[Other FULL] «Sword Art Online: Sanctuary» [OOC/SU][T]

[OG_Haunter]

Well, we're on Floor 2 and it's currently Christmas. The average level range is around 12-15, with a few 10s, 11s, and 16s here and there (though, all things considered, the 15s and 16s are the more avid fighters). We've found the second boss, but it hasn't been engaged yet.

Also, check out the first boss fight (starting here). It'll give you a good picture of the characters...and it's just a plain awesome fight all the way through.

Wow! I checked out the boss fight and it seemed pretty awesome. I wish I was there ~_~ .

 

[Sapphire Rose]

Sorry OG~Haunter, your appearance and personality is still really short :/

I'm too ashamed to say anything more...

Don't be like that... You also have a busy life with college going on now. I shouldn't have said it like that, I'm sorry.

 

[OG_Haunter]

Sorry OG~Haunter, your appearance and personality is still really short :/



Don't be like that... You also have a busy life with college going on now. I shouldn't have said it like that, I'm sorry.

ok, thank you Pink I'll continue on with my SU and make the appearance and personality longer.

 

[OG_Haunter]

Ok, I finished editing my Appearance and Personality. I added more detail on his Appearance and changes his personality a bit, but I'm quite happy for what I changed. Hopefully I get accepted this time. :)

 

[ShinyDiamond]

Well anyway, we gotta get this RP moving already. Anyone who wants to fight against the boss, Get yo' butts in gear! ^^ Yeah, I think that sounded right to say out loud.

 

[OG_Haunter]

And I'm just sitting here waiting to get accepted. *sighs* U_U

 

[Cosmic Fury]

Stuff in red are things that I'm having trouble with, for those that read this app.

Just working on this post right now. It's only here so that I can reserve that spot. :)

Real Life Name: Tiberius Edwards
In-game name: Blaze
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Country: Texas, USA
Status: Beater

Appearance: (Pictures are allowed.)
Notable Equipment: A leaf-blade, double-edged sword by the name of [Wildfire]. This gives the relatively light blade extra momentum when swung at a foe. Another odd feature about this sword is its one and a half-handed grip, allowing for both one-handed and two-handed use. (Picture shown in hider.)

This sword has been his greatest work so far in SAO. It is made of a rare mineral drop called [mythril], that was found on the second floor. His forging skill was just high enough for him to make the sword. The sword's ability allows it to grow gradually in strength along with its wielder's level, meaning that Tiberius will likely have this sword for a long time.

Spoiler:

Personality: (atleast one paragraph long.)
History: (atleast two paragraph's long.)
Skills:

Forging (his best skill thus far)
Detection
Parry
One-Handed Straight Sword

Sword Arts​

Dragon Rage: User's combat skill temporarily changes from One-Handed Straight Sword to Two-Handed Straight Sword. Dropping all pretenses of defense, the user rapidly deals several powerful, well-placed blows at the opponent, at the cost of his own safety. This move may only be used if user's HP has dipped below 50% at any point during the battle. To begin this move, the user grips the sword hilt with both hands, pointing the blade directly at his opponent. Then, the sword glows a pale blue right before he launches his attack.

Chaos Blast: Sharply raising his Defense, Tiberius knocks an approaching foe back with a single, well-placed blow that has a high chance of critical damage. His sword glows a pale green, and he begins the move by taking a defensive stance, and pointing the sword directly at the opponent.

 

[machomuu]

@Cosmic Fury - A few things.

First, you can't have the Martial Arts skill yet, it's a quest item that has yet to be made available.

As far as Parry and Night Vision are...well, it's been...what, a month or two since the start of SAO? Given that, in the series, Kirito didn't max out his skills until much higher levels, it's really unlikely that, in the grand scheme of things, a stat would be that high. Especially considering we're on floor 2/100. Same with Forging. They might be his best stats, but they'd still be pretty low.

About Chaos Blast, it seems to specific to your character. I could understand if it were just the part about the well-placed blow and the high crit rate, but the rest seems more mysterious, not really like something you'd see in an MMO.

 

[Cosmic Fury]

Thanks for the feedback! I'll answer the issues you addressed in order.

1 & 2: Yeah, I can definitely see where you're coming from. To be honest, I wanted to get a feel of what I was writing, hence why I posted the stats and equipment first. I'll go back and correct them, since now I've got a much better idea of what I'm after.

3: As for the Sword Arts, I felt that tailoring them specific to my character would definitely make things more interesting. However, that doesn't go to say that I'm not simplifying his moves and actually refining them.

As for the rest, it'll be a bit slow, but it's a work in progress. (I've always been so darn slow with character sheets...)

 

[Sapphire Rose]

OG_Haunter Your su is much better now :) You're accepted! Welcome to the Sword Art Online Roleplay!

Cosmic Fury are you finished with your SU yet or do you still have some troubles? I see Machomuu kinda predicted what I was going to say about the rest of your SU so I guess there's no need for me to repeat that again ^^

EDIT: Oh and by the way guys. My username will change to "Rose Quartz" soon.

 

[Cosmic Fury]

Yeah, it's mostly writer's block I'm having. I'll get to completing it as soon as I'm able to, though.

 

[OG_Haunter]

I have question for my character... do I have to catch up to you guys or should he be part of the boss party already?

 

[Sapphire Rose]

I have question for my character... do I have to catch up to you guys or should he be part of the boss party already?

You can pretend to have been in this since the beginning and just join the boss fight if you want c: There's one character who has joined later than the beginning thanks to illegal stuff and that characters happens to be mine.

Now I think about it... who's turn is it to post Machomuu, Challanger and Geras?

 

[<Challenger>]

Actually I think I just posted, so whoever goes after me will be the next to post. Finally not behind!

 

[Seven kyuun]

Ish just lurking around... Don't mind me.

Although I'm a complete newbie and literally joined up today, would you mind if I submitted an SU soon, or maybe even later on today? I'm already seeing two others who want to join and a boss battle about to begin and I'm just like... lemme join, please?

If possible, I'd like to be apart of the RP after the boss battle.
Gonna waltz in after all the hard work ish done :3

NO WAIT. I'M RANTING AGAIN. Will be quiet now. ;w;

 

[Turnip]

Ish just lurking around... Don't mind me.

Although I'm a complete newbie and literally joined up today, would you mind if I submitted an SU soon, or maybe even later on today? I'm already seeing two others who want to join and a boss battle about to begin and I'm just like... lemme join, please?

If possible, I'd like to be apart of the RP after the boss battle.
Gonna waltz in after all the hard work ish done :3

NO WAIT. I'M RANTING AGAIN. Will be quiet now. ;w;

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that I thiiiiiiink there are still a few spots open. At any rate, no-one can stop you from making one :P

Also, even PCs in game don't have to take part in the boss battle, so you can easily enough post by just going about your business on floors one or two, then make the move when it's done. Also, I'll not have you insulting ranting; it's one of my favourite pasttimes ;)

TL:DR do eeeet

 

[machomuu]

You can pretend to have been in this since the beginning and just join the boss fight if you want c: There's one character who has joined later than the beginning thanks to illegal stuff and that characters happens to be mine.

Now I think about it... who's turn is it to post Machomuu, Challanger and Geras?

I think it's your turn, Lacy hasn't actually engaged the enemy yet.

 

[Seven kyuun]

GEEHH! I'm sorry for the excessive amount of formatting but I have a thing for appearances * ^ *)/
I'm also sorry that it might be short and that she's a typical kind of character DX

All well, here's my SU~

Spoiler:

Adrianna Ryuketsu || 姫さま
("Hime-sama" or "Princess")

FC: Megurine Luka

Gender: Female
Age: 16
Country: Tokyo, Japan
Status: Player

Appearance:
Like many typical manga/anime heroes, Adrianna has this distasteful eye-catching pink hair of which she simply refuses to cut. It's somewhat a pathetic pride of hers and if anything, she's happy to have the appearance of her real hair in game. The girl is of your typical height, maybe even slightly shorter and is often found wearing heels to get around this situation. Her attire, basically what it looks like in the image, is mainly brown and lined with a kind of gold-coloured thread in order to make her look that much richer. Another one of her most noticeable traits are those ice cold eyes which seem to stab your soul. They're quite large, actually, and she uses that to try and intimidate her opponents. That never works of course. Her sword, her second pride, is located on her belt towards her right and is the only thing she really carries around with everything else in her inventory. It's a rapier and is used to the advantage with speed.

Personality:
A bossy and cold kind of girl, Adrianna was born to be a princess and boy, does she act like one. Put her in a room full of other girls and her pride is sure to top all of them. Attempting to talk with her will result in a cold stare and being ignored however, if she talks to you she'll be expecting your full attention at all times. She's that kind of girl and that's the kind who doesn't stop till she gets what she wants. Confident and also extremely arrogant, this girl is never afraid to be the first person to charge or run into danger. Unless... its into a dungeon full of dark bats or whatever. Although she acts like a 'princess,' Adrianna can handle a little bit of dirt and doesn't mind staining her reputation if its for the sake of something she needs. If it benefits her, she's in. Simple as that. It's all gain and maybe even no pain for Adrianna.
Although Adrianna is gullible and weak, she acts like she has it all. Adrianna easily falls into little traps, countless times. She's easily manipulated and her only real skill is her speed in game. Everything else, including smarts, is her downfall. She's not as tough as she looks and she'll never admit it. In fact, it might be Adrianna who needs the most looking after compared to everything and everyone else. Also having a big sweet tooth, Adrianna is hopelessly in love with sweets and cake, and with the extra cup of tea, her life is complete. Whenever the girl is having a snack or a small cup of tea, she smiles more often and her personality might even turn a little sweeter as well, enjoying the company of someone else and simply having fun and chatting. This is one of the only times Adrianna will actually open up and start being 'nice' to someone.

History:
Adrianna Ryuketsu was born of both Japanese and British descent. This strange mix certainly affected her personality and upbringing. Her father, an avid game producer and designer, oh so often pushed the girl into the dark world of gaming whilst her mother, a smart business woman with a very bright future, convinced her to be a proper lady with the odd tea break or two. This resulted in the lady-like Adrianna who had a thing for gaming. Of course, the gaming side of her was more too often keep in the dark.
Whenever it comes to games, she almost instantly loses all her glory and turns into what the world might call a 'fangirl.' When SAO came out, even more so. Adrianna was able to enter a virtual world and continue being a lady despite the fact that she was in a game. It was wonderful!
In the bleak world called reality however, things had taking a turn for worse. Her once happily family was torn and she had to choose between a gamer's life and a lady's life. Her parents were getting a divorce. Hiding her grief behind an angry face, Adrianna quickly became a bully in her own school, taking it out on younger grades and taking everything she wanted by force. SAO was her sanctuary, an escape from a bleak reality like so many other people called it and so, she dived. Here she acted like she usually did but maybe even with a little more pride. When Adrianna heard that she was trapped here, potentially forever, she almost welcomed it and immediately threw away the other world called reality. Here she could be the two things she was brought up to be: a gamer and a lady both in one.

Skills:
Weapon Skill || One Handed Rapier
Combat Skill || Delay
Passive Skill || Sprint
Non Combat Skill || Musical Instrument (Violin)

Sword Arts:
> Sakura Dance
A slight three second pause before the next thrust will activate this skill. During this time, the weapon will glow a light magenta and the player will pinpoint out four areas to attack which have to link in a rhombus kind of formation. When the three seconds are up, the weapon will then proceed to slice in the opponent's chosen areas, creating a kind of sakura petal shape, pinpointing most of the pressure on the four chosen points.

> Snow's Requiem
Completely stopping the next attack and standing still for a full five seconds will activate this skill. The weapon will begin to glow turquoise and an icy chill might even be evident in the air. Then, without warning, the player will charge towards the opponent and stab them a countless number of times like a raging snow storm. This basically increases her usual attack by 50 percent and everything goes up by half whilst aim and accuracy go down by the same amount. This attack can easily be avoided by using delay and even more so easily dodged as the player can only aim for one spot after the five seconds are up.

Level: 11

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[machomuu]

About Snow's Requiem, I think, if you're unsure about that one, that you should give a set number or range of times that the attack will hit the enemy and, if it does more or less damage than a regular attack, what percent it does more or less than a regular attack. That should give the GMs (and you) a good idea as to whether it's acceptable or not.

 

[Seven kyuun]

Ah, that sounds like a good idea!
I'll see if I can rack my brain to get some numbers up there. >~<

EDIT: I think I fixed it up so it makes more sense now~