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Chapter 2 i know this is short but i didnt have alotof time. The Sneasel fell to the hard, cold forest ground. Blood splashed up from the pool under its feet. It just lay there in silence, sprawled on the forest floor. The next thing it knew it felt like it was being carried quickly...

okay this is my second fan fic. Hope you like it! I know the plot may be vague but i can assure you that i will improve as this fan fic progresses.:-) A Sneasel ran through the forest, low branches hitting it in the face. A cut from the branches was just below its eye. Blood trickled down its...

good. i liked it. i thought that this was good...you know...for a poem. keep up the good work

ok i will create the last character! Just to let u know i dont know what an rp sample is so ill post it later when i learn. sorry for the inconvience Name- Edward Elric Age-18 Gender-Male Team- Aqua Pokemon- 1. Wailord 2. Lantern 3 Chinchou 4. Vaporeon...

Can i join?! Beyblades are cool and i love the show. I dont really geta chance to watch it but my favorite charahcter was Max because i love the draciel blades.

This is intersesting i cant wait to see where it goes.

New club. :O This game is made by NAMCO(:P) and will be the greatest game since Tales of Symphonia. Looking for members. Only join if you love Tales of Symphonia and you have been waiting for a sequel to Tales opf Symphonia and its on my sig!:P

Eevee, Vaporeon, Jolteon. All the way. Umbreon is close but the attacks i learns os weak

yeah. i just edited my post. I got past that and im at the second seal. its hard and i need help. im at the place and i know how to get to the other place where you warp but I need alot of help defeating the 3 guys you play.

Ill join! I love ToS! Out of all the RPG's ive played this ranks 6th on my list. Im stuck at the place with the boats that starts with a Palmacosta :P

Spelling corrections to this in order and what you originally had in () 1. Rustboro City 2. Oran Berry (oran berry) 3. Of course (ovcuse) 4. health (heal) 5. wasn't (wasbn't) 6. blood (bleed) 7. dangerous (dangorus) 8. Grendan (grendan) 9. Latios (latios)

this one was better. still you have alot of grammar mistakes and use of happily ever after and once upon a time but other than that this is good. Microsoft word will help you with grammar!

its ok. just follow akinari's help and it should be better than it is Just one more thing, who sends out a poll that says: Why did you hate it. I would at least put it as: did you like it?

your welcome akinari! and again great stuff lily

Awesome is all i have to say. This is to good to describe what i like about it. i love it