MeerFall
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ok first it is rated T in Literature Ratings
so there will be mild swear words and all pokemon contains vilence (mind my language)
I would like to thanks my english teacher for helping me with tense and other english stuff. Also nintendo and game freak for making me freakishly a pokemon fan! also those who support me! (plus google,microsoft and my buzy mind for making it possible and help with spelling)
My story is about a new type of pokemon. if you read it please even if you just read a chaptor could you do a reveiw because based on it will determine if the next chaptor is publised or not.
oh and in my album called 'stuff' the cover is there but if you could do a better cover or some fan art i'll be happy to put the website here for others to check out!
thats enougth of me talking a lot, here is the first chaptor 'The journey begins'!'
The adventures of Chu: the journey begins!
Welcome to a story about a Pokémon warrior's success. Pokémon warriors are humans that use a warrior pokéball. Inside they are blasted with every element to unleash their inner Pokémon. They can switch between half Pokémon and half human, to a full Pokémon body. There is a catch though, only certain humans can become a Pokémon warrior, those who have a strong inner Pokémon. I, Abra am one of them. I was attacked many years ago and it left me unable to control my legs. However I became the guardian of the warrior hut that was passed to me. Every day I sit here watching the normal, shiny, legendary or none go on to have a happy life, but this time I will witness the muti warrior rise to the challenge of Pokémon warrior champion.
*RING**RING*
*RING**RING*
"Mmmm mom get the phone" mumbled a girl with blond hair and clothes a bit too small for her.
"Alright but you got to come down for your breakfast" said a small Pichu wearing a jogging suit before she climbed along the branch to another hollow tree.
[That's my mum. She is a warrior athlete, so she runs around the forest trying to win; she also gets up at dawn to practise. She feeds me apples morning, day, night and midnight. She hardly leaves me alone to enjoy my stash of candy bars. She also wants me to 'grow big and strong', which entirely I doubt would ever happen.]
She kneeled with her head almost reaching the ceiling; she looked down at the straw bed with a mattress underneath it.
[My dad found me that mattress when I was three. My dad is a warrior wrestler, or in other words he tries to push another fat guy out of the ring. He is a third fatter then a normal Raichu, which takes a toll on any tree's branch.]
The branch squeak as a fat Raichu in a vest runs across.
"The phone is for you and your mum says to come down for breakfast or she come up here and gives ya a zap" puffed the oversized Raichu.
"Thanks dad ok you go first" said the girl. The oversized Raichu ran across the branch as it sank towards the ground, he jumped near the end and landed inside the other hollow tree. The girl started to crawl along the branch and it started to sink.
"Hurry up it about to snap!" shouted the Raichu. The girl started to stand getting ready to jump. She gave a big leap with the Raichu wrapping his tail around her wrist; she dangled from the Raichu's tail.
"This used to be easier when you were smaller" squeaked the Raichu;
"Shut up and start pulling!" shouted the girl. Eventually the Raichu was able to pull her up into the hollow tree.
[This is the 'storage' tree, where my mum puts all the apples she picks, which can feed a whole army of pichus! There is also the only phone in the forest, which my dad worked out how to work after three attempts.]
The Raichu picked it up like it was treasure and handed it to his daughter. The girl took it from his thick chubby paws and leant it against her ear.
"Hello" she said to the phone.
"Hello I just like to tell you that you been accepted to become a Pokémon warrior and to come down to the hut. See you soon" As the girl hang up she began to smile.
"Yes!" she shouted while punching the roof, "ow".
"Be careful, what is with all this shouting!" cried the Pichu.
"Mom, dad, I can be a Pokémon warrior!" shouted the girl. The Pichu gave a big long blink, but the Raichu shouted
"Hooray finally you can start your journey to become a champion!". Meanwhile the Pichu started packing her rucksack full of apples,
"Oh you can't even forage to eat, yet you are going on a journey, you can't even make a bed" mumbled the Pichu. The Raichu looked at this panicked Pichu and gave a big sigh.
"Honey she is going to be fine, she will develop the skills on her journey" Raichu whispered to the Pichu, "I though she can be a bit pathetic but don't you worry, if she has any problems she will ring us". The Pichu looked at her adored husband and whispered into his ear
"she doesn't know the number". The Raichu flinched a bit before whispering into her ear
"I will tell her the number". The Pichu looked slightly upset, before she started to cry.
"I don't want my baby leaving me, who will I talk to when you have gone to your tournament"
"honey" sighed the Raichu, "you have 10 neighbours". The Pichu gave a big sigh and gave up then argument, but did not stop packing apple until she stuffed a few Pichu sized clothes in and finally passed the rucksack to her daughter. Raichu gave a smile and a wave to his daughter; Pichu did the same but was still upset. The girl climbed down the tree, when at the bottom she waved them goodbye and ran towards the warrior hut.
Preview
Damn what the hell was that! What do they want with me? What did they call me? Is that Thunder?
If you wish to appear in my story please PM me! And ONLY PM me!
so there will be mild swear words and all pokemon contains vilence (mind my language)
I would like to thanks my english teacher for helping me with tense and other english stuff. Also nintendo and game freak for making me freakishly a pokemon fan! also those who support me! (plus google,microsoft and my buzy mind for making it possible and help with spelling)
My story is about a new type of pokemon. if you read it please even if you just read a chaptor could you do a reveiw because based on it will determine if the next chaptor is publised or not.
oh and in my album called 'stuff' the cover is there but if you could do a better cover or some fan art i'll be happy to put the website here for others to check out!
thats enougth of me talking a lot, here is the first chaptor 'The journey begins'!'
The adventures of Chu: the journey begins!
Welcome to a story about a Pokémon warrior's success. Pokémon warriors are humans that use a warrior pokéball. Inside they are blasted with every element to unleash their inner Pokémon. They can switch between half Pokémon and half human, to a full Pokémon body. There is a catch though, only certain humans can become a Pokémon warrior, those who have a strong inner Pokémon. I, Abra am one of them. I was attacked many years ago and it left me unable to control my legs. However I became the guardian of the warrior hut that was passed to me. Every day I sit here watching the normal, shiny, legendary or none go on to have a happy life, but this time I will witness the muti warrior rise to the challenge of Pokémon warrior champion.
*RING**RING*
*RING**RING*
"Mmmm mom get the phone" mumbled a girl with blond hair and clothes a bit too small for her.
"Alright but you got to come down for your breakfast" said a small Pichu wearing a jogging suit before she climbed along the branch to another hollow tree.
[That's my mum. She is a warrior athlete, so she runs around the forest trying to win; she also gets up at dawn to practise. She feeds me apples morning, day, night and midnight. She hardly leaves me alone to enjoy my stash of candy bars. She also wants me to 'grow big and strong', which entirely I doubt would ever happen.]
She kneeled with her head almost reaching the ceiling; she looked down at the straw bed with a mattress underneath it.
[My dad found me that mattress when I was three. My dad is a warrior wrestler, or in other words he tries to push another fat guy out of the ring. He is a third fatter then a normal Raichu, which takes a toll on any tree's branch.]
The branch squeak as a fat Raichu in a vest runs across.
"The phone is for you and your mum says to come down for breakfast or she come up here and gives ya a zap" puffed the oversized Raichu.
"Thanks dad ok you go first" said the girl. The oversized Raichu ran across the branch as it sank towards the ground, he jumped near the end and landed inside the other hollow tree. The girl started to crawl along the branch and it started to sink.
"Hurry up it about to snap!" shouted the Raichu. The girl started to stand getting ready to jump. She gave a big leap with the Raichu wrapping his tail around her wrist; she dangled from the Raichu's tail.
"This used to be easier when you were smaller" squeaked the Raichu;
"Shut up and start pulling!" shouted the girl. Eventually the Raichu was able to pull her up into the hollow tree.
[This is the 'storage' tree, where my mum puts all the apples she picks, which can feed a whole army of pichus! There is also the only phone in the forest, which my dad worked out how to work after three attempts.]
The Raichu picked it up like it was treasure and handed it to his daughter. The girl took it from his thick chubby paws and leant it against her ear.
"Hello" she said to the phone.
"Hello I just like to tell you that you been accepted to become a Pokémon warrior and to come down to the hut. See you soon" As the girl hang up she began to smile.
"Yes!" she shouted while punching the roof, "ow".
"Be careful, what is with all this shouting!" cried the Pichu.
"Mom, dad, I can be a Pokémon warrior!" shouted the girl. The Pichu gave a big long blink, but the Raichu shouted
"Hooray finally you can start your journey to become a champion!". Meanwhile the Pichu started packing her rucksack full of apples,
"Oh you can't even forage to eat, yet you are going on a journey, you can't even make a bed" mumbled the Pichu. The Raichu looked at this panicked Pichu and gave a big sigh.
"Honey she is going to be fine, she will develop the skills on her journey" Raichu whispered to the Pichu, "I though she can be a bit pathetic but don't you worry, if she has any problems she will ring us". The Pichu looked at her adored husband and whispered into his ear
"she doesn't know the number". The Raichu flinched a bit before whispering into her ear
"I will tell her the number". The Pichu looked slightly upset, before she started to cry.
"I don't want my baby leaving me, who will I talk to when you have gone to your tournament"
"honey" sighed the Raichu, "you have 10 neighbours". The Pichu gave a big sigh and gave up then argument, but did not stop packing apple until she stuffed a few Pichu sized clothes in and finally passed the rucksack to her daughter. Raichu gave a smile and a wave to his daughter; Pichu did the same but was still upset. The girl climbed down the tree, when at the bottom she waved them goodbye and ran towards the warrior hut.
Preview
Damn what the hell was that! What do they want with me? What did they call me? Is that Thunder?
If you wish to appear in my story please PM me! And ONLY PM me!
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