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The Adventures of Overlord & Leafeon

Overlord IX

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    If Im not too busy working on my Febuary entry or school work,I'll be busting out some home-made comics. Very quick for that matter. Anyway its the first ones im doing so tell me what u think of them. If its good,I may do more. ^^

    Safe Part 1
    Safe Part 2
    Surf's up! NEW! 19/2/06
     
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    aragornbird

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    Aaw, cute. It's like Tom and Jerry only with your own original characters.


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    Overlord IX

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    Thx guys! I've finished the related but slightly unrelated Safe part 2!

    Not as good as the first one. You can spot some very obvious flaws in the comic,but still,enjoy! =)
     

    Cookie luvs Green

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    These are so cute!! XDD I agree with aragornbird that these are like Tom and Jerry cartoons x3

    I can't believe you chose mushroom-picking for something Leafeon to do XD I dunno why that really suprised me, but I loved that a lot XD

    You produce really neat lines, without the use of too much varied line thickness. Which fits here very well since it gives a simple clean look in my opinion. :3

    I love the comical expressions on Overload on the first comic x3 and the mushroom falling off the basket is too adorable |D I dunno why.

    There are some anatomical errors in the comics, a noticable one is in the second comic on the first panel, Overload's arm looks a bit curvy in a way. Try looking yourself in the mirror facing sideways with that pose :3 There are few other mistakes I found but you said these are quickly done, so I will not really complain x3 These look pretty good anyways so you don't have a problem with me.

    Adorable work so far and make some more if you have the time x3
     

    Overlord IX

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    Please,do tell me if there are anymore mistakes i didnt notice. This way i can improve my comics further. Anyway thx for the comments guys! u guys are the best!

    This just in,the new episode called Surf's up! Do enjoy,and pls comment! ^^
     

    Overlord IX

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    Thx man! ^^ As long as i still have enough brain juice in me,I may continue making more. But currently Im getting inspiration from other artist far more greater than me.
    *takes a can of extra large pepsi*
     
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