Ooph. I'm not very good with poems, so constructive criticism is definitely welcomed. Help me if you can! @^.^@
Per chance I saw, one day that I
if I were to write, I'd sure defy
the laws of stanza, meter, beat
- things that make my words complete.
But just this once I thought I'd try,
me, a dabbler, three skills too shy
a concept new to see and learn
a talent I had always yearned
Who can naught but clear understand
the glassy touch of words' demand
has true an eye which one beholds
past mist and fog, a poetic mold.
if I were to write, I'd sure defy
the laws of stanza, meter, beat
- things that make my words complete.
But just this once I thought I'd try,
me, a dabbler, three skills too shy
a concept new to see and learn
a talent I had always yearned
Who can naught but clear understand
the glassy touch of words' demand
has true an eye which one beholds
past mist and fog, a poetic mold.