Notes: I don't really have any. I'm not ecstatic about this piece, but I do feel that it's a lot better than some of the other stuffs' I've written. Lol. Anyway, just read it through.
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Title: Sober
Author: Chibi/Yetsu/Warlordess
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Forget those faces that
Feel you should be groomed
For a certain success
All they know is what they read,
What they see on their t.v.'s
It's not a reality that
People should be made to live
So shread those magazines
Flip the switch on those
Celebrity interviews
Be your own future,
That reason for living life
That your family and friends
Have helped you to achieve
Strangers set your diets, your schedule,
And make a profit of your existence
Don't let them set you away
Throw away the box they gave you
Walk away from what
Unrealistic hardships you
Are currently pressured to face
Those chains will only hold you back
...
...
...
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Notes: Usually I'd separate those lines into separate stanza's, but I just couldn't find a definite break, so it seemed better to just leave it as it is... Your opinions? =3
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Title: Sober
Author: Chibi/Yetsu/Warlordess
-
Forget those faces that
Feel you should be groomed
For a certain success
All they know is what they read,
What they see on their t.v.'s
It's not a reality that
People should be made to live
So shread those magazines
Flip the switch on those
Celebrity interviews
Be your own future,
That reason for living life
That your family and friends
Have helped you to achieve
Strangers set your diets, your schedule,
And make a profit of your existence
Don't let them set you away
Throw away the box they gave you
Walk away from what
Unrealistic hardships you
Are currently pressured to face
Those chains will only hold you back
...
...
...
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Notes: Usually I'd separate those lines into separate stanza's, but I just couldn't find a definite break, so it seemed better to just leave it as it is... Your opinions? =3