The Pok?mon Journey by Pikachu1125

[Pikachu1125]

Hey, here's the comic I made last year. I posted it at SPPf, but not here, so here ya go. Critizism and suggestion appriated.

Intro
1-Shoot! I'm late for a day!
2-Get fired up!
3-Enraged Vigoroth
4-Team Rocket attacks Shauna
5-Jase is Targeted, forever
6-Bug Catching Contest Part I
7-Bug Catching Contest Part II
8-Saved by Corie

Jase VS Corie(WARNING: SPOILER!!!)

I hope you like them, too bad I'm not motivated to continue, I wanna, but I'm too lazy :(.

Credit(s):
Semi Juggalo for Pikachu
Soara for Wartortle and Clefairy
(If I forgot to credit anyone, tell me. Afterall I made this last year :P .

 

[Latias Lover!]

The bad thing is that you don't really have a background, and the Pokemon attacks are from MS Paint colors.

 

[Champion Taylor]

Pretty good. I had a good time reading it. I think you should continue with the series.

 

[QFred]

I think it's really cool!!!!

Does he got to be the new TR leader???

 

[Shinin]

No backgrounds, wrong sprite style. Also it's a pretty bad comic with some grammar errors. 3/10.

 

[obelisk-kun]

way way way to blurry 0/10

 

[Draik]

I've seen that sprite somewhere.....and does that look like Jeremy?

 

[Pikachu1125]

I've seen that sprite somewhere.....and does that look like Jeremy?

Did you mean the team rocket guy? I remembered I got it from somewhere and edited it, do you know who made it? So I can give that person credit.

Yeah everyone, I accept your critizisms saying "it sucks". It was made right after I learned how to sprite last year, so... :nervous:

 

[~Amethyst_Callista_Moon~]

way way way to blurry 0/10

There's suppose to be a button that you click and the strip will be clearer.

Anyway, it's pretty good for a comic. 9/10

 

[Darts]

You should make more. 10/10

 

[GoldenHouou]

I like it! I`ve never learned how to make good new trainer sprites.... Anyway, I really like it. Please continue.

 

[Super Myuu]

Lol, I remember this thing XD. So long ago... You really should continue it, I'll definitely read it ^^. 10/10

~Myuu

 

[Draik]

The sprite was maade from the PC mod, PIKA2/Jeremy.

 

[Trainer Kat]

10/10 I really enjoyed it! ^.^ You should continue, it's very cute. I like the Clefairy sprite at the end.

 

[Kiktamo]

10/10 I liked it it was fun to read

 

[Kroko_Boy]

10/10 I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeaseeeeeee