if you looked at the previous posts, you'd learn that snivy, is arabaic, so thats why his grammar sucks.Well I can see a lot of things wrong with this game. The grammar...did you go to school? You must know by the age of FIVE that "I" when you're talking about yourself it's a captial? The maps are just...sorry, scabby. They are WAY to spacey. The VS sequence is scabby and probably rushed on Paint. You need to clean uip this game.
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GSorby
Although GSorby and Omega Groudon's fight scenes look a little alike, they are not the same, which means he has not stolen them.
Lashing out at someone because they gave you bad criticism really isn't the way to go.
Before flailing at someone and criticising their game for being similar to another game, remember you are making a Pokemon fan game, so your game bears resemblance to many others, including the official games.
GSorby is right on many points, like the mapping etc, it needs work, but i'm sure you know that. They are too spacious, maps seem to feel more alive if you cram them full of stuff, but leave room for the player to explore.
One turnoff for people playing your game, is spelling and grammar. People generally turn the game off if there's consistent bad spelling/grammar, so that's another issue to address.
Although GSorby may not have gone about criticising your game the right way, and suggesting how to improve things, you should listen to him. Ultimately, you're making this game for the public to play, so let the public have their input.
I'm not getting at you, I just thought it needed to be said.
Don't think his arabic, tho this is a improvement snivy.. CBF going criticism because your just going to back it down, but a improvement.
You must writea improvement
an improvement
Ok, i give up here.
You obviously just skipped past my last post which was trying to help, and decided to correct someone's grammar instead, getting some wrong yourself.
I'm gonna give a last comment, then leave this thread. But you probably won't read or listen to it anyway.
Scripts:
Try and not leave everything as default. Otherwise your game will turn out like everyone else's using Venom12's mod in terms of looks. Try learning scripting yourself, and expanding the features.
Mapping:
This has been said before, your maps are too big and empty. A house inside doesn't need a 25 x 25 map, just the default size is fine with the edges cut off. Try and fill your maps with tiles, not just the bare minimum.
You should try and listen to everyone who posts on this thread as they're trying to help. If you ignore them, well, they'll just get fed up and stop caring, like me :/
I believe Fireworks was employing sarcasm there.The maps are awesome? You didnt see awesome maps, the maps are empty, have mixed style etc they looks really bad.