Recent content by IceKing

Thanks for the review Bay Alexison (are you the same Bay from Serebii?). Glad you find the battles engaging! Here's the next part ***** Ophelia stood on top of a cliff. In the valley below hundreds of pokemon looked up at her adoringly. Almost every single pokemon known to man were there...

Hey - thanks for that review bobandbill, it was really helpful! Also, you are a moderator in two fanfiction forums? Ain't that a conflict of interest or something?? I'll go through and make the changes that you suggested - and good pointing out how a lot of my sentences start off with personal...

Here is Part III The Sky Battle: TROPIUS VS HONCHKROW Immediately the stadium erupted into hushed whispers. Most of the stadium had no idea what Ophelia just demanded. The few that did were even more shocked by her audacity. Even the commentator Buena was struck silent as she tried to figure...

I'm going to revive this...it's completed and there's about 6 more installments to go TROPIUS VS MISMAGIUS “Tropius, go!” “TROPHY! TROPHY!” In mid-air, a bulky dinosaur-like flying creature materialized, the color of tree bark with four great emerald palm leaves as wings and a string of...

If you guys like reading battles, this is for you. Fairly straightforward fic presented in several installment about a championship battle. The first fic I ever wrote nearly 6 years ago was this awful one about the silver cup championship battle, and this is a rewrite of it I guess. Part I In...

This is a VERY VERY VERY old two-shot of mine that I rewrote and have to present today. First part will be posted today, second part next week. PG-13 for graphic violence and some language Malevolence The desert is hot. As undoubtedly groundbreaking as this observation is, there really...

Darn you Amy getting all these reviews already! *shakes fist* I love this passage, from the very get-go you're just making this Andrew fellow seem like quite a sycophant annoying jerk. VERY refreshing from the usual average goody two-shoes main character of journey fics. He reminds me a bit of...

Why howdy there good sirs and ma'ams! Its been months since I have posted anything here. This one-shot is a brief dramaish kinda story that i had half written from years ago so I decided to go ahead and finish it at post it here. Of course, constructive criticism is always welcomed. Please enjoy...

A short, comedic ditty. Enjoy! Rated PG for a little violence It was hot. It was broiling like a lonely Jynx’s uterus. The evil sun cackled at his melting victims in the colossal coliseum below. Their flesh oozed with salty sweat, eroding the cheap wooden stands they laid back on. Far too...

(Rated R. Serious Warning-There really is some disturbing stuff in this one-shot that made me even sick to my stomach) The House (One-Shot) This is not my own work. It was found written on toilet paper at a Mental Institution where my mother works Once… There was a house. But this was no...

After reading The Onion for a month, I decided I want to start my own joke newspaper =P A good friend of mine suggested the name "The Cahoot" which I think sounds good despite not really understanding it. Beware mature themes and language at times ^^ I will have warnings attached to each...

I very much agree there. Sometimes you can choose a word that sounds all big and pretty but it just does not fit into the sentence at all. I personally use thesaurus.com as a guide to help me find the word that I'm looking for, not look for a better word.

This is based off of something that actually happened to me, advice is greatly appreciated, I know this could use some work. This is only a one-shot, rated PG-13 for mild violence/disturbingness. It was snowing. The cursed white slush was everywhere, frosting the trees, drowning the...

Hey, Frosty is back! Maybe the lounge will be livened up again with his return Good choice to start reviewing with Sike Saner, she is quite a good writer. Her other work Communication though is a huge improvement (not saying it needed it) from The Origin of Storms judging from what I read so far

Chapter 1: Experts Ophelia Hardwell was a very grumpy woman. Her uniform was not ironed, her shirt was not properly tucked in, and her eyes were ringed with dark circles. She had received a stat page to go to 250 Ozora Lane, and it was only five in the morning. The damn rookie officers couldn’t...