Blue Angel
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Well, I tried to make it sensical. The said Charmander got between the armored segments and delivered a close-range Ember to a patch of the inner body...and the pain from the hit made the Steelix pass out. And two pages later the Charmander nearly gets beaten by a Spearow.
Urgh...now I want to rewrite it...but I've done that too many times and I just need to finish this fic... -glares at Fuega-
LOL, I know how you feel. My story is so complex; I have so many plot issues, which leads to an "identity" problem for my main character. If I don't know where he is from because of the plot, then I can't identify him.
I am feeling discouraged, but that is probably from being dragged around shopping, little sleep, book report, chores, school starting soon... It's all annoying.