A New Professor in Town - Kanto Adventure PG13 OOC Thread

[Nakuzami]

Okay I'll add that to my list. It's funny you should mention a possible next region, as I was actually thinking about where I might want to take this RP next earlier today. :P

Unova!

Also, I pick this amazing number:

5​

 

[Zeph.]

I like the sound of Unova veryvery much 8D

 

[slls81]

Unova!

Also, I pick this amazing number:

5​

I like the sound of Unova veryvery much 8D

At this moment in time, I know literally nothing about Unova so I'm in no position to comment. I'll have to wait for the UK release of Black/White before I even contemplate it :P

@EVERYONE:
I made an update to the first post in the RP thread, since it was now over 2 years out of date :P Can everyone have a look at it and let me know what you think, and if you have any ideas about anything that could be added, taken away etc. :)

 

[I Laugh at your Misfortune!]

No Unova XD It still confuses me and I'm too poor to afford Black or White within the next century XD I vote Johto :D

I like the new first post indeed mainly because the text is a pretty colour

And I'm debating whether or not to go for the egg., seeing as I'm saving Warren's sixth spot for a certain Pokémon. But, yeah, whatever, let's go with lucky number 7 :P

 

[Nakuzami]

Oh, yeah, can my Zangoose be male? If not i'll have to edit the nickname...plus I just have problems seeing my Zangoose as a girl =/

I'm currently working on a post, will have it done tonight.

 

[slls81]

No Unova XD It still confuses me and I'm too poor to afford Black or White within the next century XD I vote Johto :D

I like the new first post indeed mainly because the text is a pretty colour

And I'm debating whether or not to go for the egg., seeing as I'm saving Warren's sixth spot for a certain Pokémon. But, yeah, whatever, let's go with lucky number 7 :P

I'm sure you voted Johto last time It's still a long way off anyway, so I'm not worrying about it too much atm. I'm more focused on upcoming events in this region :).

Yay! Wait, I thought the text was like boring and grey...

Consider yourself added to the list :)

Oh, yeah, can my Zangoose be male? If not i'll have to edit the nickname...plus I just have problems seeing my Zangoose as a girl =/

I'm currently working on a post, will have it done tonight.

Yup, I'll edit that now :)

 

[Zeph.]

Aesthetically nice first post is aesthetically nice :)

Now if you'll excuse me, I shall finish off my next post! *Flies away*

 

[Nakuzami]

I decided that I would be switching my party around a lot, so I shoved all of my pokemon onto one card. Don't worry, I don't plan to catch too many more (not anytime soon at least...)

 

[slls81]

Aesthetically nice first post is aesthetically nice :)

Now if you'll excuse me, I shall finish off my next post! *Flies away*

Thanking you :)

I decided that I would be switching my party around a lot, so I shoved all of my pokemon onto one card. Don't worry, I don't plan to catch too many more (not anytime soon at least...)

I've updated the first post :) Sorry for the delay.

On an unrelated note, is anyone getting Black & White when they finally get their English release? I finally cracked and ordered myself a copy today :P

 

[Nakuzami]

Of course I'll be getting Black and White, which means I likely won't be on PC nearly as often :P

 

[Zeph.]

I will buy Black.

Tomorrow :D

 

[I Laugh at your Misfortune!]

I will buy one of them.

Eventually :D

 

[slls81]

Random point... but guess what arrived in the post this morning :)

 

[I Laugh at your Misfortune!]

>.>

Not fair. Me wanty now.

 

[slls81]

>.>

Not fair. Me wanty now.

I haven't actually been able to play it yet. I'm making myself finish an essay before I allow myself to open it... it looks so purty though...

Maybe you could write a post to take your mind off it? :P

 

[dragonite149]

Name: Katrina Azula
Age: 12. Her birthday is 21st June.
Gender: Female
Appearance: Katrina stands at the regular height for a twelve-year-old: five foot three. Weighing in at eight stone, she is the average weight too. She has fair skin, and blue eyes. Katrina has quite a few freckles dotted about her face. Her hair, which is often tied up in a ponytail with a pink bobble, is black.

She often wears a blue short sleeved t-shirt, and denim jeans. She also likes wearing a black woolen cardigan that covers most of her arms, but she often leaves it unbuttoned. Her shoes are more often than not black, and they always fasten with laces. Katrina also needs glasses, so she wears pink ones from the 'Guess' range.


Personality: Katrina is an autistic girl, and she has been growing up 'in a bubble' most of her life. She has hardly had any friends, so she has been playing alone. So, this makes her feel more comfortable when playing alone.

One could say Katrina has two personalities; one when she is with her friends and the other when she is around strangers. This is because it is hard for her to trust people, so she feels more comfortable with friends.

The personality she has when she is with friends is an open one. She is really happy and active, and likes playing around. She's really bubbly, and likes having a laugh. Usually she is the one to start a conversation then. But she is still a little shy and cautious then.


But when Katrina is with strangers, her personality changes. Instead of being a bubbly, fun-loving girl, she is a cautious, shy girl that studies everyone. She almost never starts conversations, and she rarely joins in with them. Also, Katrina is almost always slouching against the wall when she is not with friends, watching the passers-by.


It is quite hard for Katrina to make friends, because she is quite shy. However, she often gets on with people that have things in common with her. She finds it easier to relate to them, so she feels more comfortable with them. Also, Katrina prefers being alone than with friends.

History: Long, so in spoiler.

Spoiler:

Katrina grew up in Littleroot Town. Her father worked in the Dewford City Pokemon Center, so Katrina grew up with her mother. Katrina's mother, Emily Azula, didn't know Katrina was autistic then. When Katrina could crawl, she liked playing with her family's pet Eevee, Eclaire. She often chased it while crawling, and she enjoyed that. In fact, she enjoyed playing with all Pokemon. Katrina stayed like that.

Spoiler:

However, when she had the option to play with the children in the neighbourhood, she chose not to. She stayed her distance from them, while playing with the Pokemon a lot. This happened until Katrina was seven. This was when Katrina's mother noticed Katrina was autistic.

Now that Emily Azula knew her daughter was autistic, she tryed to get Katrina to become more social, and befriend more children. She did that by inviting children that lived nearby to play at Katrina's house. But, most of the time a child came over, Katrina played alone. She only played with the child occasionally.

After a year of mostly failed attempts, Katrina's mother decided to give up, and let Katrina remain as she was, and still is. If Katrina was autistic, that was fine, not bad.

About a month before Katrina turned ten, she was sitting outside in the garden. She watched the clouds float by and thought about how she was going to be a Pokemon trainer soon, like others children were. If she was a Pokemon Trainer, she might be seen as normal, not autistic, since most children were Pokemon trainers. But as she was thinking about defeating Brawly, she saw a Poochyena crawl through the bushes. It looked like it had a hurt paw, so Katrina walked over to it and tried to tend to the paw. However, the Dark Type dog got angry, and bit Katrina when she got close.
"Ow!" she cried, as the Poochyena limped away quite quickly. Katrina began to think. There were bound to be Pokemon out there that were stronger than hers, and what if one of them attacked? She had made a decision, she did not want to become a trainer. And at that, she stayed at home until she was twelve.

When Katrina was twelve, she flicked the TV on and saw that a Pokemon League was airing from Kanto. She watched, intrigued. She thought that she could be battling there, enjoying herslef like the two trainers on TV were doing, if she had decided to become a trainer earlier.
The final move hit, and a Champion was declared. Just before Katrina could tell her mother that she wanted to be a Pokemon trainer, a mid-aged woman made an annoucement on the TV.
"The Champion of the Pokemon League got his starter Pokemon from me, Professor Maple. I am going to travel to Hoenn next, and I will be giving out starter Pokemon there. If you would like to recieve a starter Pokemon from me, just turn up in Littleroot Town on the 31st of July." she read.

Katrina rushed upstairs to tell her mother that she wanted to become a trainer. Luckily, her mother let her become a Trainer. So, on the 31st of July, she traveled to Littleroot Town to meet Professor Maple.

Starter Choice: Anything will do. Just no Magikarps, OK?
RP Sample: You can probably judge how well I RP by this SU, but if you really need one, then... *digs up old RP Posts*
One of my best RP posts

Spoiler:

The Pokeball suddenly opened, and the Pidgey flew out! It soared away, dropping a hard rock on Cirruna's head as it did so.
"Ouch! Anyway, there goes my chance at getting Luntique back. Darn Pidgeys..." Cirruna growled, trying to hold back her tears. She could not hold them in anymore, and she began crying.
"I HATE Pidgeys, and my Doduo hates me!" she bursted out angrily.

Then, Cirruna tucked up behind a smooth, brown and fairly large rock that was to the right of the main route. She always tucked up out of sight when she was really angry. It was a childhood habit. She just cried for a few minutes, ignoring the world around her. But soon, she started to think.

I won't become a Champion just sitting here. To be a Champion, I have to get up and do something. So what if I've lost my starter? He hates me, and I can easily catch a common Pokémon to replace him. So, I'll go find a Sentret or something. And I can catch a replacement Flying Type, like Spearow.

Then, Cirruna heard something in the distance.
"Duo. Do. Do~duo."
It was faint, but Cirruna could hear it quite clearly. It sounded like a Doduo! Then, Cirruna heard it again, but clearer. Cirruna looked ahead. She could see two beige beaks in the distance, then two brown heads, then a brown body. Cirruna recognised these quite clearly. They belonged to a Doduo; Luntique! Luntique came closer to Cirruna.
"Luntique, do you want to work with me now?" Cirruna asked. Luntique just turned both of his heads away at the offer. Guess I'll try reverse psychology or whatever it's called now.
"If you don't want to work with me, I'll just go catch an even more awesome Flying Type, like Spearow, to replace you," Cirruna boasted. This made Luntique take a glance at Cirruna.
"Duo," Luntique responded. He took a few steps toward Cirruna, when...

Whoosh! Another bird Pokemon soared down from the cloudless skies. It was mostly brown, with a black underbelly and red wingtips.
"Row! Spearow!" it cried as it evilly glared at Luntique. Its white talons were firmly embedded in the dirt. However, instead of facing it, Luntique backed off, hiding behind Cirruna. Cirruna ran away from the Spearow, closer to the main route. Luntique was clearly scared of it, and Cirruna couldn't beat it if her Pokemon couldn't even attack it. The Spearow soared away when Cirruna fled. Luntique sped after Cirruna, and soon overtook her. Thus, Luntique was on the main route first.

Soon after, Cirruna caught up to her Doduo.
"Luntique, do you want to be my partner?" Cirruna asked.
"Doduo!" Luntique replied enthusiastically.

"Then let's head to Cherrygrove!" Cirruna exclaimed. She began running towards Cherrygrove, but Luntique just glanced around. He was looking for something, but what? Both of his heads were looking in different directions, scanning the grass. Eventually, he saw the grass shake. He ran over to the patch, and chased out the thing shaking it. As the thing ran away from Luntique and towards Cirru, it revealed itself to be a Pidgey. As it approached Cirru, it looked up at her with curiosity.

Why did Luntique have to bring a Pidgey to me? But it is a Pokémon, so I might as well battle it. Wait, what attacks does Doduo know? Tackle seems like a no-brainer, though.

"Luntique, use your Tackle attack!" Cirru commanded, but Luntique just stared at her, confused. In that time, the Pidgey had managed to get a Tackle attack in. The charge inflicted a bit of damage to Cirru's Doduo, but Luntique could withstand it. So he doesn't know Tackle. Well, maybe Peck? A no-brainer for Pokemon with a beak.
"Luntique, try a Peck!" Cirru exclaimed. One of her Doduo's beak glew and extended, before Luntique charged beak ready to strike the TinyPidgeon Pokemon. The Pidgey retalitated with Tackle, however the Peck attack hit the Pidgey before it was able to connect with Luntique. The Pidgey was bruised by the Peck, but it survived the attack. After the Peck had hit, Luntique paused for a few seconds, before sprinting back to Cirru. The wild Flying Type used this time to kick up a cloud of dust around itself.
"Try another Peck!" Cirru cried. Her Doduo tried to strike the Pidgey with one of his beaks. The Pidgey managed to dodge, and some dust found its way into Luntique's eyes.
"Peck again, Luntique!" Cirru exclaimed. Luntique extended his beak, but he could not seem to see anything. The wild Pidgey jumped out of the dust cloud and Tackled Luntique. Then it rested for a while- it was getting tired from battling. I'm in a tough spot now. My Doduo can't attack, and Pidgey is gaining the upp-

BEEP! BEEP!

A beeping noise snapped Cirru out of her thoughts. It was her Pokedex that was beeping. Cirru pulled the red mini-encyclopedia out of her pocket. She hadn't a clue about how to use it, however. Instinctively, she held it in front of her Doduo.
Doduo, the Twin Bird Pokémon. It runs faster than it can fly. It is a Normal/Flying Type, and it has the ability Early Bird. This Doduo knows the moves Peck, Growl, Quick Attack and Mirror Move.
Mirror Move, huh? I'm sure I can work out a strategy with that. Just then, the Pidgey zoomed at Luntique, in a Tackle Attack. Also, Cirru had an idea.
"Luntique, take the attack, and send it back with Mirror Move!" she commanded. Luntique fearlessly took the attack. Then, he charged at the Pidgey with Tackle, which damged it quite a bit.

I might as well catch it for my team. The more Pokemon the better.

Cirru reached into her bag, and pulled out a Pokeball. She threw the red and white sphere at the Tinybird Pokemon, after she had increased its size. Cirru watched the Pokeball wobble...

One of my average RP posts

Spoiler:

Cirruna ran towards New Bark Town, hoping her last Repel would not expire till she got there. She had recieved two Repels from her mother, so that she would not be attcked by wild Pokemon. As she runned, she thought about her family, and that she would become a Pokemon Master and do them proud. Eventually, she reached New Bark Town. It wasn't like she expected. There was a grey wall at the edge of the city, blocking off the sea. Most of the people were in their houses, and a few were outside. The buildings were quite big, though. This contributed to the quiet yet advanced atmosphere. There was a big large building, which Cirruna assumed to be the lab where she would get her starter Pokemon.

Cirruna strolled into the lab, excited about getting her starter.
"Hello? Is the professor here? I'm Cirruna Kizan, and I'm here for my starter Pokemon," Cirruna asked.
"So you're Cirruna, huh? Well, I'm Professor Acocia, the professor of this region. And this is President Gray, the President," an eldery lady, who was next to the President, replied.
"There's only one Pokemon left for you; a Doduo. I hope you like it, since it's the only one available right now. If you don't like it, you can wait till tomorrow. But you'll be behind if you do that," Professor Acocia continued.
"I'll take Doduo. A unwanted Pokemon is better than no Pokemon!" Cirruna grinned in return. Professor Acocia handed her Doduo's Pokeball, as well as five empty ones. Cirruna also recieved a Pokedex.
"Here's Doduo, as well as some empty Pokeballs which you can use to catch Pokemon. You also recieved a Pokedex, which has information on all Pokemon," Professor Acocia replied. President Gray shook Cirruna's hand while wishing her luck on her adventure.
"Bye!" Cirruna said as she exited the lab. When she was outside, and she was standing on the path, she let Doduo out of his Pokeball.
"Hey Doduo, I think I'll call you... Luntique! It means 'two faced' in French, and you have two heads," Cirruna grinned after a long think.
"Duo!" Luntique smiled as soon as he heard his nickname. He liked it.

I hope you like it. It took a long time to finish that. Also, I feel I've gone OTT with it. Well, I go OTT in my SUs if it's a RP I really want to join.

I've finished my SU now. Hopefully I'm accepted.

Oh, and I already have both Black and White.

 

[Nakuzami]

Random point... but guess what arrived in the post this morning :)

-.- -.- -.- -.- -.- >.< >.< >.< >.< >.<

I still have to wait to go buy it tommorow morning :'( But I shall get it as soon as Gamestop opens! I mean, i'll be sitting in the parking lot, staring at the store until I see the slightest movement inside, then i'll run in like a madman and hold the cashier at gunpoint, but i'll still pay for it.

Well, maybe not exactly, but something along those lines :P

 

[slls81]

@Dragonite149 - That's the exact SU that was pending before... so I'm going to give you the same advice as I gave before. Read through the SU and check for inconsistencies... if you read my last response I even tell you where the inconsistencies are...

@Nakuzami - Haha. I haven't actually been able to play it yet, but I have just about finished my essay so should be opening it up very soon :D

 

[dragonite149]

@Dragonite149 - That's the exact SU that was pending before... so I'm going to give you the same advice as I gave before. Read through the SU and check for inconsistencies... if you read my last response I even tell you where the inconsistencies are...

1. I edited my post. So it's not exactly the same. I changed the history
2. I think I changed them all. But I might not have done.
3. I did read your last response, and I edited the personality and history sections a little.
4. I'll probably give up on Katrina and start again from scratch. I don't think I can get her to work in this RP.

EDIT:
Unfinished.
Name: Veronica Belmont
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Veronica is quite slim, having being brought up to a high-class family. She is quite tall, reaching 5 foot 2. Her skin is quite fair, and she has blue eyes. Her hair, which normally never covers her eyes, is black, and it's quite long when let down. Her hair is usually let down.

On most days, Veronica wears a black top with frilly quarter sleeves and a frilly neck hole. She also wears a grey skirt with black leopard-like markings, and black leggings.

Veronica dresses fancy all the time, even if she isn't going to a special occasion. She would prefer to wear normal clothes, however. The only reason she dresses fancy is because she is forced to.

Personality: Describe your characters personality
History: A brief history of your character (include why they didn't leave Pallet at 10)
Starter Choice: A Feebas, if possible.

 

[slls81]

1. I edited my post. So it's not exactly the same. I changed the history
2. I think I changed them all. But I might not have done.
3. I did read your last response, and I edited the personality and history sections a little.
4. I'll probably give up on Katrina and start again from scratch. I don't think I can get her to work in this RP.

1. Ah, that's my bad. I didn't realise you had edited the original post as well *feels stupid*.
2. Having re-read the SU, the only thing you really need to change is the fact you refer to Katrina as being both 12 and 13 years old in your SU, so just sort that out, and I'll accept you.

Sorry about being short with you earlier, I missed the fact you had edited the original post and just thought you were resubmitting the exact same SU again. So sorry about that :/