War Torn (Rated R)

[FalconJoker]

I'm sorry. I am discontinuing this Fan Fiction.

 

[Lycaeus]

Hey Falc! I'm liking this story a lot already :D
Good use of detail, I had the image in my head. I can't wait to read more about our reigning Champ!

~ Red

 

[Scales]

A rather interesting and good start to a fanfic. I hope to see more

 

[Lycaeus]

Hmm interesting.
I wanna see how these two fire types pit against each other, and how this Eddie character is related to the Falcon we met in the Prologue ^^

 

[Lycaeus]

I like the before story but this is EPIC :D
Can't wait to read more!

 

[Lycaeus]

Aesome! Wow, I really can picture this story, every detail is amazing. I love how TR is the center villain too ^^

 

[FalconJoker]

Thank you. :) It may be awhile before I start putting Chapter Two out, but hopefully it won't take longer than a couple weeks or so, pending on how the military treats me over that time. =P

 

[Scales]

You do use a lot of vivid imagery with this fic. I am sure being in the armed service has desensitised you from depressive or death related fanfics.

Anyway I hope to see more. Lets hope the Service doesn't pull you out early

 

[Firefly17]

This fic is pretty awesome. I haven't read many pokemon war-fics up till now, but this is probably the best I have seen. Your descriptions are quite vivid, and it is easy to imagine what is happening.

I like the use of the servo-armour as well, it doesn't seem to out of place in the Pokemon world when you consider it's level of technology, despite being simalar to perhaps WH40K Space Marines.

Best of luck with this. I am looking forwad to the next chapter.

 

[FalconJoker]

I like the use of the servo-armour as well, it doesn't seem to out of place in the Pokemon world when you consider it's level of technology, despite being simalar to perhaps WH40K Space Marines.

That is actually where I got the idea. Though not EXACTLY like the armor they use in 40K, I did draw the idea from there.
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