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    And this is why I don't really post in the FFL anymore. Too many disjointed conversations. If it only slightly relates to the topic, chances are, you might want to find a different topic to attach it to. It makes one feel like you could pay a bit more attention to what's being said.
    *Looks at how the topic went from research on fanfics to Sentret flamethrowers again to animal and animals heights to products in the Pokemonworld to getting reviews to Konekodemon to sarcasm and then also sees separate conversations on whether gay characters are allowed in the Pokemon world to the franchise*

    ...my head hurts now. D: This is what I get for being away playing SS. D:

    Yeahhhhh...sorry to backtrack a bit, but I think we all should try to talk about a couple topics at a time and not branch off. Then again, it seems as if I'm being serious. D: Maybe. For now I'll join a couple conversations here real quick:

    Well, after careful deliberation, you may. So long as you videotape it so I can see what happens. I just prefer the fun happening while I'm here so I can make bets on who will win as you fight each other TO THE DEATH for the amusement of the moderator.

    There are times I want to call myself a monorail.

    If you are, please be on the level!



    This is best vid I can find of that song. D:


    Bad Solovino. What's with all of you coming up with the dirty thoughts? :c
    If I may...

    Caterpie evolves into Metapod!
    Metapod uses Harden!
    *is repeatedly shot with a .45*
    *blows the smoke from the gun after pulling a Jacob*

    When you take Booze and mike it with coke, I guess. I just hope its coke as in soft drink and not drugs.

    Astinus, at this rate, this thread is going to be to be rated PG-13
    Dan Brown believes there's drugs in the coke. D: *been reading Lost Symbol the past few days*
     

    Misheard Whisper

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    That book is sitting on my bookshelf right now. I swear, it's watching me. I should start reading it. Is it any good?

    Also, I love Clair. Not like amar, more like encantar, but still, the point is there. Best Gym Leader ever.
     

    Bay

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    That book is sitting on my bookshelf right now. I swear, it's watching me. I should start reading it. Is it any good?

    Also, I love Clair. Not like amar, more like encantar, but still, the point is there. Best Gym Leader ever.
    It's quite good and yes, you should start reading it! :3 It's slightly different than the other two books in some ways if you think about it, but at the same time it is similar to Angels and Demons. XD

    Also, agree Clair is the best Gym Leader ever. However, dang it her Kindgra is a beast! Both Hydro Pump and Hyper Beam! D: Should have gotten myself a Pokemon that can learn electric moves. >.>
     

    Elite Overlord LeSabre™

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    Do you think 'real world' products, events and people/animals have a place in Pokemon fanfiction? Do you include them in your own fics?
    Considering that my stories are riddled with real world references I'm going to say a resounding yes.

    Also Jasmine is the ultimate Gym Leader.
     

    Misheard Whisper

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    @ Bay: Lapras is your friend. Ice Beam for the Dragonair (x2), get something else to deal with Gyarados, and then Perish Song the Kingdra and hope you survive the three turns. :D

    @ LeSabre: Jasmine is also pwnage, as is Whitney. (pattern much? XD) But I like Clair the best, perhaps due to my love of Dragon-types.
     

    Giratina ♀

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    I was more of a Cyberchase watcher.

    GIRATINA APPROVES OF THIS SENTENCE. :D
    /liked both?


    Do you think 'real world' products, events and people/animals have a place in Pokemon fanfiction? Do you include them in your own fics?
    I think that the Pokémon World is a separate universe from the Real World, and so only animals and products could find a place in my Pokémon World. If there's any mention of animals, though, it will be quick and not dwelled upon.

    Also, I love Clair. Not like amar, more like encantar, but still, the point is there. Best Gym Leader ever.
    Sugar-fueled manchild Lance forever plz. |D
     

    Buoysel

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    It's quite good and yes, you should start reading it! :3 It's slightly different than the other two books in some ways if you think about it, but at the same time it is similar to Angels and Demons. XD

    Also, agree Clair is the best Gym Leader ever. However, dang it her Kindgra is a beast! Both Hydro Pump and Hyper Beam! D: Should have gotten myself a Pokemon that can learn electric moves. >.>

    I'm glad I'm not the only one stuck on her. Soul Silver seems to be robbing me off all of my free time. Yet it doesn't seem to bother me that much. D: (It has captured my Soul D:)
     

    Venia Silente

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    Astinus said:
    Bad Solovino

    Ummm...What? I'm pretty lovable! It was Bay who came with the idea of the dirty thoughts! And you gave him the idea! Honest! ;) + awesomesmiley.

    Misheard Whisper said:
    Also, I love Clair. Not like amar, more like encantar, but still, the point is there. Best Gym Leader ever.
    Oh thanks for the spanish-based clarification, Misheard Whisper! I share some of the sentiment -- best female Gym Leader ever (for some reason I could never grasp the charm on Jasmine...) and in the Special manga she whips it good. In my case however is more about desear than it is about encantar.

    Astinus said:
    So long as you videotape it so I can see what happens. I just prefer the fun happening while I'm here so I can make bets on who will win as you fight each other TO THE DEATH for the amusement of the moderator.
    ...And we shall proceeeeeeeeeeeeeed!

    Honest, this place is so weird what with all the conversations taking place at once and people placing bets on who wins a debate between Redstar and anyone. And what with some of you enjoying HG&SS now... :tired:
     

    Miz en Scène

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    ...And we shall proceeeeeeeeeeeeeed!
    Unless we begin to procrastinate. Speaking of which, the orgy idea died again didn't it... D:

    And what with some of you enjoying HG&SS now... :tired:
    Lol, I'm not going to get bothered by it. Not going to...
    *goes of to play Crystal*

    It seems activity has died down a bit. I'm wondering if it'll pick up during Easter?
     
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    I'm gonna have to agree with Bay on the conversations. Things are moving way too fast that conversations fall onto earlier pages way before everyone could have a chance to respond to them.

    I feel as if I should propose the rule of the OC DCC that says you aren't allowed to randomly change the subject. The new subject has to be related to the old subject. I really never posted in the DCC. (Last time I did was probably way back in 2006.) I'm not sure how things work there, but I think it's time that some sort of ruling was tossed into this thread.

    Otherwise, this thread moves way too fast, and gets way too random. If things continue on like this, I'm afraid I might have to restart this thread entirely with a list of rules specific for this thread in the first post. This is supposed to be discussing fanfiction, and things have gotten so bad that people I thought were friends are complaining about things behind my back.

    Also, Bay, that monorail song was exactly what I was thinking of.
     

    Miz en Scène

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    Maybe modify the first post and incorporate it into the rules instead of restarting the FFL?

    Apart from that, I'm in agreement with Astinus, Bay, and Jax on this. Partly from the way that Astinus explained it. I think that we need some sort of balance in between bold topics, fiction discussion, and general randomness. We can't be random and mad all the time I suppose.

    Also, what Astinus said is another reason why I sometimes take a long time in between posting here...

    That said, to bring back the conversation,
    What's your usual style of reviewing?
    Style referring to the format in which you do a full review.
     

    Buoysel

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    Ummm...What? I'm pretty lovable! It was Bay who came with the idea of the dirty thoughts! And you gave him the idea! Honest! ;) + awesomesmiley.

    No no, Then she can blame me for the reminding. No... just no. BAD Solovino!

    I feel as if I should propose the rule of the OC DCC that says you aren't allowed to randomly change the subject. The new subject has to be related to the old subject.


    I has a question: Not trying to be a pain the arse, but I want to ask this question so I don't get my arse in trouble.

    What if we are gone for a couple of days? Am I allowed to answer/ talk about something form when I left or do I have to only talk about what is current?
     

    Miz en Scène

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    What if we are gone for a couple of days? Am I allowed to answer/ talk about something form when I left or do I have to only talk about what is current?
    Well, I would suggest that we'd have to comply with the current topic since then we'd be derailing the one at hand...
     

    Misheard Whisper

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    Oh thanks for the spanish-based clarification, Misheard Whisper! I share some of the sentiment -- best female Gym Leader ever (for some reason I could never grasp the charm on Jasmine...) and in the Special manga she whips it good. In my case however is more about desear than it is about encantar.
    Desear, huh? Hmm, I wouldn't say that. (I think I recall my Spanish teacher telling us that day about the difference between amar and encantar, so that may have been why I used that comparison :3)
    Maybe modify the first post and incorporate it into the rules instead of restarting the FFL?

    Apart from that, I'm in agreement with Astinus, Bay, and Jax on this. Partly from the way that Astinus explained it. I think that we need some sort of balance in between bold topics, fiction discussion, and general randomness. We can't be random and mad all the time I suppose.

    Also, what Astinus said is another reason why I sometimes take a long time in between posting here...

    That said, to bring back the conversation,
    What's your usual style of reviewing?
    Style referring to the format in which you do a full review.
    High-powered, concentrated snark.
     
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    JX Valentine

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    Textual backhanding time because I'm trying to advocate decent reviewing practices (which the forum seems to be in a desperate lack of, if anyone's read any of my recent rants).

    High-powered, concentrated snark.

    I hope you're kidding for the following reasons (and even if you are, the comment still pisses me off for the same reasons, sorry to say):

    1. Reviewing. You're doing it wrong. Please don't make me shove the entire first half of my guide down another throat. (Kids, about half of it isn't a pack of guidelines. It's how to avoid being a jack in a writing community. Unless your goal is to actually be a jack in a writing community; in which case, carry on.)

    2. Your sig says the FFL is full of intelligent, friendly writers. It might be a good idea to avoid any implication that you're being elitist here (by saying you snark all over the place in reviews) because there's a lot of people in the main forum who don't post in this thread and probably don't because of how hilariously closed-off it's been getting in recent months. Seriously, kids? You're focusing only on this thread. At some point in the FF&W's distant past, the FFL was meant to be a hang-out, yes, but the main portion of the community was in writers helping each other by reviewing and talking to reviewers/writers on their story threads. That's actually how a writing community works. I'm not sure when the FFL turned into a black hole where people don't branch out except the occasional headdeskery in the rest of the Writer's Lounge and to post in their own fics/their friends' fics, but frankly, my point is if you want to have a tea party, go to the DCC. If you want to actually have a community of writers, go out there and make a community of writers instead of twiddling your thumbs over "shenanigans" (and, incidentally, overabused memes =/= insanity) in one thread.

    Because, seriously, have some of you actually sat down to read what's going on in the main forum lately? We need decent reviewers. Ones who actually get why reviewers sit down and write a review.

    3. I've seen your reviews. (Or, well, review in the singular, considering I just went back and found out you deleted the one I was thinking of in particular, and you haven't really reviewed much after that.) "High-powered, concentrated snark" isn't the first term that would pop into mind if I went back and reread it. If you got vanilla-flavored fluff if you tried to distill snark into its concentrated form and if "high-powered" for such a concoction was the equivalent of a thimble full of 50% low-grade gasoline and 50% water, then I can definitely agree that your reviews are high-powered, concentrated snark.

    Yeah, see, that was sarcasm. Just in case you, you know, were trying to be completely and utterly serious when you said you give writers who probably need help more than snark some attitude. Just covering the bases here.

    Sorry, kids. I know I probably should leave because I've found other places to hang out (like Serebii my own board real life). It's just that I've spent a lot of time on PC, and this kind of thing has been pissing me off since last summer.

    Also...

    Buoysel said:
    What if we are gone for a couple of days? Am I allowed to answer/ talk about something form when I left or do I have to only talk about what is current?

    Honestly, I don't go over in the DCC (for reasons that should be apparent, given the above rant), so I don't know how it goes over there. However, I would assume that if the discussion trailed into a different topic thanks to the people who were hanging around while you were gone, back-pedaling through an entire conversation might make you miss the points that were made during that lovely transitional period. Either that, or if a completely new topic was started, chances are, people might not be that interested in the old one anymore. If you're about to make an earth-shattering point and/or coupled it with something about the existing topics to show that you're actually trying to keep up with the thread, I personally don't see what'd stop you, but the final decision's Asty's.
     
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    This thread has seriously overpowered this forum. Instead of saying "Come to the FFL, where we're fun/intelligent/whathaveyou", we should be advertising the section has a whole where people who have any interest in writing, no matter what the level is, can come here and oh say I don't know fit in?

    I've noticed that there always seems to be a cycle to things here. The Lounge gets started talking about writing; something goes random; people start relaxing more; the thread gets more random; people get pissed; the moderator gets an anxiety attack; the thread returns to writing discussions; repeat as needed.

    It's like I'm trying to do everything that I can to get this section to work. I love this section these days. But I'm going to be getting a full-time job soon. I don't have a lot of time to do what I want to in this section, which is review. (Heck, I still owe a review from early 2009.) Before, I would have claimed this section doomed, where the people who enter here want that review. The one that actually shows them that someone cares about their story as much as they do. Then I saw that people were getting those reviews at a constant rate, and I figured that others would help.

    But just as recently as a few days ago, someone wanted that kind of review and didn't get it.

    Solutions have been tossed around. Solutions have been tried and all were met with failure. Just to get reviews to authors. There's always the "review me, I'll review you" saying, but that doesn't work when there's nothing recent to review. And the reviews have to be good. You all said that something needed to be done for those quick one-liner "i lyk this" reviews. So I put the rule in, to make it official, link to a guide to help people figure out what constitutes a review for this section, and...nothing. I get the time to look around this section better than I could, and I see one-liner reviews going around and no reports for these reviews which are against the rules. Those people who used to review that well have left because of what this thread has done to this section.

    I guess what I'm trying to say is that I'm getting tired of people saying that there are problems but either not letting a person in charge know, or offering/doing anything about them. I mean, yes, there are problems. But hey, maybe if there's some actual effort tossed into things, this section would actually be a section instead of a thread.

    There seems to be some sort of nostalgia going around. A missing of the old days. And even though I have major difficulties forming emotional attachment to anything, I still have to admit that I miss the way the section used to be. The Lounge was a place for the writers/readers to relax as they took breaks from reviewing. But now, there's very few reviewers, and so people aren't posting their works, which makes this section look terribly dead.

    And the bold topics. Sorry, Mizan, but I remember that bold topic clearly, and that means that it appeared in the past month. Solovino took the time to go through the thread and write up the bold topic list, but it makes no difference. Yes, if there's no bold topic and no randomness allowed, then the Lounge seems dead. But that's okay. The Lounge can not have a new post for days. And who knows, maybe that means that the people who can't post because they have no idea what's going on in this thread can join in and bring some new sort of discussion and ideas here.

    And not all serious discussions have to turn into a wank bait. Which means that they can happen. Sure, people could turn things into wank by being triggering annoying people, but that doesn't have to happen. We can have some discussions here that are actually serious, and where the discussions aren't all in bold.

    The memes are getting tiring. The "Sentret with Flamethrowers" thing? Almost two years old. I know because I mentioned it about a fic I was writing back then. This is the Internet. Memes move fast. Come up with new ones and let the old ones go out in a blaze of glory before they get run into the ground.

    How're the awards going to work if no one is out there reading the stories posted? I'll say right now that I really and honestly don't have the time to review like I used to back when I was feared throughout another forum. And maybe others are the same. But for those that have the time, try a little? A small bit of effort that follows the rules and guidelines that are nicely pointed out to you?

    Look, this section is for fanfiction writing. Wanna talk games/books/anything else? There's a whole wide forum out there that has sections for each one of those. This forum was created for writing stories, posting them, and getting reviews, and getting advice needed for any part of that. But right now? Honestly, I wouldn't ask here for help needed for my fanfics, and that's saying something.

    Right now, I'm just really not happy with anyone. I've been tempted many times to close this thread so that its domination could end, but I've never done it because I've always had the belief that people could change this on your own. All I'm asking is that Fanfiction & Writing becomes a section again and not one single thread of the same people posting so quickly people are scared away.

    I also think all of this rage is built up from one book cover change.

    What if we are gone for a couple of days? Am I allowed to answer/ talk about something form when I left or do I have to only talk about what is current?
    If you missed something someone says and want to go "I agree!", then we can all do without that. If you missed something someone says and want to add something new, fresh, and exciting to the discussion that provides an interesting feature, post to your heart's desire.
     

    Misheard Whisper

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    I haven't reviewed for a while, exactly because my reviews started to turn into snark (or so I'm told.) Basically, I'm a sulky little kid who decided not to do something because he got snapped at for doing it wrong. Yeah, sue me. :(

    The last review I did, in particular, immediately got slammed by other reviewers of the fic in question as being unnecessarily rude and sarcastic, so I deleted it and haven't reviewed a single fanfic since.
     

    JX Valentine

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    So I put the rule in, to make it official, link to a guide to help people figure out what constitutes a review for this section, and...nothing. I get the time to look around this section better than I could, and I see one-liner reviews going around and no reports for these reviews which are against the rules. Those people who used to review that well have left because of what this thread has done to this section.

    I guess what I'm trying to say is that I'm getting tired of people saying that there are problems but either not letting a person in charge know, or offering/doing anything about them. I mean, yes, there are problems. But hey, maybe if there's some actual effort tossed into things, this section would actually be a section instead of a thread.

    First off, exactly and thank you.

    Second off, I've got a few ideas.

    One of these strategies is to close the FFL for awhile. Obviously, it's what might be causing part of the problem because people get so focused on only it that they forget an entire forum exists. Hence, you could try experimenting by leaving it closed for awhile. I was thinking a week might do it, but in order to get people to keep checking the forum, you'd probably need to make it a random time that's longer than a day or two. This forces people to take their private discussions (i.e., "craziness") to VMs or the DCC while giving people a reason to go look at something else for awhile. A result of this may be chasing most of the FFL regulars to the DCC or a similar thread (or even cause them to try to create a new FFL), but that's just a worst-case scenario. A more favorable result, hopefully, is that the FFL kids will get bored and end up on the main forum. I'm of course not saying you should close it forever. I'm just saying close it to give people more of a reason to stop hanging around the same place forever.

    If that happens, you might get reviewers, but because that's unlikely to happen on its own, there's a few things that need to occur first:

    1. The reviewer's guide needs to be consolidated and clarified. (Including a note that says a paragraph is okay as a review as long as it points out something specific about the fic.) The main points just need to be emphasized, and it needs to be clarified that a reviewer's job isn't to be funny or snarky.

    Incidentally, on the subject of reviewing, I honestly can't remember how snarky you got, MW, but I get the feeling it wasn't that bad and that you ran into groupies. Review again. If it turns out you were snarky or if you're afraid of being snarky, then err on the side of caution and use the "I'm here to help writers" line as a mantra. Think of puppies or something.

    Point is, if people miss the point of the guide, it clearly needs to be rewritten. (And I'm working on it in the spare moments I have, I assure you.) And then it needs to be shoved as far down the regulars' throats as possible before they're sent out. If we establish a standard for reviewing, people will try to conform to it. For example, Mizan's early reviews seemed to mirror my betaing, so it's clear to me that if you get a handful of regulars all reviewing in their own version of quality (that isn't littered with errors -- because research is godly, kids -- or full of snark), people will follow your example. Heck, for an off-site example, people emulated Yami Ryu on Serebii all the time, just because she was such a prominent reviewer. This is why there was a lot of drama, but the point is, if you give a mouse a good reviewer, the mouse will want to review the same way.

    2. We need to have either an incentive for reviewing or a connection between writers and reviewers. This tends to be more of a problem because there's only so much you can do without knowing how the community will react to it (i.e., ignore it or otherwise). I've considered a few possibilities, including:

    - Emblems that are handed out to quality reviewers. There's one for writers, after all.

    - A NaReWriMo (basically, NaNoWriMo for reviews) challenge. Maybe one that involves prizes such as emblems for participation. (I'm not sure what level of security you need in order to create emblems, so if it's out of the question, we can toss around other ideas for incentives. A banner to put in your signature to say you won the challenge, for example.)

    - A more open reviewer request thread. As in, the review exchange failed. I admit that, and I see it's because we didn't really have that many active writers in the FFL at the time. Hence, I'm thinking maybe there might be a place (maybe an entire usergroup to give people space to create profile threads where people can request reviews) where writers can come along, read a profile, and send requests to people they want to get to review their fic. Most people like talking about themselves (so a profile thread might be appealing), and I doubt many people will be able to resist a review request if the writer keeps pestering them about whether or not the review is getting done.

    Either way, this one's a vague concept. We can either do it like Serebii's review thread, or we can try something new with the usergroup/individual profile thread idea. Or someone else could try something that might help.

    So, yes, we're going to have to figure out a way to get the FFL to actually participate. Don't get me wrong. I understand that people are busy, but with all the time a lot of people spend in the FFL, you could be doing something like making friends with some of those writers out there and actually opening up the community as a whole. Devote your time to reaching out and helping everyone else instead of spamming a single thread, basically.

    And don't give me crap about "but it's fun for a few people." This is PC. We're supposed to be an open community. If this were a smaller forum, I might accept that, but we've got newbies in the main forum. They're part of the community too, so you might as well actually go in there and say hello or go find a new place to hang out. Like VMs.

    This forum was created for writing stories, posting them, and getting reviews, and getting advice needed for any part of that. But right now? Honestly, I wouldn't ask here for help needed for my fanfics, and that's saying something.

    Also bowing to your awesome power of saying things I couldn't figure out how to say.

    Seriously, though, this is exactly my point. It's all for teh lulz, I'm sure, but you guys just have to remember that this is a writing community. As such, the FFL isn't meant to stand alone as the home for one tiny group of people who don't do much in the main forum. (There's a couple of you who do, and more power to you for getting it. Seriously. However, I'm referring to the kids who actually don't do anything outside of the FFL and maybe their own fic threads.) It's meant to be a writing community. You know, a place for writers -- those people who post in threads in the main forum and those people who review threads and need help with creating their fics -- to come in and ask those little questions that wouldn't cover an entire thread by themselves. (Like "Hey, does anyone know what the word is for X concept?" or "Hey, how's this for a fic idea? Too cliche?")

    I honestly don't care if you want to keep a close-knit family, but that's what VMs are for, in all seriousness. You may want to try those if you really want to continue to share with the less than ten other people who make up the regulars of this thread updates about your game.

    Or, alternatively, you could try a usergroup. Or a private board of your own. Or the DCC/a more appropriate thread for that. Because, seriously, it's entirely possible to get a group of kids to migrate.

    インフェルノの津波 said:
    Reading Astinus's post makes me want to not post my FF character.

    Ironically, this is something you're supposed to be able to come to the FFL to do. Feel free, love. Not all of us bite, especially if it means helping someone else out.
     
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