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I am in the process of writing a prequel fanfic centering around the never seen/named/only mentioned once in one episode father of Ash Ketchum. Most of what I've already wrote can be found on my site (which has more chapters/stories than the thread I had started to post but stopped since I don't have the next chapter ready). The thing is, I'm stuck. I have a vague idea as to how I want the general plotline to go, but coming up with things for the main character to over come & such is a major blocking point. I'm wanting to fill up approximately 11 chapters (more so if needed) covering 7 gym battles, an event at Mt Moon and at least one situation in which the main character & his companion take up fake names. It doesn't all have to fit into the 11 chapters, but I don't want to just go through the 7+ cities/gyms/ect with no drama et al.
The story and chapters are mostly on the site Pokemon Amber (the first link in my signature).
I have a few ideas, but I would like input, suggestions, comments, ect about them and any other possible story plot points.
Chapter 9: Tony & Delia have to get past Mt Moon - all the while possibly helping a hiker that's either claustrophobic or just affraid of caves to get some Moon Stones to evolve her two pokemon (I'm thinking them to be a Clefairy and a Jigglypuff... though I'm not sure if I should change them to a Nidorino and a Nidorina)... and I'm thinking that the hiker would either be a contest trainer or an occational performer...
Chapter 10: Then in Cerulean City, since Seaking's still pretty new to Tony's lineup, the water pokemon disobeys orders in the gym battle and Tony tries out Chikorita.... and I'm not sure if Chikorita should evolve mid-battle or them all loosing the battle and then with some training or at least a bit of ego boosting, Chikorita evolve, then a re-challenge and win at the gym. I'm not sure for either way, other than Chikorita getting nervous because most of the Cerulean City gym arena is a swimming pool due to a prior event where Chikorita fell into a fast flowing stream and needed to be rescued.
The story and chapters are mostly on the site Pokemon Amber (the first link in my signature).
I have a few ideas, but I would like input, suggestions, comments, ect about them and any other possible story plot points.
Chapter 9: Tony & Delia have to get past Mt Moon - all the while possibly helping a hiker that's either claustrophobic or just affraid of caves to get some Moon Stones to evolve her two pokemon (I'm thinking them to be a Clefairy and a Jigglypuff... though I'm not sure if I should change them to a Nidorino and a Nidorina)... and I'm thinking that the hiker would either be a contest trainer or an occational performer...
Chapter 10: Then in Cerulean City, since Seaking's still pretty new to Tony's lineup, the water pokemon disobeys orders in the gym battle and Tony tries out Chikorita.... and I'm not sure if Chikorita should evolve mid-battle or them all loosing the battle and then with some training or at least a bit of ego boosting, Chikorita evolve, then a re-challenge and win at the gym. I'm not sure for either way, other than Chikorita getting nervous because most of the Cerulean City gym arena is a swimming pool due to a prior event where Chikorita fell into a fast flowing stream and needed to be rescued.