Dark Mike
Dark Pokémon Master
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NEWS FLASH!
A news broadcast run on every TV station played everywhere, Even on screens in the cities, repeated often in the day, to ensure everyone see's it.
"This is officer jenny at mount moon with an important announcement! We have found Dark Trainers trying to sabotage preperations for the Mount Moon tournament in the upcoming days.
We have driven them away and have called in a strong pokemon trainer to protect the workers from further disruption.
They have blown apart some of the mountain and it has caused a terrible rockslide. Luckily however, passing pokemon trainers and their pokemon were able to rescue the workers from any harm. I would like to make sure everyone is aware that these trainers are endangering people and pokemons lives and WILL be stopped! Until then, be careful on your journey to Mount Moon!"
A news broadcast run on every TV station played everywhere, Even on screens in the cities, repeated often in the day, to ensure everyone see's it.
"This is officer jenny at mount moon with an important announcement! We have found Dark Trainers trying to sabotage preperations for the Mount Moon tournament in the upcoming days.
We have driven them away and have called in a strong pokemon trainer to protect the workers from further disruption.
They have blown apart some of the mountain and it has caused a terrible rockslide. Luckily however, passing pokemon trainers and their pokemon were able to rescue the workers from any harm. I would like to make sure everyone is aware that these trainers are endangering people and pokemons lives and WILL be stopped! Until then, be careful on your journey to Mount Moon!"
Officer Jenny steps aside on the TV Screen and a couple of powerful looking pokemon trainer steps into camera view.
"Hello everyone. I am Bruno of the Elite four and this is Ranger Bill. We are here to supervise the finishing preperations of the tournament and ensure that nobody is hurt. If any dark trainers even THINK about approaching this area, they'll be sorry." Bruno announced. Bill interupted however.
"Now.. We arent here to enforce any violence. That isnt our policy. But we will simply be ensuring that Mt Moon is now a safe haven for pokemon trainers travelling from Pewter City to cerulean. The pokemon in this area will be much safer too. Not only that but the tournament can go under way and everyone will be safe!" They both nod as the news broadcast cuts.
[I will be controlling the actions and movement of any NPC characters in the story. (Dark Trainers, Bill, Bruno and Ant*-coming later in the post*, so far.) But you can speak to me via PM if you want to interact with them - Mike]
Swiftswim
Spoiler:
Your first battle with brock was very good. Though, i dont think steelix would have been so careless.
The second however... I have issues with. Graveler doesnt know Rock Tomb or Flamethrower. Graveler's rock attack is roll out.. and he knows Fire Blast as clearly shown in previous battles.
And the fact you recalled Hondour made it a very poor match. I want you to rewrite it, extend it. Make it so houndour is beat.. you wouldnt return it and put all your hopes on magikarp would you?
The third confused me. First issue is Steelix is MUCH bigger than Gyarados, end of. Brock would not be intimidated by your Gyarados, he is a determined gym leader who has seen many things. Though ninetails could be intimidated.
Another thing, Ninetails clearly does not know Flamethrower...
Overall: You can do alot better man, I know you can. Rewrite it before proceeding please. It was an exciting match but you got so many things wrong. If you don't rewrite it then we'll consider that Magikarp didnt evolve and you lost.
The second however... I have issues with. Graveler doesnt know Rock Tomb or Flamethrower. Graveler's rock attack is roll out.. and he knows Fire Blast as clearly shown in previous battles.
And the fact you recalled Hondour made it a very poor match. I want you to rewrite it, extend it. Make it so houndour is beat.. you wouldnt return it and put all your hopes on magikarp would you?
The third confused me. First issue is Steelix is MUCH bigger than Gyarados, end of. Brock would not be intimidated by your Gyarados, he is a determined gym leader who has seen many things. Though ninetails could be intimidated.
Another thing, Ninetails clearly does not know Flamethrower...
Overall: You can do alot better man, I know you can. Rewrite it before proceeding please. It was an exciting match but you got so many things wrong. If you don't rewrite it then we'll consider that Magikarp didnt evolve and you lost.
LegendaryPokeBreeder
The pokeball doesnt even shake much...
Spoiler:
...You caught Caterpie! Caterpie's attacks are: Tackle, Stringshot. Decent post. I like the way you write, but tone down your Magikarp's power please. It's not super strong it's just a normal magikarp.
HiroUey
Spoiler:
Again, the layout of your post is awful. I don't think you know how to use Speech marks properly
he shrugs it off and says" ,good job Wartortle, lets meet our new friend,"
Should be
he shrugs it off, and says "Good job Wartortle, Let's meet our new friend."
Can you see the difference?
Your pokemon are a tad more experienced but have learned nothing of true value
he shrugs it off and says" ,good job Wartortle, lets meet our new friend,"
Should be
he shrugs it off, and says "Good job Wartortle, Let's meet our new friend."
Can you see the difference?
Your pokemon are a tad more experienced but have learned nothing of true value
DARKAOZ
!! REMOVED FROM THE RP FOR LACK OF POSTS !!MIJAAN RP
Mijaan walked into his room to find a young man who wanted to practice. He was pressing some buttons and the arena turned into a grassy arena. With a lamp appearing generating light similar to powerful sunlight. It was warm.
"You're my opponent?" He said, looking over at the trainer. He remembered seeing an entry on Oak's computer system quite a while back about this guy. He started his pokemon journey a fair few months back with a Charmander.
Oak's Records:
Ant, The Multi-type trainer. Ant wants to collect a team of powerful pokemon of each type and cover their weakness.
Using this strategy he hopes to acheive great things!
Badges Obtained:
6
"Alright... Let's get this over with. 1 on 1?" Mij asked but ant remained silent, simply nodding his head whilst pulling out his pokeball. It was a blue and white pokeball. Strange to Mijaan, he'd never seen it before. He knelt down and rolled the pokeball along the floor and out burst a huge and powerful looking Ivysaur. Relishing in the heat of the simulated Sunlight, The Ivysaur seemed happy. "Saur!"
Mijaan had never encountered a grass type pokemon before, but he knew that grass types were vunerable to poison attacks.
"Princess, GO!" He shouted as princess leaped into the air from her pokeball. She stood ready to face off against Ivysaur who was busy enjoying the sunlight. Ivysaur's trainer remained quiet, smirking, waiting for Mij's first move.
"Princess, GO!" He shouted as princess leaped into the air from her pokeball. She stood ready to face off against Ivysaur who was busy enjoying the sunlight. Ivysaur's trainer remained quiet, smirking, waiting for Mij's first move.
"Alright, Poison Sting princess!" he pointed at Ivysaur who was still relishing in the sun. Facing her spines at her opponent, princess unleashed a powerful rain of poison needles at her opponent, who simply stood it's ground. Ivysaur seemed unharmed by the attack and remained under the sunlight.
"Synthesis." Ant said to his Ivysaur who began absorbing sunlight. If there were any marks on Ivysaur, they were long gone by now.
'That lamp... somehow... it's healing the Ivysaur.' Mijaan looked over at it and back at Princess who seemed concerned, stepping back. Princess knew what was coming.
"SOLARBEAM!" Ant called out and everything fell silent for a second or two.
"Synthesis." Ant said to his Ivysaur who began absorbing sunlight. If there were any marks on Ivysaur, they were long gone by now.
'That lamp... somehow... it's healing the Ivysaur.' Mijaan looked over at it and back at Princess who seemed concerned, stepping back. Princess knew what was coming.
"SOLARBEAM!" Ant called out and everything fell silent for a second or two.
And in a quick flash, an immense beam of light shot from Ivysaur and sent princess skidding through the grass in pain, eventually coming to a stop she pulled herself to her feet and stood ready. This wasnt over! She moved back in range of Ivysaur and waited for her next command.
"Give it a sand attack and scratch its face!" Mijaan ordered and Princess simply ran in for the attack. Ivysaur responded by firing off Razorleaf attacks in her direction and she dodged each one. Kicking up dirt into Ivysaur's face, it became blinded for a few seconds, enough for her to sharply drag her claws down her opponents face. Ivysaur's chin slammed into the ground from the sheer force of the attack, that was no scratch.
"Give it a sand attack and scratch its face!" Mijaan ordered and Princess simply ran in for the attack. Ivysaur responded by firing off Razorleaf attacks in her direction and she dodged each one. Kicking up dirt into Ivysaur's face, it became blinded for a few seconds, enough for her to sharply drag her claws down her opponents face. Ivysaur's chin slammed into the ground from the sheer force of the attack, that was no scratch.
"That was slash, not scratch." Ant announced to Mijaan who was still looking on in awe. "Your Nidorina has learned a new move."
'Another new move?' Mijaan pondered 'Nice.. Let's use it again!'
"SLASH!" Mijaan shouted, Ivysaur had not yet recovered and took another slash to the face, the slash came from the right instead of above which sent Ivysaur flying a few feet away and crashing into the ground. As it flew however, it shot out vines at Princess' front legs and lifted her into the air. Struggling she cried out. "NIDO!"
"SLASH!" Mijaan shouted, Ivysaur had not yet recovered and took another slash to the face, the slash came from the right instead of above which sent Ivysaur flying a few feet away and crashing into the ground. As it flew however, it shot out vines at Princess' front legs and lifted her into the air. Struggling she cried out. "NIDO!"
"Body Slam Ivysaur!" Ant announced, and by a combination of it's Vine's pulling Princess towards it and the strength of it's body. They collided and Princess was hit hard. Princess pulled herself to her feet but as she did so, ivysaur simpled tackled into her side and knocked her back down. Then with one final Solarbeam, smashed Princess into the wall. She was done for.
"Princess re-" Mijaan pointed his pokeball at his pokemon but she avoided the beam of light. Slowly crawling out of the crater she left behind her, Princess's eyes glowed blue.
"Princess re-" Mijaan pointed his pokeball at his pokemon but she avoided the beam of light. Slowly crawling out of the crater she left behind her, Princess's eyes glowed blue.
'What?' Mijaan looked around him as the grass began to freeze over. Nidorina stood back on her hind legs and shot out an amazingly powerful Ice Beam attack at Ivysaur who took the attack full on. This attack was incredibly effective and both pokemon simply fell to the ground, KO'd.
It was a draw! Both trainers returned their pokemon.
Mijaan walked towards the exit without saying a word as Ant watched on, he went through the door and closed it behind him to find Shelby had watched the end of their match.
It was a draw! Both trainers returned their pokemon.
Mijaan walked towards the exit without saying a word as Ant watched on, he went through the door and closed it behind him to find Shelby had watched the end of their match.
"That pikachu was no trouble for you right Marshtomp?" She smiled as she looked down at her new pokemon happily, who responded with a grin calling out its own name proudly. She looked back at Mijaan who seemed to be lost in emotion again.
"Princess is stronger than I am!" Mijaan looked at shelby who seemed confused by this. "I mean... Her fighting spirit. I don't think i have one." Mijaan just turned to walk away as Shelby and marshtomp followed.
"I'm sure you just need to light it." Shelby said "Once you get that fire burning inside.. You'll be unstoppable!" She grinned and put a hand on Mijaan's shoulder.. Who closed his eyes and just continued to walk. They left the building and looked around. It was almost evening by now
"Princess is stronger than I am!" Mijaan looked at shelby who seemed confused by this. "I mean... Her fighting spirit. I don't think i have one." Mijaan just turned to walk away as Shelby and marshtomp followed.
"I'm sure you just need to light it." Shelby said "Once you get that fire burning inside.. You'll be unstoppable!" She grinned and put a hand on Mijaan's shoulder.. Who closed his eyes and just continued to walk. They left the building and looked around. It was almost evening by now
'Slash and Ice Beam?' he thought to himself for a while 'I didnt know she could even learn those attacks! How strange...'
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