Only to be cornered as the Typhlosion emerged from the ground,having used dig to get in front of Flare.Behind him,Meganium and feraligatr came up from behind,blocking his escape.The feraligatr began preparing a hydro pump,whilst typhlosion and meganium prepared an overheat and pettle dance respectively.Just as they were about to fire they're attacks,ac white beam of light struck feraligatr in the back,Knocking him out.The pokemon turned and were shocked to see another meganium! The meganium charged the still speechless pokemon(Flare included),whilst vigorously shouting"Semper Fidelus!"(OOC:this is latin for no man left behind)
1) WTC? Flare sprinted in the opposite direction to ditnus. he turned a corner whilst you were as you put it heavily injured as i tackled you injuring you more with the level of damge you would have sustained there is no way you could transform right now never mind catching up to me and pulling off those high intensity attacks.
Ditnus would be to weak. Secondly if they used dig to get in front of me flare would use dig to get away so that's not gonna happen ok? Thirdly Flare..Speachless? HELL NO if you havent noticed by now he has an answer for everything more like he would've told you off for trying to save him and that he had everything under control.
The typhlosion regained his composure and fired his overheat at the charging meganium;However,it missed as the meganium had luanched itself into the air using vine whip.The typhlosion was wide-eyed as the meganium landed on him,performing a powerful earthquake as it did so.Typhlosion was instantly K.O'd.
2) To use earthquake you have to be on the ground ergo you couldn't perform earthquake on top of him. and if you use erthquake on the floor Flare would be KO'd which would defeat your purpose of saving him.
Ditnus(as I'm sure you've guessed by now is the meganium) then noticed a bright light coming from behind.He turned and saw meganium(the bad one)using sunny day.Realizing it's intent,Ditnus quickly used ancientpower to create a sheild from the steel walls.Ditnus' prediction was correct,as a powerful solarbeam bared down on the shield a second later.To meganium's shock,Ditnus emerged from the ensueing smoke not as a meganium,but as a typhlosion.Playing on meganium's surprise,Ditnus knocked her out with typhosion's most powerful attack,blast burn.
3) Meganium doesn't learn ancient power naturaly, by breeding or through tm, also ancient power uses rocks it wouldn't work with the steel walls, there's also no way ditnus could transform into typhlosion, he was extremly injured and some how managed to become meganium but he would not hvae the stength to pull off a second transform that quickly seeing as most of his strength would have been wasted utilising meganiums moves.
Ditnus returned to his normal form,exhausted from the battle.He turned around however,when he heard a sudden clapping sound.He saw the man who had realeased the meganium,clapping.
"To beat my Natura,amazing.I am most impressed"Said Zeus(OOC:for the admins,i'm running a Deities[sp?]name theme.The german accented ladie is aphrodite,and the other one is athena)
"Eh,not so tough now,are you big man.You don't have any pokemon to defend you anymore"
Only laughter met his words,and to is horror,Zeus took out 2 more pokeballs.His fellow admins also took out 2 pokeballs
"Did you actually think we'd only have 2 pokemon?"Said Zeus as he released an espeon and a steelix.Athena in in turn released a forrestress(SP?) and an alakazam,Whilst aphrodite released a hypno and a metang
4) This should be 1 pokemon as they released 1 each.
'Kuso' thought Ditnus as he saw his opponents.'No way i can beat that many pokemon,even if i was fully rested.The cyndaquil might help,but it ain't gonna cut it.' He was panicked,knowing in all likely hood he wasn't going to make it.
'Deat Arceus,if your listening,please help the cyndaquil escape.All my life i wanted to be on a rescue team.When i finally graduated from the guld academy,i was so happy.Me and my friends were on a team toegether.it was wonderful.I'd even found love.Our first mission.An escort.The client needed us to rescue someone and insisted he come along.Our team was to large,so one of us had to stay behind. It was me who got the short end of the sick there.After that,the only available missions were bounties,and low level ones at that.Then i had to leave.My hatred of the humans was beginning to worrt the others.They were afraid i was going to snap.So i requested vacatation time,and left for the land of humans, so i could understand them.I've never gotten to rescue someone before ,so please let me fulfill my dream today.' Ditnus thought with what he assumed were his final thoughts.
5) What in all that is pokemon is this? seriously? No Pokemon/nor human knows of arceus, also why are you thinking what sounds like a prayer, which is probably a first in pokemon btw.
However,fate had other plans in store for Ditnus,as right that second,they were beset upon innumerable normal type pokemon.Their rescue had caused them to seek an exit to the compound.However,they had yet to find one.They're frustration gradually evolved into an angry frenzy,and when they happened upon the admins,they noticed the R symbol on the broaches,and immeadiately decided to vent their anger on them.The admin's pokemon however,defended them,and due the wild nature of the pokemon,the well trained pokemon of the admins were still winning despite the massive numbers advantage the normal types possess.
Ditnus knew this was his chance to escape,so he began looking for Flare so he could rescue him.
6) You've been heavily damaged, where as flare's barely got a scratch and your gonna rescue him? may want to change this to look for him
