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[T] War Between Pokemon & Humans II - Severed Bonds [OOC]

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    Of course I know that. Lu mentioned that already '-.-

    And the weirdest thing is that even the co-GMs are gonna be pending :\ ...lol

    Question... since I don't think I saw it on the info... Is there a decision on some kind of HQ respectively for both sides or.... has that yet to be decided/implemented? I'm curious is all since we are going to be at war.

    I think PE's base is in Sootopolis and HR's is on Meteor Falls...
     
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    SV

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    Lol, no they won't GMs are in the RP, even if they give the crappiest SUs. They HAVE to be in the RP. lol, so they get special bypass. They may not get the position they want, but they'll get a spot. :) Not saying that any of the GMs are bad SU writers, both are fantastic!

    And yes, The Pokemon Base is in Sootopolis. The Human HQ is in Meteor Falls.
     
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    Rusty, I think you've got the sides mixed up, aren't the pokemon on the west side?

    Sootopolis is in the west... :P

    Lol, no they won't GMs are in the RP, even if they give the crappiest SUs. They HAVE to be in the RP. lol, so they get special bypass. They may not get the position they want, but they'll get a spot. :) Not saying that any of the GMs are bad SU writers, both are fantastic!

    And yes, The Pokemon Base is in Meteor Falls. The Human HQ is in Sootopoilis

    You got your sides messed up xD Its PE in Sootopolis, and HR in Meteor Falls.

    And I guess you should talk to Lu about that... O.o he did say that except him nobody else was gonna get a bypass... not even the co-GM xD
     

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  • Lol, no they won't GMs are in the RP, even if they give the crappiest SUs. They HAVE to be in the RP. lol, so they get special bypass. They may not get the position they want, but they'll get a spot. :) Not saying that any of the GMs are bad SU writers, both are fantastic!

    And yes, The Pokemon Base is in Meteor Falls. The Human HQ is in Sootopoilis

    But of course they are. XD

    And question answered. I knew it was gonna be something like that. xD Was just wondering.
     

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    lol, you're right. My bad.

    @Deep Impact, yea, like Lu's gonna deny my or SD's application...that's gonna happen.
     

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    lol, you're right. My bad.

    @Deep Impact, yea, like Lu's gonna deny my or SD's application...that's gonna happen.

    ... you never know >:3

    jk, jk. Although he did say their SUs will be pending.... which made me lol
     

    Fort PokePower

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  • Lol, I just noticed something. In the the plot Lu said that the Pokemon side was Utopia and the human side was Amity... On the map he did it the other way around X3

    Oh yes, here's my SU of epicness :3

    Pokemon SU:

    Name:
    Dartanian Quickslash

    Gender:
    Male

    Species:
    Gallade

    Rank:
    Warrior

    Age:
    15

    Special Appearance:
    Dartanian's "blade" on his head is blue with a gold tint and he's a darker shade of green.
    23sevy1.jpg


    Personality:
    Dartanian is distrustful of stranger and can act very cold and even once his trust is earned he may not be the kindest guy around. He inherited his mother's uncanny ability to 'read' others emotions. He's rather quiet most of the time, often going off on his own. If one of he feels that he or one of his friends is threatened he'll do whatever he can to defend them. He's curious about his parents and the outside world. He isn't comfortable in large crowds and if given to much attention may go berserk from the stress and his anger may get the best of him, but most of the time he is calm and level-headed.

    History:
    Dartanian's mother, Silence Quickslash the Weavile, died in the first war in the Sinnoh region. She left him in the charge of her human friend Lilac Brown, and that is the closest thing the Gallade has to a mother. All his life he has lived on a small island off the coast of the Hoenn region, never once being permitted to go to the mainland. On their little island Lilac and Dartanian have lived in peace in log cabin that the human girl built over the first few years. Dartanian doesn't know much about his parents, the only information being what Lilac has told him of his mother. Ever since he evolved at the age of 10 with the help of a dawn stone Lilac brought home he has been training himself in case another war like the one described to him breaks out.
    One crisp winter morning Lilac came back from one of her supply trips to the mainland with the terrible news of the war. Dartanian begged Lilac to let him go join his fellow Pokemon. After days of his relentless begging, she finally gave in and let him go, thinking that maybe after he saw the horrors of war he would return but not realizing that somewhere inside him there was a lust for vengeance on the humans who had caused the death for mother. Convinced he was doing the right thing and eager to see the world, Dartanian left to join the Pokemon Entente.

    Moveset (6 Max):

    -Leaf Blade
    -Earthquake
    -Psychic
    -Focus Blast
    -Stone Edge
    -Hypnosis

    Password (search the thread to find it):
    Revolution

    Others (anything special?):
    He wears a silky blue cloth around his right wrist that belonged to Silence.

    There wasn't much to put in history unless you want to hear every boring little detail of his island life XD
     
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  • [12] You can only post a maxmimum of three times every day (in 24 hours) do not write more than that or it'll be fast. Ideal speed: 1 post per day. Can be less. Not to fast please.

    I find this kind of unnecessary, because what if someone has a conversation or something of that sort going on with someone else, i.e. the one going on between Lydia and Althalos in the interrogation room near the beginning of the first one. That took way more than three posts per person, and it still didn't advance the story very much or make it go quickly. That was a personal conversation between two characters.
     

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    @zapdos926 Those are the rules. Not everyone is going to be able to keep up at the speed of which certain people can (including me). How would you feel if you suddenly come back from work, or school, and see a hundred new posts? We keep it at 3 max a day, and that rule will be enforced. Here's a few tips:

    1. Avoid situations where you have to go back and forth between people.

    2. If the situation is unavoidable and you have to interact in that way, agree with the person in advance, about the general direction the conversation will go so that you can post both of their reactions and responses in a bigger, more details post (This might require a little bunnying, but if you get the other's permission, it should be alright).

    3. Post longer, and include as much information as possible.
     

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  • I find this kind of unnecessary, because what if someone has a conversation or something of that sort going on with someone else, i.e. the one going on between Lydia and Althalos in the interrogation room near the beginning of the first one. That took way more than three posts per person, and it still didn't advance the story very much or make it go quickly. That was a personal conversation between two characters.

    Joint post?

    Perhaps we shouldn't have a post limit... maybe no more than ten a day, and maybe a minimum requirement in length(unless there's absolutely no way we can post without it being somewhat short.) like something around two good sized paragraphs? I don't know, maybe just raise it to at least five? That'd be better.

    EDIT: JUST saw Supervegeta's post, so... nevermind, I guess :S

    Also, I'm basically(this word is just in case editing is needed ;P) done with my SU.
     
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  • @zapdos926 Those are the rules. Not everyone is going to be able to keep up at the speed of which certain people can (including me). How would you feel if you suddenly come back from work, or school, and see a hundred new posts? We keep it at 3 max a day, and that rule will be enforced. Here's a few tips:

    1. Avoid situations where you have to go back and forth between people.

    2. If the situation is unavoidable and you have to interact in that way, agree with the person in advance, about the general direction the conversation will go so that you can post both of their reactions and responses in a bigger, more details post (This might require a little bunnying, but if you get the other's permission, it should be alright).

    3. Post longer, and include as much information as possible.

    Actually, I also disagree with the rule. I'd put through my input, but I guess I can't argue if the other two GMs think it is best to keep that rule on. :/

    Can I suggest combining conversations into one post? Can't recall exactly what its called... *looks it up*

    ... Joint Posts, should help keep posting at a minimum while being able to engage in large conversations/scenes; although some of these 'joint posts', I warn you, can end up being ridiculously large. More information is below.

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    ...I still wish the rule could be lifted, but since it will probably stick there I'm just explaining how this could provide some assistance in soothing your writing-crazy senses.

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    : Ninja'd. Oh well, lol.
     

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  • Name: Mark Vargas (Oorah!)

    Gender: Male

    Rank: Lieutenant (Major for previous service?)

    Class: Weapons specialist - Professional Sniper

    Age: Technically 27

    Starting weapon: Combat Rifle (Reference picture below)

    Appearance: Mark is a 6'2 male, with now, medium length light brown hair. He has a deep scar from just under his eye to the bottom of the face on his left. He has a rounded chin and a short nose. Mark has a rough beard from shaving neglect and wears dark urban camo Intercepter body armor over a black uniform with a Lambda patch on the shoulder.

    History: Mark served in the first rebellion suppression which only won by a pyrrhic victory. In Oreburgh, he picked up a scar from a weavile named Silence nad was frozen solid by the same pokemon, then stuffed in a government vault 9 levels underground in just above freezing temperatures by his spec ops team who forgot to retrieve him before evac.
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    before the war
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    Leaving home at the age of 14, he was a lone wonderer of sinnoh, he never had a pokemon, never mind one to walk with. Keeping to himself he never saw the abuse people put their pokemon through. He had been known to be a little bit of a thief when he was out of other means of getting food or water. At the age of 15, he got the luxary of being able to go to a parkour camp for half the year, all humans, in a life sized city model for practice, in *Location Classified.* When he was let out, he had mastered the art of parkour along with how to disarm atatckers, as an added bonus. Mark, unfortunetly, still was wondering, Since he never liked his parents and didn't want to go home and work the mines his whole life. He went back to a thiefs life for a 3 years. He mainly lived in an abandoned factory in Canalave City, sometimes finding enough cash to rent a motel for a couple days along with food. When he was 19, he turned his life around, he decieded to blow off some steam with the cash he just stole, and tried the shooting range. He was an really good, and became a shooting instructer, along with learning then teaching melee combat. By the time he was 24 he had a apartment in Canalave and was known at the local bar. He lived a good life till Canalave was attacked. His skills have been dampened over time but are still there if needed.
    (Don't know how long ago I wrote this^ and the one below\/, long I know I can shorten it if wanted)

    Personality: He tries to be self-less and put others needs before his still, but finding a lot of his friends and family dead has taken it's toll on his spirt. Mark tries hard to stay positive and keep the few friends he has alive. The war has given him more... Back bone and prespective, and he will stand up against commands if they arn't the right thing to do. Mark keeps a snipers cool attitude on and off the field. He has no problem with pokemon in general, and would most likely, given the chance, befriend one

    Password: Viva la 'revolution'! (Yes, I know what it means)

    CLICK ME
     
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  • I'll post my most likely to be rejected SU as soon as my roommate fixes his mistake and restores WiFi so I can post on my PC...

    @ ODST Deus Ex FTW! My character is influenced a bit by that game...
     
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    Arsenic

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  • Couldn't think of any other weapons... And don't put down your SU that you haven't even posted yet.
    And it's Deus Ex
     

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  • You actually read through all that! Hahaha! I remember it was in, I believe after you froze that room next to the sewers, It specifically says your scarred me, I just gave the scar I remembered a position on my face.

    Oh, and for all you people who are not up to date on there greek letters, Lambda is on the orange flag. Lambda indicates the radioactivity decay constant in nuclear physics and radioactivity. This constant is very simply related to the half-life of any radioactive material.
     
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  • Oh, -Nocturnal/Supervegeta/XxSweetDreamsxX, may Alec wear some sort of little earphone thing like a... bluetooth, to let him talk to others (like say one of my NPCs) when he's on the battlefield or something? Uh... or something along those lines?

    ... I've already lost track on the subject of how many people have signed up o.o
    ... I'm guessing a lot.
     
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    Hey, could I reserve a spot as a Human Lieutenant?


    Human SU:

    Name: Boston Mikkelson (But don't you dare call him that. He is often referred as Lieutenant Mikkelson)

    Gender: Male

    Rank: Lieutenant

    Class: Weapons Specialist- Sniper

    Age: 45

    Starting Weapon:
    M14 EBR with a Foldable Bi-pod, a Magnified scope and a extended barrel. The gun also has "R.I.P Logan" inscribed on it. (Referring to old character, you'll see other clarification).

    Appearance:
    capt-_price_museum_contingency11.jpg


    Additional Info:
    Height: 6 feet
    Weight: 201 pounds
    Boston has two bullet wounds in his lower back, which he sustained in the Orange Islands.

    Personality:

    Boston Mikkelson is reckless, bold and stubborn. His blunt attitude draws the ire and awe of both his allies and enemies, often displaying his "never say die" morals and solid work ethic. Boston is very headstrong and is never the one to give up on what he believes is right, often bringing the respected officer into trouble, which is how he met one of his best friends, the late Logan Johnson. Boston is a well respected officer amongst the HR, earning his stripes in the Kanto Special Forces during the Orange Island Revolution in 2015, and the great Human-Pokemon War in 2020. Boston is a influential leader, and carries leadership aspects with him. Boston has no fears remaining, and is up to any challenge, no matter how difficult the challenges may be. Boston is a Military expert, and has tons of skill and experience on the battlefield.

    History:
    The life of Boston Mikkelson began in Celadon City, Kanto. Boston had grew up in a middle class family, by normal standards anyway. Boston spent his childhood admiring the Military, wishing to one day join the men and women who fought for freedom. Boston's childhood was not spectacular in anyway, just growing up through school and life. When Boston reached the age of 18, he joined the Military, and his service began. Boston earned respect and promotions rapidly due to his loose cannon battle strategy and his daring edge, eventually landing him a spot in the Kanto Special Forces, a top tier Military force. Boston fought alongside the KSF in the Orange Island Revolution when he was 25. Boston earned a medal for bravery in the Orange Island Revolution, breaking the country free of a Tyrannic rule. After the fighting in the Orange Islands, Boston resigned from the Kanto special forces, and went to retire in the Sinnoh region. Boston lived a boring and peaceful life in Sinnoh, that is until the Great Human-Pokemon War broke out. Boston was called out to fight with the Human Republic, but the Republic was not able to save the Sinnoh Region, the region being hit with a Nuclear Bomb. After his second war, Boston migrated to Hoenn, once again trying to escape service. Boston was successful for a peaceful period of fifteen years, until emotions between the Human Republic and the Pokemon Entente were strained, bringing the two Nations to war. OF course, Boston, the cagey war veteran was called back into action, putting a start to his third war.

    Password: Revolution

    Others: None.

    My SU has been finished unless any edits are required.
     

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  • EDIT: made some changes... including more details on his weapons, changed his history, rank, and a few other things.

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    I also made a list of the enhancements with a bit more detail if the GMs want to me to post it or PM it... this character is more machine than man at this point...

    Also would like to reserve one of the two evil LoL characters. I'll have to work on his SU later (the above SU has been in the works before this thread was posted).
     
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