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Someone please rate mine, Thanks

What you all think ??

  • Brilliant, nothing needs doing

    Votes: 1 8.3%
  • Good, Could be better

    Votes: 1 8.3%
  • Average needs work

    Votes: 4 33.3%
  • Rubbish, How could you do that !!

    Votes: 6 50.0%

  • Total voters
    12

Mr.Mime

At Pikachu's Party
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  • Leaf Green

    Articuno lv57

    Nature - Serious

    Blizzard
    Steel wing
    Fly
    Ice Beam

    Hypno lv 58

    Nature - Brave

    Hypnosis
    Focus Punch
    Dream Eater
    Psychic

    Gyarados lv 60

    Nature - Jolly

    Fire Blast
    Thunder
    Hyber Beam
    Surf

    Beedrill lv 62

    Nature - Jolly

    Aerial Ace
    Twineedle
    Cut
    Solarbeam

    Venusaur - lv 63

    Nature - Relaxed

    Strength
    Razor leaf
    Frenzy Plant
    Rock smash

    Zapdos - lv 67

    Nature - Relaxed

    Thunder Bolt
    Shock Wave
    Fly
    Drill Peck

    Thanks
     
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  • No offence but this team isnt very good.

    Mr.Mime said:
    Articuno lv57

    Nature - Serious

    Rest
    Fly/Roar
    Reflect
    Ice Beam

    Dont use 2 moves of the same type

    Hypno lv 58

    Nature - Brave

    Hypnosis/Thunder wave
    Focus Punch
    Calm mind
    Psychic

    Dont use dream eater cause the enemy could wake up any time and you already have psychic

    Gyarados lv 60

    Nature - Jolly

    Dragon dance
    Earthquake
    Hidden power flying
    Surf/Hydro pump

    Gyarados's sp.att and hyper beam suck

    Beedrill lv 62

    Nature - Jolly

    Aerial Ace
    Twineedle
    Cut
    Solarbeam

    Ditch this guy, beedrill sucks

    Venusaur - lv 63

    Nature - Relaxed

    sleep powder
    Leech seed
    sludge bomb/razor leaf
    Something else


    Zapdos - lv 67

    Nature - Relaxed

    Thunder Bolt
    Substitute
    Thunder wave
    Drill Peck/Hidden power grass
    Hope I have helped
     

    Ham

    asdf tl;dr
    423
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    • Seen Aug 5, 2006
    ****, ANOTHER person who doesn't actually rate or fix. ****.

    Oh wait **** it's still Johnny Chan. if you don't have anything to say, get the **** out.
     
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    Spencer

    -_-
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  • Mr.Mime said:
    Leaf Green

    Articuno lv57

    Nature - Serious

    Rest/Double Edge
    Steel wing
    Fly
    Ice Beam

    Hypno lv 58

    Nature - Brave

    Hypnosis
    Light Screen/Fire Punch(If you have Emerald and got to the tutor)
    Dream Eater
    Psychic

    Gyarados lv 60

    Nature - Jolly

    Flamethrower
    Thunderbolt
    Protect
    Surf

    Beedrill lv 62

    Nature - Jolly

    Swift/Endure
    Twineedle
    Cut
    Solarbeam

    Venusaur - lv 63

    Nature - Relaxed

    Earthquake
    Razor leaf
    Frenzy Plant
    Sludge Bomb
    ^Crap, Don't teach a pokemon 2 HMs unless they are both good or the pokemon you dont use except when the HM is needed.

    Zapdos - lv 67

    Nature - Relaxed

    Thunder Bolt
    Shock Wave
    Fly
    Drill Peck
    ^Not Bad.

    Thanks
    Changes in Bold. Try and not teach the pokemon 2 of the same type moves. It isn't very good, but it is alright here and there.

    Not including my suggestions, I would say: 6/10.
     

    Alter Ego

    that evil mod from hell
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  • Johnny-Chan, what's with this strange perversion you have of calling everything you see great? <_< I'm sorry, but these movests...they're quite shabby in my opinon. Improvement suggestions in bold. Moves that I definitely don't think should be there are overlined.

    Mr.Mime said:
    Leaf Green

    Articuno lv57

    Nature - Serious

    Blizzard Water Pulse
    Steel wing Reflect
    Fly Hidden Power [Grass]/Rain Dance/Toxic
    Ice Beam

    Reflect combined with Articuno's high defense stat covers up for its x4 Rock weakness. Water Pulse is there to properly damage Fire and Rock types and Hidden Power [Grass] provides increased type coverage. Failing that, Rain Dance makes Water Pulse stronger and Toxic is always a worthwhile weakener.

    Hypno lv 58

    Nature - Brave

    Hypnosis/Thunder Wave
    Focus Punch/Brick Break
    Dream Eater Shadow Ball
    Psychic/Psych Up

    Focus Punch is strong and all, but Brick Break is more reliable. The choice between Thunder Wave and Hypnosis is a matter of taste. Thunder Wave hits far more often and does give you a significant boost, but you can never know if the opponent is fully paralyzed or not so using Focus Punch becomes a matter of luck. Psychic is all well and good, although Psych Up could give you an edge against buffers.

    Gyarados lv 60

    Nature - Jolly

    Fire Blast Earthquake
    Thunder Hidden Power [Flying]/Return
    Hyber Beam Dragon Dance
    Surf Thunder Wave/Rest

    So horribly wrong. Gyarados' Sp.Attack is lousy and the Jolly nature makes it even worse. Plus, Hyper Beam is pathetic. Proper physical attacks are the way to go.

    Beedrill lv 62

    Nature - Jolly

    Aerial Ace
    Twineedle
    Cut Sludge Bomb
    Solarbeam Swords Dance

    Beedrill is a rather weak pok?mon, but that doesn't mean it's worthless. This moveset needs some improvements though. Solarbeam without Sunny Day is a waste of turns especially with Beedrill's low Sp.Attack (Further decreased by the Jolly nature) Again, physical attacks are the way to go. And Cut should never be given to any pok?mon you actually use. There are HM slaves for that stuff.

    Venusaur - lv 63

    Nature - Relaxed

    Strength Sludge Bomb (Unless used on Beedrill)/Body Slam/Return
    Razor leaf/Earthquake (Unless used on Gyarados)
    Frenzy Plant Leech Seed
    Rock smash Sleep Powder

    Strenght and Rock Smash are both HM moves that should never be used in movesets due to the simple fact that there are better substitutes for them out there. Seeing as how Earthquake would already go to Gyarados I'd suggest giving this one Body Slam or Return, both of which are better than Strength. Also, Leech Seed is your friend. You should never discard it, ever.

    Zapdos - lv 67

    Nature - Relaxed

    Thunder Bolt
    Shock Wave Hidden Power [Grass/Ice/Water]/Light Screen
    Fly Thunder Wave
    Drill Peck

    Placing in two moves of the same type is a waste of moveset space. Drill Peck > Fly and Thunderbolt > Shock Wave so Shock Wave and Fly have to go. Hidden Power is once again there to provide type coverage, but if you don't get a favourable type to it then Light Screen can help you keep Zapdos alive a bit longer. Thunder Wave is there much for the same reason as paralysis is a considerable advantage in battle that shouldn't be underestimated.


    Thanks
     
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    Mullet

    Banned
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  • This isn't good. Fixes in bold.

    Mr.Mime said:
    Leaf Green

    Articuno lv57

    Nature - Serious

    Rest
    Reflect
    Roar

    Ice Beam

    Hypno lv 58

    Nature - Brave

    T-wave
    Light Screen
    Fire Punch

    Psychic

    I don't use Hypno

    Gyarados lv 60

    Nature - Jolly

    Dragon Dance
    Earthquake
    HP [Flying]

    Surf

    Can you say Hyper Beam is bad.

    Beedrill lv 62

    Nature - Jolly

    Aerial Ace
    Twineedle
    Cut
    Solarbeam

    No

    Venusaur - lv 63

    Nature - Relaxed

    Earthquake
    Sludge Bomb
    Leech Seed
    Sleep Powder

    You made Venasuar look really bad.


    Zapdos - lv 67

    Nature - Relaxed

    Thunder Bolt
    T-wave
    HP [Grass]

    Drill Peck

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    All in all, it was a really bad team. I didn't even bother to change the Natures because you're probally in-game, and wouldn't even bother to change them.

    By the way, Ham you didn't have much to say either. It doesn't look good to contradict yourself (I'm not trying to get people mad at me, or trying to start a Flame War).
     

    Smarties-chan

    Should've had that name change
    3,966
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    • Age 22
    • Seen Sep 12, 2015
    I'm sorry to say this, but this needs alot of work
    Mr.Mime said:
    Leaf Green

    Articuno lv57

    Nature - Serious

    Blizzard
    Steel wing
    Fly
    Ice Beam


    You should use Alter ego's set for this one


    Hypno lv 58

    Nature - Brave

    Hypnosis Thunder wave/Toxic
    Focus Punch Fire punch/ Brick break (this depends on wether you have the possibility to trade between LG and Emerald)
    Dream Eater Shadow ball/Reflect
    Psychic

    Gyarados lv 60

    Nature - Jolly

    Fire Blast
    Thunder
    Hyber Beam
    Surf


    Use ego's set for this one too

    Beedrill lv 62

    Nature - Jolly

    Aerial Ace
    Twineedle
    Cut
    Solarbeam


    The old set was a big no-no, once again use ego's set.

    Venusaur - lv 63

    Nature - Relaxed

    Strength Sludge bomb/Earthquake/Body slam/Return
    Razor leaf Leech seed
    Frenzy Plant Sleep powder
    Rock smash
    Sludge bomb/Earthquake/Body slam/Return

    *NOTE* Do not give both body slam and return, just one of them.

    Zapdos - lv 67

    Nature - Relaxed

    Thunder Bolt
    Shock Wave Hidden power [Ice/Grass]
    Fly Light screen/Substiute/Thunder wave
    Drill Peck

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