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Batesy's Short Stury Thread
This thread will be filled with short sturies (stories) made by me. Enjoy. Any feedback and constructive criticsm will be welcome on this thread.Chapter 1: The Man And His Wife
WARNING: PG for Sexual References.
In a small community, in a small town, lived a man and his wife. The man and his wife were Christians who had been married for many years.
One day a woman came over looking for the man's wife. The man had been faithful to his wife for the years they were married until this moment.
The new woman looked really beautiful. Long blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, and her bright red top revealed a bit of clevage.
The man invited this beautiful woman in and they talked for a while. The man introduced himself and explained his wife was out at a cenima for work.
Later that evening, the woman was cold and tired. So the man brought her to his bed. The woman asked if he could come in too. The man could not resist her beauty and hopped in.
When the man's wife came home, she looked around and walked into the bedroom. She gasped as she saw her husband and her best friend in the same bed and naked.
The woman left and the man was thrown out of the house. He took a while to think about what he had done and prayed to God for His and the man's wife's forgiveness.
The next morning, the man's wife came out. Before the man could say anything the wife said "I forgive you!". The two hugged eachother and walked back into the house.
***
Later that day, again, the man's wife was out at a cenima.. And yet again,
another beautiful woman came to the door. This time she had short red hair and sunglasses. She wore a blue top exactly like the last one's.
Again, they talked and again, the woman was tired and the man showed her to his bedroom. Again, the woman asked him to get in. The man could not resist and jumped in too.
Again, the man's wife came home and found the two. Again, they were out of the house.
Again, the man prayed to God, this time as well as asking for forgiveness, he asked for resistence to any women that came along. And to make sure he'd never sin again, he asked that if he did it once more, the Lord would strike him dead with lightning.
The next morning the man's wife came out and the first words out of her lips were "I forgive you".
***
Later that same day, the man's wife was going to her final cenima. This meant the man would be able to live if no women came that day and he slept with them.
However, the most beautiful woman he had ever seen in the world came to the door. Both were attracted to each other immediately.
"Do you wanna make out?" she asked in her seductive voice. She was REALLY attracted to the man.
The man tried to resist but couldn't. Just as they began kissing, some lightning struck the man and turned him into ash. The woman looked at the ashes, and then left the house.
***
The man was in a place that was too difficult to describe. No word would be able to describe the place.
The dead man saw another man and knew what it was about. The new man walked up to him and before he could say anything, the dead man spoke: "I know what I have done wrong. I am ready to accept my fate!"
The new man nodded and some stairs opened up. The dead man could feel the extreme heat and was quite worried.
Two creatures came up from the stairs. These two were too horrible to describe. If anyone alive saw them, it would definitely scare them to death.
They dragged the man down the stairs into a REALLY horrible place. WAY too horrible to describe. And sitting on a fiery throne was a creature that would be impossible to describe. The man screamed as the monster began it's work. The man knew who it was. The devil. Torture for eternity was what he deserved. At least, that was what he thought.
***
A few years later, the man's wife died. The man was watching her walk up to the same man he saw when he died. The devil was torturing his emotions. However it did not work. For the first time in that place he was in, he was happy. Because a man, too powerful to describe, was walking his wife through the golden gates of Heaven. She made it to the ultimate location!
The man smiled and then sighed as he continued his eternity of punishment.
THE END
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