That's what lovers do

[Poet of Darkness]

I just made this song up but here it goes:

I say I love you
Because that's what lovers do.
I say your the prettyiest girl ever
Because that's what a lover does.
It breaks my haert that you don't love me to
And that's what happens when a lover is in love.

(Chorus X2)
I love you
but you don't love me too.
It breaks my heart
But I just go on loving you.

Whether you love me
Or whether you hate me,
I just go on loving you.
Because that's what a lover does.

 

[flame_chi]

wow! i think that this song is very good. like the other one. there r some spellings
but its still good

 

[Poet of Darkness]

Really... Where are the spelling mistakes???

 

[corral]

There are always spelling mistakes :O

 

[Anacortes]

Uhh..not being a mod but short reviews are not allowed.
Yeah whatever. It's true actually, some people who really believe in love that way do act like that. And I hope that dosen't apply to those loving something that can't love them back..
Well it was a nice poem..or song. You've improved greatly, but I suggest you make it a little longer. Good job.

 

[Satoshi's Angel]

That's a very god song/poem, espyon. I agree with Anacortes though. It needs to be a little longer.

 

[Poet of Darkness]

Oh... Thanks though! I'm glad you like it!