SytheXP's Sprite Warehouse
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Xero looks very much like Neku Sakuraba. :| Just saying.
For the female character considering that you used so little back for the outlines I'm quite confused with the solid black outline for the yellow backpack and headphones.
Same goes for Tropic Scythe's black outlined white pants.
Lapras girl has 90% solid black outline, except one wonky hand which has no outline and a little of her chest.
Dusk's white bands too.
Basically you've got an over abuse of black, even though some sprites don't show this problem. It's only the ones that have heavy editing, and for me I know I'd rather not have my trainers have a large sign they are edited.
Your last set of trainers shows a somewhat overuse of black, mostly the second one, but it looks a bit better. That girl is going to fall over if she's by herself by the way. You don't separate couples, they lean on each other too much. :3
I was trying to look at all the others you put in that post but I think photobucket ate it. There is no clarity. D:
For the female character considering that you used so little back for the outlines I'm quite confused with the solid black outline for the yellow backpack and headphones.
Same goes for Tropic Scythe's black outlined white pants.
Lapras girl has 90% solid black outline, except one wonky hand which has no outline and a little of her chest.
Dusk's white bands too.
Basically you've got an over abuse of black, even though some sprites don't show this problem. It's only the ones that have heavy editing, and for me I know I'd rather not have my trainers have a large sign they are edited.
Your last set of trainers shows a somewhat overuse of black, mostly the second one, but it looks a bit better. That girl is going to fall over if she's by herself by the way. You don't separate couples, they lean on each other too much. :3
I was trying to look at all the others you put in that post but I think photobucket ate it. There is no clarity. D:
ReyRey-Pyon
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my exact thoughts
first thing when i saw that orange hair and headphones, mind mind screamed ''NEKUUUUUUUUUUU 8O!!''
same color scheme and all, >3<
as for it, the outlines are a bit too light colored on the hair, which btw, you need to work on the shading, the highlights, are fine, but it still looks a bit flat
These
specifically the first two, don't have enough shading,
the first has too much black outlining, the outlines should get darker as you move away from the light source
heres my two cents
don't spend it all in one place ya' hear? >:
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SytheXP
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Thanks for your input. Might work on those depending on if I still plan to use them or not. Also Added 3 new items to the first post. I will be reorganizing my thread here soon seeing as I plan to add more sprite/pixel works. The 3 new things are mug shots from my game I am working on, they are wip. Please let me know what you think :)