ever had one poem accepted into anything the high school published, and I'll post that one someday, if you guys like my stuff.

Anyways, this piece is a shorter waltz, and slightly subtle. It's a satire on "love" and the entire concept of "the union of two souls", ie: marriage, or whatever else comes to mind when you hear that. I call it...

"Let Us Be One (a love poem)"

Let's be together now, dear
For the night has just begun
I am quite hungry for you
So why not let us be one?

Your taste would be complete, love
But I've cooked you far too long
You loved the wine I'm drinking
So why don't you go along?

I can't handle all your love
And swallow it while it's whole
Instead I shall substitute
All your entrails in a bowl

You have never seemed your best
You've never looked so great
I'll read The Joy of Cooking
While your head is on my plate

I'm sorry now you're gone, dear
I would think we are quite through
Something I'll never make, though
Are reservations... for two

 

[Midori Chi]

hah, thanks. (Also, Midori Chi, I love your avatar and sig! I adore Sailor Moon...and I can only assume you remember who the character is in my avatar ). But if you think that's long, you should read my poem called "The Fox and the Hares" - my third ode to Lewis Carrol (my all-time favorite poet), but about 10x more morbid. That was my longest poem ever: 25 4-line stanzas.

(Yeppy. The evil professor who is Saturn's dad.)

25 four-line stanzas? Wowie. 0.0

That poem was quite interesting. Did he eat the girl? 0_0

 

[Shinji_]

hah, thanks. (Also, Midori Chi, I love your avatar and sig! I adore Sailor Moon...and I can only assume you remember who the character is in my avatar ;)). But if you think that's long, you should read my poem called "The Fox and the Hares" - my third ode to Lewis Carrol (my all-time favorite poet), but about 10x more morbid. That was my longest poem ever: 25 4-line stanzas.

I guess I can post my most notorious poem that I wrote roughly two years ago for the Valentine's Day edition of the school newspaper. Yet again, it was rejected. I've only ever had one poem accepted into anything the high school published, and I'll post that one someday, if you guys like my stuff.

Anyways, this piece is a shorter waltz, and slightly subtle. It's a satire on "love" and the entire concept of "the union of two souls", ie: marriage, or whatever else comes to mind when you hear that. I call it...

"Let Us Be One (a love poem)"

Let's be together now, dear
For the night has just begun
I am quite hungry for you
So why not let us be one?

Your taste would be complete, love
But I've cooked you far too long
You loved the wine I'm drinking
So why don't you go along?

I can't handle all your love
And swallow it while it's whole
Instead I shall substitute
All your entrails in a bowl

You have never seemed your best
You've never looked so great
I'll read The Joy of Cooking
While your head is on my plate

I'm sorry now you're gone, dear
I would think we are quite through
Something I'll never make, though
Are reservations... for two

Yea that ones long alright. Hey would you mind if I wrote half a poem and you write the other half? Becuase your very good with poems but I get so inpatient to finish mine.

 

[Richard Lynch]

Yea that ones long alright. Hey would you mind if I wrote half a poem and you write the other half? Becuase your very good with poems but I get so inpatient to finish mine.

We could try it, sure. But a double authoring of anything can be difficult (especially with poetry), since every writer has their own style, and their own approach to poetry. I mean, it'd be hard to combine something written by Dante Alighieri with something written by Lewis Carrol. But hey, that shouldn't stop us. ;)

 

[Shinji_]

Noone is posting anymore is this fanclub dead? XD

 

[pink-tiger]

Its not dead yet.So dont worry. ^_^
Plus I have another old poem.

> Hello <

Hello
Is what I want to say to you today
But as you come right beside me
I freeze all the way

Hello
Is what my heart wants to say
But although I want to say it
I lock them away
Im scared to talk to you
For the fear of your rejection is strong

Hello
Is what I mean to say
When you look at me
But all I do is mummble

Hello
Is what I fear to say
Although my friends want me to say it
I dare not say it to you
Because my fear is not of you
But of what you'll say.....

Hello
Is what say to everyone
But to you I just cant say...
The word hello for you is sacread......
And i'll sound different when I say it to you..

Hello
I'll deside to say to you someday
But I know it wont be soon
For my feelings for you are huge..

Hello
I cry each night
Because I know I should have said it.
You and me are friends
But I cant believe I cant say hello..

Hello
I've desided to say to you tomorrow
After crying at night i've desided
That saying hello to you
Can bring me happiness
Although it may bring me sadness as well..
But the truth I should have known...
That your my friend
And who knows you may love me as well.....

Sorry if grammar mistakes and misspelled words..

 

[Shinji_]

I liked that poem :D hey, guest thats viewing the page how about you make an account and join our fan club :P?