Monkey In Rehab
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- Seen Nov 17, 2007
Why would Giovanni push off the hero, more importantly, Giovanni WOULD NOT go himself. Instead, he would send an admin, a minor one more likely. You need to make characters more realistic.
The dead girl and the friend share the same sprite, which is confusing, unless the friend IS the dead girl. Also, Giovanni and the Rockets come out of nowhere, and no one notices them when they push off the protagonist.
Well i take your crit, but well... at the end of the day, its my comic, my idea's, my rules