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Some Fakemon -> Critiques are so welcome

Twinkle-Chamst

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    • Seen Jun 26, 2013
    Alright, so hi guys.

    I have never been really good with sprites... especially the colors, God, I hate my coloring.

    Last time I sprited, I have to say it, I sucked really bad (like 2 years ago)
    (The first image in the attachments)

    I just started spriting again today; however, I feel so useless.
    I thought I would improve but I'm still missing something :/
    I made the second row today...
    Suggestions/critiques are so welcome! I need help with them... Especially on the chatot evolution.
    BTW, please, just constructive critiques... I want to improve, so I'd like to know WHAT I need to improve :D

    PD: Sorry for the attachment, but I still can't post links from other sites, lol.
    PD2: Hope I'm posting this on the right forum >:o! if not, I'm sorry!
     

    Spycicle

    Gentlemen.
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    • The wing on our left on the Chatot evo looks a bit off, slightly smaller than it should be. Also, a few sprites have fully coloured outlines :/
    Still good though, so keep practising! :D
     

    Twinkle-Chamst

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    Spycicle said:
    The wing on our left on the Chatot evo looks a bit off, slightly smaller than it should be. Also, a few sprites have fully coloured outlines :/
    Still good though, so keep practising! :D
    Click to expand...

    Ok, I'll try to fix the wing when I have some time this afternoon~
    And if you can, could you tell me which sprites?
    I though I was adding to much black :0

    Thanks for the help :D
     
    Sheep

    Sheep

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    • I really like these, but the way you executed the colored outlines is really hard on my eyes, especially on the first two. I noticed what you usually do for outlines is pick a color very far to the right of the color picker from your base color; as a result the color comes out very "blinding" and tough to look at. I'd recommend going a bit to the left on the color picker instead of right, so there'll be a slight mix of black/gray in your image which'll make the colors less straining. :3

    I have a tough time seeing the outline in your other sprites so I definitely say work on what colors you choose for your sprite outlines!
     

    PokeHumanManectric

    Leader of the PMD Team
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    • The one on the first set on the far right look like Maractus :3

    But the sprites are really good, as well as the ideas, and far better than mine. :P

    Keep up the good work, and you should name them too!
     

    RvBMatt

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    • Seen Jun 26, 2012
    I really liked all of these, you go into some good detail for some and it shows, good stuff
     
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