I think you should of worked on your mapping before making this hack, because your maps are ugly looking. I'm not being horrible, but it's the truth. I recommend you taking a break from this hack and work on a clean rom for your mapping, then go back to this hack and improve your maps by far! If you need help improving, look at the Map rating thread and see what maps got high scores... maybe you might learn a new style of mapping. ;)
Anyway, I think you need a better introduction as it's basicly the same, there's no real twist to the game. Good luck! :)
I know that the mapping is really bad in those images, I've already been working further for a while and I now wanted to import an image of my new map for pallet town. My friends like it.