Recent content by Manaphyman

Yeah well that 2-3 days didn't happen. Sorry guys. I took time to advance the fic on serebii, which by the way, is three chapters from the climax. At any rate, the rewrites must go on, so here is the new Chapter 8. On Serebii, we're at Chapter 42 btw. Yep. 42. We have some catching up to do...

Remind me at a later date. College applications are calling.

Hi!

Welcome readers! You may remember the Prologue of this as my One-shot, O Come O Come Emmanuel; or you may not. I decided, after hearing a song at mass a few months ago, to continue with the concept, and write a Bible-Centric fiction including Pokemon. I have since revised O Come O Come Emmanuel...

Haha well I am quite glad you did, another reviewer is always a plus. I'm glad you liked the gym leader and Deoxys. There are plenty of mistakes, you are right about that, and I do apologize. I'm working at it with my beta, so no worries. :] I'm glad you liked the fighting, its something that...

I think I agree with Shiny Mightyena(Air Dragon) in his assertions about the safari zone and Dratini and such. To me though, its just a minor problem that could be remedied with a quick fix in the near future. I really enjoyed the clonning scene (with Growlithe), although something like vital...

You Friend Requested me...trying to make random friends are we?

I will be there in a few hours, after I umpire.

Wow, good for you, sounds like you've earned it. Congrats!

What exactly is starting to pay off, if you don't mind explaining.

FYI, new chapter again. Feel free to check it out, or leave it be, if you're too busy.

Thanks!

John was very cocky in the prologue, and he is somewhat early in the fic as well. Yet he progresses as a character, and eventually overcomes this. (My bad with the Houndour thing) Yeah, quite fillerish, but I had to throw something in there as I waited for the egg to hatch. John's friends...

Haha good to hear. I worked pretty hard on that chapter :]

Really? heh..you're probably not giving yourself enough credit.