Just noticed your fan fic and began reading it just moments ago, and got to Chapter 2. I wanted to say that I love the concept and wish this were actually made into a real story. Something I'd kinda like to suggest(If it wasn't done/suggested already), is that Ren finds a Pokemon to send home to keep his mother company. But, now I'm moving onto Chapter 2 in just a bit. Hopefully will be caught up by next week. :3