Pokemon Calming Waters

[Kenneth Alog]

Hack Name:Pokemon Calming Waters

Hack Of: Pokemon Firered

Team: Dimensional Hacking Team

Story: You Are A 10 Year Old Starting Your Pokemon Journey To Become The Champion.
But Not Really Intrested About It. All You Want Is To Play Your New Black Wii!. But Your Mom Tells You To Go To The Professor To Get Your Starter.Professor Admiral Is A Old Man, But Not Grumpy. He Gives You A Piplup.The Piplup Likes You Very Much. So After The Prof. Asked You To Go To His grandaughter/grandson. But You Heard About People Talking About A Pokemon Called Manaphy.
They Say It's Cool Or Great! Here It Starts. Wanting To Catch It!

Planned Features

All D/P Pokemon (Replacing Some Of The Existing Johto Or Kanto Pokemon.)
All Legends.
GSC And DP Music
Play As The Heroes Of Pokemon Platinum.
All Towns And Cities Has A Legend Of Each Legendary Pokemon.
New Region. (Kansei)
Pokemon Rangers.

Sprites Of Heroine And Hero.
(Heroine Not Indexed)

(Still Need Help With Hero Though)

ScreenShots:
None Yet

Credits:
Forgotten Memory And X-Buster For RomBase
My Team
Me.

Downloads
No Betas Or Releases Yet (Still In Scrapbox Ya Know.)

 

[Scyther X]

well the storyline has alot of plot holes it could e better. But im sure u have alot of better ides for it, ju try to jeep it coming, n get some screenshots up asap cause ith out the hackis gointo seem band

 

[Nikkie.]

Presentation

Please add presentation, imagin this in the Hacks showcase. Space it out more, Add introduction, progress, features, credits .

If you dont understand, read other peoples threads.

Well the storyline is Well...Not good. no thought put in, nothing.

This can be changed... Good luck.

 

[danoftheworld]

All your writing is squashed together, as drevilm said, space it out - read other peoples hacks.
Your storyling is really boring and sounds like a lot of people that start a hack. Add to it to make it more unique. Yeah, thats about it...
Make your posts look presentable...

 

[Kenneth Alog]

I Updated The First Post! Now With Features!

 

[Karganeth]

Dude are you only 9 years old? Wow impressive little dude :o.

 

[GKS]

The story is a little confusing, but not very bad.

 

[[HoN] Jereziah]

WoW!
All D/P pokemons???????????

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Is there going to have a bad team or something? And what are you doing in the hack?

 

[Tré]

hey buddeh...are you goin' to insert all d/p pokemons??? aw...that's risky...