MY CRITIQUE
Lol, only joking. Anyway...
The starters, they're a bit odd. You may as well switch Starly with a fire type, it'll be a proper type-triangle then.
(By the way, you may also want to change Azurill's type to Water, as it's actually a Normal type- although that doesn't really matter, as it evolves into a Water type, so it's your call).
Next, your scripts. Not the scripts themselves, but the text in them- you seem to do
this
alot, which looks
pretty bad, and gets
annoying after a
while. Ease up on that, is my advice.
Next is that grass tile (not the Wild Pokemon one, the normal land/grass tile that you inserted). It looks a bit "hairy" to me. I know that Fire Red has multiple land tiles, which get's really confusing and awkward, so replacing them with just one is a fine idea, but try a more plain one- you could even use the RSE one.
And... That Murkrow sprite is a bit low- use Wichu's "Advance Sprite Position Editor" to raise it up- it can be found in the Toolbox, or search Wichu, and there should be a link in his signature.
OK, that's it. Sorry if it seems I'm criticising literally everything, I don't mean to do that. Keep up the good work :)