Zorin's Fakemon Thread

[Zorin]

ZORIN's Fakemon topic :D

Yeah well since I have 15 posts now I'm opening my own thread with my fakemon. I mostly do revamps and scratches. Sometimes edits and fusions. I have been spriting for 2 years and a month now.. hope you can see that, although last time I haven't really improved.
Also, I won't understand all English and I may make some mistakes here and there, sorry for that.

OLD POST IS OLD!

Scratches:

Other:

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[maxxa]

hey welcome to pokecommunity :)
your revamps are probably the best ive seen instead of what most do which is just a recolour you have done what you should do and what i usually do which is edit the shading and the outline to a d/p standard you have done this superbly the flareon is by far the best but on the espeon you have sort of cut the leg on our left off from the rest of the body maybe take a few outline pixels off.
the scratches are mostly good the last one isnt too good the second one is mostly good except the all colour outlines on the main body the first one is the best and looks so good much better than most on the entire site may i add. in short you are a great spriter and a breath of fresh air from the rest of the site
check out my thread greachi reborn for examples of my spriting
keep it up
maxxa

 

[Zorin]

Thanks Maxxa. Your comments are really helpful. ^^
I tried to fix the Espeon though I had some trouble understanding your rates on it.

Did I improve it?

 

[Anastasia.R]

Yeah well since I have 15 posts now I'm opening my own thread with my fakemon. I mostly do revamps and scratches. Sometimes edits and fusions. I have been spriting for 2 years and a month now.. hope you can see that, although last time I haven't really improved.
Also, I won't understand all English and I may make some mistakes here and there, sorry for that.
This are my newest fakemon:
Revamps:

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Scratches:

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The 2nd scratch ... I've seen before. I liked the Espeon, but flareon needs some dark shades.

~A.R​

 

[maxxa]

Thanks Maxxa. Your comments are really helpful. ^^
I tried to fix the Espeon though I had some trouble understanding your rates on it.

Did I improve it?

thats pretty much fixed it...mind if i edit it slightly?

 

[Zorin]

@Anastasia, yeah you could've seen it before. It's an old fakemon, I just really like the concept. I've had an other account here so yeah, maybe you've seen it before.
DP Flareon doesn't have more shades.

@Maxxa, no I don't mind. Personally I don't like the Espeon, I just failed at it in so many ways and I can't fix it. Haha. :P

 

[Mike2494]

Flareon and Espeon are good. These scratches aren't bad either.

 

[Zanacross]

Wow i think That is a cool sprite looks a bit like ghastly. I like the way its cute little toung is sticking out at me =p

I think that it could have more of a black outline round the sprite

Other then that this is a really cool sprite =p

I may post on your other sprites later

 

[Zorin]

Edited it a bit. ^^
and some of my older work:

Some people might remember me. :P

 

[[NovaPirate]]

I remember the first and last of the scratches. But you did a really nice job on the revamps. A really nice job.

The Fake'Mon evo. doesn't look very dinosaur-ish. Unless of course that's the intent, adding teeth would be helpful, and tweaking the eyes.

 

[Zorin]

Thanks but what do you mean with tweaking the eyes? I don't understand you. I tried to scratch teeth in its mouth but I failed at it, I couldn't get it look right.
I'm updating my beginning post with my older work now. I would like rates on them too.

 

[axlefoley]

Nice ones mate I particularly like the squid one and the one that looks like it could be a luvdisc evo

 

[Samson]

heya KeesZ! that squid fakemon is awesooome. well done ^.^

 

[Goatman56]

I like your fakes, they all look very interesting =D.

 

[luis411100]

i realy like the octopuss one its awsome

 

[Zorin]

Thanks everyone for your posts ^^
New stuff:
Scizor Edit:

Haha I was bored xD

New scratch:

Platypus or a Duck with a weird tail? xD

 

[Dxlan]

the new ones are very good,and i really like that octopus fakemon
man i wish i could do that...

 

[Bellomence]

I love all of your fakemons, of course even the revamps. I reccomend you to make names for the fakemons, I love your fakemons, some has their own " originality and but of course, the others haven't . They're only edits from a Pokemon, but actually, I love them..... 9.4 / 10 :)

 

[Zorin]

Tbh, I can't really apreciate that... Just before you gave me a 9.4 you gave some guy with copy and paste works a 9.5. No offence but copy paste mixes and recolors don't require talent or experience as a spriter at all.

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First one is named Phantoast, second one doesn't have a name yet. Both are Fire/Ghost. I really like 'em myself.

Thanks everyone for your posts in my topic. ^^

 

[Bakun]

What about naming the second Flamtom (Flame+ Phantom)
Maybe this will help you think out another name:

Fire Stuff:
Fire
Flame
Blaze
Charcoal
Burn
Ash

Ghost stuff
Shadow
Ghost
Phantom
Dark
Scary
Boo
Night

If you put some of these together you might find a decent name like Scarash (Scary+Ash)
Hope that helps ;)