Pokemon Quest.

[jetmagnumX]

This's My Second FanFic..I Still Need Ranting And Critiquing Hope You Like It..I'vE Made This Fic Keeping In Mind The Quests Of Mario Or The Levels Of Super Mario Bros.. Ehe.

Um.. Actually A Remake On A Episode..

Chapter One:On Their Way

We see Mew and Mewtwo at the unknown dugeon. Suddenly, there was a sound.
Mewtwo:Who's there?
Mew: (cutely) Mew.
???: Ha ha ha.......
A black beam of light hits Mewtwo And then disapears. Mewtwo was out cold.
Mew:(worried) Mew Mew Mew me....
???: Ha ha ha
Mew: MEW!!!
She flew away. She had to find someone that would know what she was talking
about.
Narrator: today, our heros are taking a break in viridan city. Little do they
know the true dangers of the past of the pokemon world.
Ash: How do you like it here tracey?
Tracey: It's ok, but I still like home better.
Misty: Don't you guys think we should go to Professer Oak's Lab.
Tracey: Yeah. We have to give him that GS ball.
Pikachu:Pi Pika
Togeipi: Toge,toge, piiiiiiii
Ash: Yeah, let's get going.
They start on their way to Pallet Town.
Jessie: I don't think so brats.
James: Today is the day we get your Pikachu.
Ash: No way, Pikachu isn't going with you three.
Pikachu: Pika Pi Pichu Pikachu.
Meowth: Don't give me that, Pikachu.
Suddenly, Mew came flying out of the sky and landed in front of them.
Mew: Mewww...mew.
Misty: Oh the poor thing is hurt.
Tracey: Wow! I can't believe it. that's a Mew.
James: Mew?
Jessie: Sounds really rare.
Meowth: Let's catch it.
Pikachu: Pi Pika Pi Pikachu!
Mew: Mew Mew Mew Mew!
Meowth: You remeber us? I don't remember You.
Mew then used a psychic memory attack called Soothing Waves. They all
remembered the battle on New Island, Mew, and Mewtwo.
Everyone: Hey I remember now.
Tracey: Remember what?
Ash: Is there a problem.
Mew : Mew MEw Mew Mew MEw.
Meowth: She said to follow her.
Misty: Are you three coming to?
Jessie: Sure.
James: If mewtwo and mew need help.
Tracey: Who is mewtwo?
Ash: Let's go mew.
Mew: Mew.
Tracey: How do you know these rare pokemon?
They all leave tracey behind to follow Mew.
Tracey: Great, They left me behind.I know! Maril, go.
Maril: Mar maril.
Tracey: Help me find the group.
Maril: Maril? (points to trees)
Jigglypuff jumped out ready to sing.
Tracey and maril: ahhhhhhhh
They run off.
Jigglypuff: Jigglypuff( Inflates self)Chase after them.
The two finally found the group. They all look at tracey and Maril.
James: What kept you?
Jessie: Why is he out?
Tracey: When you guys ran off without me, I called out Maril to help me find
you.
They look on top the a tower that was in front of the Indgio Plateau.
Ash: Where'd that come?
Misty: That must be the new tower.
Jessie: Tower? That's a tall tower!
Tracey: What's that on top of it?
James: I don't know but it's got Mewtwo.
Mew pointed to a bridge that crossed the moat to the tower.
Meowth: We have to cross that thing!
Pikachu: Ppppiiiiiii!
Jigglypuff then ran up to them ready to sing.
All: Ahhhhhhh!!!
James: let me cross, Let me cross!
Ash: Not before me!
They all ran onto the bridge.
Jigglypuff: (Inflates self again) Jigglypuff, puff.
Ash: lets go in the towe.....
Misty: Wait look up there.
???: Who goes there? This castle belongs to me. The Black Fog.
James: The Plack Dog?
Black Fog: No the Black Fog!!!
Suddenly, a giant T.V. crashed through a cloud.
Jessie: That's a hard cloud.
Sanyo: The dream Machine is broken now sir.
Black Fog: Good Sanyo, Get the crystals.
Sanyo: I can only get one,sir.
Black Fog: Very well. send out troops to get the others.
Togepi: Toge Toge Toge.
Pikachu: Pika.
Maril: Maril rill.
Jigglypuff: puffff jiggly.
Meowth: Wow.
Mew: Mew Mew Mew MEW.
Mew flew to fight the T.V. It then Shot a beam from the the satilite dish.
Mew: Meeeeeeeeew!
Ash: Mew!
Misty: Catch her!
Tracey: I got her.
Jessie: Is she hurt?
Mew: Mew!!!
She tried to fly but couldn't.
James: She can't fly.
The black Fog: Sanyo, Make them all my slaves. Now send me home.
Sanyo: Yes sir.
He opened the gateway. The black Fog took Mewtwo in with him.
Black Fog: This pokemon looks strong, but the others look unworthy of a
fight. they will cause no threat to my plans.
He then left.
Sanyo: Well, orders are orders.
He shot a beam at them.
All: Ahhhhhh!!!
They ran off the bridge which broke in half.
Jessie: They don't do this to us.
James: Lets battle.
Another beam shot at them.
Meowth: Jump!
Tracey: What?
The six pokemon got out of the way, but the trainers were stuck into the
gateway.
Meowth: Jessie and James dropped there pokeballs.
Pikachu: Pi Pika Pikachu Pi PIka.
Sanyo: You wimpy pokemon cause no threat to masters plans. So goodbye.
All: Ahhhhhhhh!!!
Sanyo shot another beam at them all. The ground blew up.
All:Ahhhhhhhh.
Narrator: Oh no, it looks like Pikachu, Meowth,Togepi, Maril, Jigglypuff, and
mew are all blasting off, In different directions. Will they ever get back
together?Will they find their trainers? who is this mysterious Black Fog? And
Does Sanyo get HBO?
I don't know but i hope they're all ok.

 

[jb0000612]

Ok...Is this part of your PMD: A New Start story? If so, why is it separate?

 

[jetmagnumX]

This's Little Different...,PMD and Pokemon Quest Are Totally Different.

 

[jetmagnumX]

Chapter 2:Lost

Since all the Pokemon speak a different language, we decided to dubb the rest of the story into English.
We see Pikachu, alone, right outside the Viridian Forest. Who knows what will happen.
Pikachu: Whoa, what did I do last night?
He looked back to see that the path to The Indigo Plateau had been blown up.
Pikachu: ....Oh no, where's Ash?Where's my friends? I wouldn't even mind if I saw Team Rocket!....What am I saying? All I can remember is Ash and everyone being captured then....
Mew: HHHHEEEEEELLLLLPPPPP!!!!!!!!
Pikachu: Is that Mew?
Mew: Of course it's me! Get these Bone heads away from me!
Marowak: That will teach you funny girl.
Cubone: No one makes fun of my bone and gets away with it.
Pikachu: Hey, leave her alone you two. Mew, why don't you use your Psychic attack?
Mew: Uh?.... Well, you see, a funny thing happened.After the blast, I don't have enough energy and nethier do you I bet.
Pikachu: ...... We're doomed.
Marowak and Cubone: Bonemerang.
Mew: Ahhhhhh!
Pikachu: I have an idea! Jump over the bone. I'll take care of these two losers.
They both jumped over the bone just barely getting hit. Then Pikachu used his attack.
Pikachu: Quick attack.
He hit the two right in their heads.
Cubone and Marowak : Owww, let's get outta here.
The two ran away.
Mew :........ That was weird.
Pikachu: Hey, I feel stronger.
Mew : Look that bone head forgot his bone. Why don't you take it.
Pikachu: Ok. One question. Why did those guys attack you?
Mew: All I said was get that dumb bone away from me, you bonehead. I have no clue why they attacked me.
Pikachu: Yeah, there was no reason at all.
Mew: Oh well, time to get going.
Pikachu: Right on to Pewter city.
Narrator: It looks like Pikachu and Mew have started on their way to find their friends. Is that all they will find on the road ahead? Also, Maril,
Meowth, Jigglypuff, and Togepi are lost. Will they ever get back together? I don't know but I hope they will all be Ok. What will happen? Find out next time on Pokemon Quest.

 

[jetmagnumX]

Chapter 3:
Adventurin On

We see Pikachu and Mew walking down the road to Pewter City.
Mew: Are we there yet?
Pikachu: No.
Mew: How about know?
Pikachu: No.
Mew: When will we get there?
Pikachu: Will you shut up?
Mew: If you tell me when we get there.
Pikachu: Shut up! Look we're here. Now will you shut up?!
Mew :........ Ok. Is that glow coming from Pewter Gym?
Pikachu: It is. Let's go check it out.
Narrator: What is going on? What could this glow be? Maybe it's the same glow
we have seen for a while now. I hope Pikachu and Mew will be ok.
Pikachu: Ok, Here we are.
Mew: Well, let's go inside.
They look in to see four rock pokemon with pure green eyes.
Geodude: Yes, the boss is awesome.
Graveler: Yeah, we have this whole place to our selves.
Golem: Let's have a party.
Onix: Yeah, this will be fun.
All: Party!
Pikachu: Those pokemon took over the gym. I wonder what they did to Flint?
Mew: Well, Lets get them.
Pikachu: Mew, wait!
Mew, of course, didn't listen.
Onix:Who are you.
Pikachu walked up and stood by Mew.
Golem: What sorry saps.
Graveler: I bet they can't even crush stuff.
Geodude:Let's just crush them!
Pikachu and Mew: Ahhhhhh!
They ran just barely getting hit.
???: So you want some more trouble, do you.
Mew: Who's there?
Pikachu: Who are you?
???: My name is Link. I come from Hyrule.
Mew: ......Ok.....
Pikachu: So, what do you want?
Link: You must by destroyed.
He turned around. His eyes were also green.
Pikachu: Uh.....
Mew: ....Oh!
Link: Spinning sword attack!
The ring of power hit the two.
Pikachu: Ow....... Take this! Bone Club!
Link: Ow! Fire arrow.
Mew: Hot Hot Hot! Hey, you burned my tail. Take this pounding.
Pikachu: Take this quick attack, too.
Link: Ow.... That's it. Time to finish the job. Light Arrow!!
Pikachu: Ahhhhhh........
Mew: This isn't going to happen. I won't give up, not till everyone is safe
again.
Link: good-bye.
Mew:Psybeam!
The two blast hit and blew up.
Link: No!!!,..........
They won't up seeing Link on the ground. A giant flash made him disappear.
Suddenly, a strange crystal appeared in front of the two pokemon.
Pikachu: What's that?
Mew: Isn't that one of those crystals that came from that cloud?
The crystal floated over to Pikachu. He took it and put it in a backpack he
found in the gym.
Pikachu: I wonder what these things do.
Mew: I know who we can ask.
Pikachu:Who?
Mew: When I was young, an old Poilwrath raised me before I went out on my
own. He knows everything.
Pikachu: Ok, let's go.
Mew: This way.
Narrator: What is that crystal? Can the old poilwrath tell them? What will
happen on the road ahead?
Find out next time on Pokemon Quest.

 

[jetmagnumX]

Chapter 4:
Consequences.

Today,Pikachu and Mew are walking along the path that leads them to the sewer.
Pikachu: Ok, Mew. Explain to me again. Why are we going to the sewer?
Mew: The sewer is a shortcut to my grandpa's. Will you stop asking me?
Pikachu: No! I think it's disgusting!
Mew: Well, there is a treasure down there somewhere.
Pikachu: A treasure?! In the sewer?!
Mew: Yeah, some kind gem or something.
Pikachu: Who would want that?
Unknown to the two, a stranger lurks in the shadows.
Wario: I, the greatest treasure hunter in the world, shall go down in the depths of this sewer and find the treasure.....did I just say that? Oh well,
that treasure will soon be mine. He enters the sewer just before Pikachu and Mew reach it.
Mew: Well here it is.
Pikachu: Annoying cats first.
Mew: Jolting jerks second.
Pikachu: Shut up and go already.
Mew: Fine, but I should warn you. There are ghosts down here. Spooky,scary ghosts.
Pikachu: Ha ha ha not very funny.
Mew: I'm not joking!
Pikachu: You not joking? Ha! Now there's a good one.
Mew: Cross my heart and hope to die.
Pikachu: Of all the crazy things to say!
Pikachu and Mew go into the sewer. Upon further notice, Pikachu finds out
that Mew wasn't joking.
Pikachu: You weren't joking?
Mew: Told you so but why is all this water here?
Pikachu:Hmmm....maybe because this is a sewer!
Mew: There didn't used to be.
They walked along the water. Mew looked into the water.
Mew: See that tunnel.
Pikachu: Yeah.
Mew: That's the way out.
Pikachu: Great! I guess we go swimming.
Mew: Swimming?! In the water?!
Pikachu:Nooooo in the air, of course the water!
Mew: Uh......
Pikachu: Let me guess, you don't like water.
Mew: I'm a cat, so sue me.
Pikachu: Why would you want me to do that?
Mew: I don't know.
Pikachu: Well how do you expect us to get across?
Mew: That I do know! There's a switch somewhere in here that drains the water.
Pikachu: Where?
Mew: I do not know!
Pikachu: You are so annoying.
Mew: Mewtwo said the same thing.
Pikachu: I don't blame him.
They walked until they came to a door.
Pikachu: Let's go in here.
Mew: Wait! I sense something bad in this room!
Pikachu: Oh what could it be?
He opens the door to find alot of Boos. They then combine into to one Big Boo.
Pikachu: Well, what do you know. You were right.
Both:AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Big Boo: Who open the door!
Mew:..uhhh...He did it!
Big Boo: Take this rat!
He hit him with a powerful attack that drained most of his energy.
Mew:Oh no, Pikachu!
Pikachu: I'm ok...I can...take....him....any...day.....oooooo....
Pikachu falls to the ground.
Big Boo: There. Now for you kitty cat!
Mew: Take this Psybeam.
Big Boo: Ha! Ya missed me!
Mew: (Thinking to herself)I can't do this alone. I need Pikachu's help, even if he is an annoying little rat thingy.I need to somehow give him energy. Wait! I think i know how to do something that can heal energy. Oh yeah, I remember it now.
Big Boo: Get ready to join your friend!
Mew: Oh...Energy Bubble!
She shot a bubble at pikachu.The Bubble healed him and gave him energy.
Pikachu: Whoa that felt interesting.
Big Boo: Huh how did that happen?
Pikachu: Who cares? Take this you lousy ghost. Quick attack.
Pikachu goes through Big Boo.
Pikachu: Huh?
Mew: You know, you're very dim.
Big Boo: Physical attacks don't hurt us ghosts.
Mew: Don't you know anything else?
Pikachu: I know just what to do!
Pikachu: Thunder Shock!
Mew:Psybeam!
Big Boo: NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When the attacks hit, the boo disappered.
Pikachu: Yeah! We did it!! But how did I get better?
Mew:Duh, I helped you. Now if you don't mind, let's find that switch.
Pikachu: Uh....Ok.
The two continue looking through the sewer for the switch that would drain the water. What will the two find? Find out next time on Poke'mon Quest.

 

[Mako64]

This looks like you combined a bunch of storyboards and made it fic out of them.
No pardon taken.
It can be a good story once you get in more chapters.